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 Topic: Manc Vs RighteousDeePosted: 03 June 2010 at 11:09pm |
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No less than 10 lines, no more than 16.
Crew and non-explained votes allowed. Hate/dick-riding votes not allowed. First to 3 for a KO or first to 5 for the win. No flipping-feeding. You drop first - & no specific time limit (within reason). Lets get it in! |
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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 11:12pm |
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this my check
if i dun drop tonight will be morning ! |
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RighteousDee™ ♫ σ f f ι c ι α ℓ ρ я σ f ι ℓ є..ⓜⓤⓣⓗⓐ ⓕⓤ©ⓚⓐ
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Manc
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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 11:22pm |
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No worries
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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 11:56pm |
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Let's bring it back to basics Show the world how manc's gettin wasted, treat his head line a bannana and make it split like oasis// ( manchester band ) THIS JUST IN!!!! manc no news with them simple blues clues against my tools, Ill disconnect yous from ya mamas shoes. Leave you dead as Casper so obviously your boos improve// ill lyrically demolish dude YOU A DUMB MUTHA'FCUKA! , a retard couldnt acknowledge you which leaves me no choice but to BEAT MANC LIKE HIS MAMA DO// i'll putcha neck on the line wit the knife or a mic & i am no myers! MANC! you couldnt come with heat spittin next to a blow dryer // im beating you & i know the truth cause honestly i dont know liars- PART FROM YOU !// So manc before you tell me to mind my p&qs like kano, and talk bout how much chrome you got and how u makin Play dough when the truth is, when final came his town got shook like a icelandic volcano ( roit in manchester) See manc you gotta be a blue or a red but this what im thinkinG( city - united) you can be both go purple and go watch barney and grow and imagination // shit i studied ya - locked it then thought would it be bad if i said you verses had more peroids than ya bitches pussy has had// my aims to have you in the casket lookin like a mannequin, unless you give up beain a bitch and start being a MAN again // shit its my durty to take out this lame groupie and his crew cuz look manc im a moddie dude complex like the rubix cube// shit i got so much durty on you that i could pant you in harvest and you couldnt be saved by the bell if this fukka was zack morris // This fukkin fool brainless, no barz you got will eva contain this, shit ill punch you so high ud think u was frank gallagher outa shamless///
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Posted: 03 June 2010 at 11:57pm |
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fuk it i dropped quick
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Manc
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Posted: 04 June 2010 at 12:25am |
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Yea man - nice and timely. I'm at work but Ima get on this right now
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Posted: 04 June 2010 at 12:25am |
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cool cool
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Posted: 05 June 2010 at 11:31pm |
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Okay, apologies for the fuck up the other day posting half a verse by mistake - and nice one to KayB for sorting it out
Lets get this done then......... Does this frenetic pathetic wretch expect to get respect from text hits? when in fact his raps lack substance like an Anorexics breakfast click the X and hit the exit, you're about to get 3 losses quick the way he dropped and flopped you'd think this Scottish kid was 'Rocky 6' you're knocked for six, watch this bitch, a K.O from one round bouncing ya jaws! you couldn't punch with more hands than a 1000 strong crowd round of applause I'm astoundingly raw, you're the clown we abhor, the lamest new rapper easy to drive away but cunt look nice on a track if his name was 'Schumacher I seen them MySpace pics BG posted, that podgy face and big nose, Question is: Am I fighting RIGHTEOUS? or am I facing THIS ROGUE? >  but it's mad you choosing to see me, result? you add to the loosing streak so like that bomb in Glasgow Airport - I've had a 'blast defusing Dee! One little expo - Flip the letters round in RIGHTEOUS and it spells THIS ROGUE. |
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Manc
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 1:22am |
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Can we get some votes on this please peeps?
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 1:31am |
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nice drop uppin
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 4:04am |
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RD, Let's bring it back to basics
Show the world how manc's gettin wasted,
treat his head line a bannana and make it split like oasis// ( manchester band )
Ehhh, I dont know about that THIS JUST IN!!!! manc no news with them simple blues clues against my
tools, Ill disconnect yous from ya mamas shoes. Leave you dead as Casper so obviously
your boos improve//
These first 2 bars seem like your trying to force your multis. Maybe you should stick more to the punch, Also the format is fucking it up. 2 lines is 1 bar.
ill lyrically demolish dude
YOU A DUMB MUTHA'FCUKA! , a retard couldnt acknowledge you
which leaves me no choice but to BEAT MANC LIKE HIS MAMA DO//
Ehh, that was real simple. Them beat your ass like your moma does punches are played. Trust me, I tried and it dont work. i'll putcha neck on the line wit the knife or a mic & i am no myers!
MANC! you couldnt come with heat spittin next to a blow dryer //
im beating you & i know the truth cause honestly i dont know liars- PART FROM YOU !//
This here had a little bit of potential, but sorry homey, it just missed. Im trying to be as positive as possible here, cause I can see that you gonna get your shit together soon and be doing mothafuckas in.
Just for the record, this is how your bars should look;
i'll putcha neck on the line wit the knife or a mic & i am no myers!
MANC! you couldnt come with heat spittin next to a blow dryer //
Just that will do for a bar, 2 short lines. The rest of the shit is unnecessary.
So manc before you tell me to mind my p&qs like kano,
and talk bout how much chrome you got and how u makin Play dough
when the truth is, when final came his town got shook like a icelandic volcano ( roit in manchester)
Wasn't a direct hit, had the potential, but shoulda been worded differently. See manc you gotta be a blue or a red but this what im thinkinG( city - united)
you can be both go purple and go watch barney and grow and imagination //
Ehhh, still aint hittin hard homey. But this is a bar, unlike the rest of your verse above. shit i studied ya - locked it then thought would it be bad
if i said you verses had more peroids than ya bitches pussy has had//
That was alright. Thats what somebody might call a soft jab, which could be the bar that wins a close battle. So, that was a soft jab. my aims to have you in the casket lookin like a mannequin,
unless you give up beain a bitch and start being a MAN again //
Another soft punch. But I think it was backwards. In other words, the set up should have been the punch, and the punch should have been the set up. shit its my durty to take out this lame groupie and his crew
cuz look manc im a moddie dude complex like the rubix cube//
That was O.K, but not at all a punch. Remember, punches is whats gonna win a battle. Then the rest of the shit basically helps decide close battles. shit i got so much durty on you that i could pant you in harvest
and you couldnt be saved by the bell if this fukka was zack morris //
That was another soft jab, but remember who your talkin to. The first line and the beginning of the second line your talkin str8 to Manc, but at the end of the secong line, you get mixed up and start talking to the reader. This fukkin brainless, no barz you got will eva contain this,
shit ill punch fool you so high ud think u was frank gallagher outa shamless///
Firstly, you should leave expos for this type of shit. Not everybody knows who this dude is or seen this movie. But still, a very soft punch. Especially for the closer. Remember, the closer has to be real strong!
OK Manc
Does this frenetic pathetic wretch expect to get respect from text hits? Clever lil jab
click the X and hit the exit, you're about to get 3 losses quick
Lol, nice set up and punch you're knocked for six, watch this bitch, a K.O from one round bouncing ya jaws! a lil stretched, but a nice set up followed by a light jab I'm astoundingly raw, you're the clown we abhor, the lamest new rapper Maybe you should included that in expos, cos the punch went right over my head.
I seen them MySpace pics BG posted, that podgy face and big nose, Pritty clever nameplay, but I dont think it was as damaging as you thought it might be
but it's mad you choosing to see me, result? you add to the loosing streak Lol, Nice closer, good set up and O.K punch O.K, RD, your verse was alright, You know, I already explained how I felt about it in the breakdown. Manc, good shit. A couple hits I didn't understand, but overall it was a very effective verse.Manc your punches won the battle. But both yall had some good flow and multis.
Keep doing yalls thing.
MVGT=Manc
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 5:10am |
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Appreciate the vote and feed BG. (That expo ya wanted - Michael Schumacher is a champion Formula 1 racing driver...so thats the connection to "easy to drive away but cunt look nice on a track if his name was Schumacher", track as in the race track).
Nice one for that BG 1 - 0 Manc |
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 5:13am |
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lol, yea, I get it now. My bad homey, I dont stay up wit the racing.
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 5:55am |
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allgood i see you
manc 1v0
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 9:45pm |
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Any more votes please?
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 11:02pm |
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righteous dee i was feeln you at first but the flow and multi's manc was spittin was hittin hard so mvgt manc good shyt da both of ya'll |
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Posted: 06 June 2010 at 11:55pm |
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Safe T.R.U.E! - Appreciate the vote kid
Manc 2-0 |
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Posted: 07 June 2010 at 12:10am |
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2 zip
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Posted: 07 June 2010 at 1:02am |
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Dee-
Let's bring it back to basics Show the world how manc's gettin wasted, treat his head line a bannana and make it split like oasis// ( manchester band ) Gahhh....I dunno....clever line I guess but bananna split? THIS JUST IN!!!! manc no news with them simple blues clues against my tools, Ill disconnect yous from ya mamas shoes. Leave you dead as Casper so obviously your boos improve// Worded completely sloppy ...and disconnect you from your mamas shoes?....*sniff* Yall smell that kettle corn? ill lyrically demolish dude YOU A DUMB MUTHA'FCUKA! , a retard couldnt acknowledge you which leaves me no choice but to BEAT MANC LIKE HIS MAMA DO// a retard? a retard aknowledge you.......Like his mama do?....Geezuss!! i'll putcha neck on the line wit the knife or a mic & i am no myers! MANC! you couldnt come with heat spittin next to a blow dryer // Naw!! im beating you & i know the truth cause honestly i dont know liars- PART FROM YOU !// So manc before you tell me to mind my p&qs like kano, and talk bout how much chrome you got and how u makin Play dough ehhh.....on the verge of ok when the truth is, when final came his town got shook like a icelandic volcano ( roit in manchester) Naw!! See manc you gotta be a blue or a red but this what im thinkinG( city - united) you can be both go purple and go watch barney and grow and imagination // Ptuuuu! Srry....just a bit of burnt popcorn in my throat shit i studied ya - locked it then thought would it be bad if i said you verses had more peroids than ya bitches pussy has had// ahhh.....ahhhh....ahhchoooo! *sniff* Geezuss! My bad....wack allergies...you know my aims to have you in the casket lookin like a mannequin, unless you give up beain a bitch and start being a MAN again // Nope! shit its my durty to take out this lame groupie and his crew cuz look manc im a moddie dude complex like the rubix cube// moddie? What the fuck is a moddie dude? *slap!!* stop it!! just Stop it!! shit i got so much durty on you that i could pant you in harvest and you couldnt be saved by the bell if this fukka was zack morris // you know what it is?.....you just have to proof read your bars my brotha and stop rushing this stuff just cuz it flows good. This fukkin fool brainless, no barz you got will eva contain this, shit ill punch you so high ud think u was frank gallagher outa shamless/// I'll Punch you so High??? Dammit!! WTF is wrong with you? You need to goto the corner for time out!! Manc- Does this frenetic pathetic wretch expect to get respect from text hits? when in fact his raps lack substance like an Anorexics breakfast ok click the X and hit the exit, you're about to get 3 losses quick the way he dropped and flopped you'd think this Scottish kid was 'Rocky 6' eh you're knocked for six, watch this bitch, a K.O from one round bouncing ya jaws! you couldn't punch with more hands than a 1000 strong crowd round of applause ok just ok I'm astoundingly raw, you're the clown we abhor, the lamest new rapper easy to drive away but cunt look nice on a track if his name was 'Schumacher Naw I seen them MySpace pics BG posted, that podgy face and big nose, Question is: Am I fighting RIGHTEOUS? or am I facing THIS ROGUE? > I dunno but it's mad you choosing to see me, result? you add to the loosing streak so like that bomb in Glasgow Airport - I've had a 'blast defusing Dee! ok Overall RDee that was terrible and I wanna grab you by your shirt and force you to tell me what you were thinking...lol.J/K....But really cuzzin....you gotta stop and reread to make sure shit fits into pocket instead of just scribbling a whole lot of cornball love into your verses. Manc...I have seen alot better...but as for now you have catswept this guy and taken this easy. V-Manc |
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Posted: 07 June 2010 at 1:07am |
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Appreciate that Que
 Nice one for the battle RIGHTEOUS. That's 3-0 KO to me. This can be closed now whenever if ya don't mind  |
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