Text Battle Archive: Evaze vs. J Sass

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Its time to face facts and take out todays trash
Cause even a third person would say that J'S Ass
And he'd struggle, I'm not a person he can strain past
So he'll get wiped out like he's in a hurricanes path

Could even go as far as leaving him with broken bars
Then this American will be dead on arrival like Bloody Omaha
It's your D-Day, and now you are my new victim
So I'll be leaving J.R. well done like his Barbecue Chicken

It's clear to me that you don't battle a lot
Thinking your bars are web addresses with them slashes and dots
You need to practice or stop, its a fact that you're soft
But your picture tells me you love flashing it off

Now you battle a vet, and you're.. average at best
I'm like Optimus, in my Prime brought back from the dead
So go by your name all you want, I'll laugh at your threats
Then make you change your name from Sass to respect

J-Sass...umm, your style doesn't really cut it here man...over here we prefer to use personals and punches...whereas your verse was more of an open-mic type, and most of your bars could have been used against any member ya kno? nice flow and rhymes and shiz, but, you really need to work on your content. check the tutorials and check other battles around here from the more experienced heads, you'll see what i mean. (the calibra bar made me laugh tho, ha)
Evaze...I was impressed man...you had quite a few misses in your verse but you have a lot of potential...you could be dope because your style suits that of this site. opener was ok, but you could have worded it better to make a more effective 'j's ass' punch. slashes and dots bar was dpoe, basically won this battle. nice rhymes and flow, it was a good read, keep it up and stay active...

evaze gmv

I don't have potential. I'm trying to find my illness once again. Lol. I still wonder if people actually get what I'm trying to say in the punchlines.

The 3rd and 4th bar were following on from the first punch. I'm not one of those people who just jumps from punch to punch. I like to link the punchlines together.

It was a joke sparta, seriously, get over it.