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Evaze 
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 Topic: Evaze vs. JoeyNicePosted: 26 June 2009 at 11:05pm |
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Evaze
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 8:11pm |
 <-- JoeyYou're still a learner you know, and your nervousness shows So I'll bring sugar and milk to get served with this Joe Burning my foes.. See I bring a murderous rate An start with you Avatar to wipe that smirk from your face And what I was goin' to do was expose your crew But according to their overview they don't even know of you Do you wonder why?.. Well by your battling it shows That you're the one family member, that's embarrassing to know Its such a picture, that's why you got the long wait Because it looks like your prom date has your moms face I'm usually cryptic, but lets forget the bar code thing Cause my punches have just broke Johnny Bravos chin |
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 9:08pm |
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lmfao @ you findin my pic.. good shit.. ima get at this later on
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Kay B
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Posted: 29 June 2009 at 11:03pm |
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I found ur pic ages ago when we battled i just couldnt think hwo to use it lol
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Fatal
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 12:19am |
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Lmao Joey, you look like Dane Cook...
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 12:32am |
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hahahahaha fuck you bastards... im writing this now.. keep an eye out ;)
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 30 June 2009 at 12:47am |
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comin at my mom bitch?... bad idea
hahhaa listeennnn Upppppppp Yu the type to feed off yourself so I knew yu were the faggish type Cuss noone gave a FUCK when you were boastin bout yur braggin rights!! I kneww from your first battle yu MUST be the whackest dude … Cause even in yur callout you asked for someone to crap on You!! We knewww it from when Calibra first said that you were tight.. But you claim your rusty and battle the worst noob on tha site!??? In tha past u wer played, ur verses keep me laughing for days Anddd like falling decorations im just Smashing A Vaze!!! (evaze) U barely past diapers, couldn’t touch my shit as my ass whiper And Yu KNOW ur drops r whack when newb’s think it’s a cypher!! Even with ur post count and the day u joined im laughin at you … (22, and the 22nd) Cause when it comes to Wins/KO’s you aint matchin them 2’s!!!!! chea.. |
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N8Ball
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Posted: 01 July 2009 at 5:25am |
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evaze was alright thru and thru... had some nice multis... but only one bar in the whole verse was a hard hitter...
Its such a picture, that's why you got the long wait Because it looks like your prom date has your moms face Joey had solid punches all the way thru and some pretty nasty personals... included me lol... the name play was nice and seem completly original and I liked the pun wit the whole you cant touch my shit... overall i feel its kinda one sided... joey came more consistant... not that evaze's verse was crap, just in compareson JN takes it... Vote: JoeyNIce |
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Look to the sky to try n find god in the clouds
hoping when he looks down i dont get lost in the crowd |
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 02 July 2009 at 7:29pm |
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thanks 4 tha vote...
bump.
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 05 July 2009 at 12:28am |
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bumpity..
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Cuba
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Posted: 05 July 2009 at 12:46am |
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Close battle...
Evaze - Very solid verse, liked how short you kept you lines....really helped the rhythm, liked your use of rhyme scheme, and most importantly you landed every punch personally and got a hit out of it...prom date/moms face was worded really sick, only one I didn't really like was the Johnny Bravo one, bit of a stretch....but I liked how you dissed him on the crew aspect, strong punches...only thing I think you lacked was an  factor to your punches, but they were all solid disses...was a strong opening gambitJoey - You had a bit more bite to your verse in the way you worded it, definitely more aggressive but I thought that while you landed punches some of your material was tenuous...i.e. crap on you (he asked for someone crap, and you then go on to diss him for it...was kind of a lame angle)...bragging rights was ok, but I actually liked his verse...so I guess what you're saying is that a newbie doesn't get much feedback? Go figure...tenuous...noob on the site line wasn't really worded as a punch, more a statement...I liked the a-vase one, even if the nameplay is a bit of a stretch, and the cypher punch was better...but why did you include the other one when you had this one? Closer was sick, much more focused...used a good personal tidbit and constructed a nice punch out of it... Overall...I thought it was close because of the way you both approached it, Evaze was less aggressive, focused on his rhyme scheme more than the punch...even though he had very strong personal information that he used to good effect...Joey on the flip side was more aggressive but had a few suspect punches, obviously you will struggle with info on a new guy, but that's no excuse for dodgy punches...when Joey landed a punch he hit hard though, but he didn't do it enough to bring it back from Evaze...who did some strong research and matched it with a nice writing style & constructed his lines well... Vote = Evaze |
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Fatal
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Posted: 05 July 2009 at 1:32am |
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Yea...
Evaze: First off lemme say that i like your style. I read your first battle against J sass and thought your style was dope and would fit in well on this site. Now for the verse, the opener was a big let down, it jus wasnt hard to me at all... avatar line was nice, ive seen this before but still was cool... crew punch was cool... good diss/ nice personal... family member punch is weak... nothing real hittin... LMFAO @ moms face punch... wow, best bar of the verse and great personal... worded great... closer was weak... i felt you focused too much on incorporating his looks into this verse and in turn it became repetitive... i would have jus dropped the "mom's face" punch on 'em and left it at that. I felt that the punches lacked variety...
JN: Opener was ok... i probably wouldnt have used this as a punch but you worked it as well as you could have, so props on that... crap on you punch coulda been DOPE but i dont like the way you used it. I woulda worked it like why if he's so good did he wanna battle someone crap (obviously word it waaay better lol but you get my drift) or something along those lines... Like if your dope, why are you callin out crap battlers? Woulda hit alot harder going something like that... Lol @ next bar... good wording, i personally dont think that he's the worst noob but still was worked well... smashing a vaze play was ok... if your were gonna use this play, i felt the wording was a tad simple... "falling decorations?" nah... you gotta come a lil more creative... lmao @ cypher line tho... dope... closer was ok... kind of a stretch...
Overall this was a real close battle... I think Evaze has a dope style that can go really far on this site... I felt he could have switched up his punches a bit better... He did, however, have the best bar of the battle, wit the mom's face personal... As for Joey, i think he still has to work on polishing his verses a little more and maybe work on the wording of some punches but the potential to be one of the top heads on this site are there. Ima go wit Joey as i think his punches were a bit more harder even if his verse wasnt as polished as Evaze's... dope battle...
Vote: JN
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 05 July 2009 at 7:02am |
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thx 4 tha voterz.. 2-1 me..
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Point Blank
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Posted: 20 July 2009 at 7:43pm |
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Evaze : First 4 lines flowed nicely and were very well written...however, there was no real punch in the opener, and the bar after is pretty much played by now. The crew bar was sick, well worded and a nice hit. The bar after that I weren't really feelin, it missed. LMAO @ The moms face bar, thats hilarious.Closer seemed too much of a stretch. Overall I think it was a tight verse, nicely worded verse with perfect rhymes and flow, however, some of the bars missed. Joey GMV |
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 24 July 2009 at 1:09am |
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thx for the votes.. 3-1 me.. uppin this
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rapdisup
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Posted: 24 July 2009 at 4:19pm |
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evaze-nice battle dude ya kept it all abit simple imo tho liked tha crew line an although sum didnt like ya closer i accually thought jonny bravo was funny i laughed as i saw his face on joeys in my head lmao haha wasnt bad consistent attemps at punching was a'ite
Joey- i like tha way you use more aggesion than tha next man everytime,was cool ya had sum funny punches an most were slightly more harder hitting than evazes,opener was funny lol an i liked tha cypher play was also coolio,however this was close an i hink joey jus took this purely bassed on one or two slightly harder hits cuda gone either way,defo wanna see evaze stay up! vote- Joey |
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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JoeyNice
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Posted: 24 July 2009 at 6:53pm |
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props for voting rap..
4-1 me i think this is over iduno
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Evaze
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Posted: 24 July 2009 at 8:15pm |
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Yeah just have the win.
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Posted: 15 August 2009 at 7:44pm |
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lol ^-sry bout that-^ Evaze - opener was a nice idea.. but could have hit harder if you would have worded it differently.. i.e. "I could easily serve this joe with just sugar and milk!" or something like that.. 2nd bar was a nice hit.. 3rd bar was pretty funny.. i don't know how true it is.. but if it is.. then its pretty effective.. 4th bar seems like a repeat of the 3rd.. but still came off pretty solid.. and funny.. 5th bar was pretty fire.. i liked that..nice personal.. is that really his mom or his prom date lol?? anyways.. 6th bar was ok.. lmfao @ jbravo chin.. but i don't see how it relates to him..
JNice - opener was ok.. concepts pretty played.. the whole no feedback thing is pretty old but to be honest that was a nice verse he dropped.. kinda sad it got slept on.. 2nd bar was kinda sad.. I have to side with Cuba about that.. 3rd bar.. was ok.. could have been used better.. 4th bar was a nice play.. hit pretty hard.. 5th bar was pretty gay.. you said yourself that he dropped a sick verse and you called n8ball an idiot for dropping a verse in his open mic.. then again you diss him about that.. sort of like you did in the 2nd bar.. closer was dope.. prolly the best bar of your verse..
overall this was pretty close.. both verses had its ups and downs.. but Evaze seemed to land more consistant/effective hits in my opinion.. JNice had some good ideas but didn't use them to the best of his skills.. not that I can fault him because he doesn't have to much info on a new guy.. but regardless of that fact Evaze came out with more of an upperhand due to his research.. his personals is what pretty much gave him the battle..
Vote - Evaze
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"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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Posted: 27 August 2009 at 5:46pm |
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Evaze... opening and closing bars missed for me... A couple of personals were good... but the middle paragraph was just one long, drawn-out punch...
JoeyNice... the closer was weak... Personals were good... but the nameplay was stretched... Vote: JoeyNice... Adios...  |
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