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$n00z 
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 Topic: Cuba-vs-$noozPosted: 12 June 2010 at 2:02pm |
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had a lil time so said fuck it why not go head an set it up. i'll go first 16 lines
Edited by Kay B - 12 June 2010 at 4:18pm |
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$n00z
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Posted: 12 June 2010 at 4:12pm |
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'Cubism's' the right nickname cause I'm bout to 'break you apart' bitch
And 'puttin CRAP together better than others 'don't make you an 'artist' Even if you on ya 'gaurde' like 'Avant' , in a battle I'd 'Break ya back' Leave you 'assed out' for the win like you get paid to take off that Yall gotta King. You the queen. Jehu tell him "bow down! Pay his regards!" He's ya boss. 'Tells YOU when to attack'. What? You a ' yugioh card'??? You 'aint fucking awesome'. Ya 'hands' always stay on ya 'board'* God of this. So play dis shit like 'athiest' & 'stay away from the lord' 'Cuba' battlin me aint a 'great place' to be, even witcha cheer crew out U got 'no bars'. Hire 'Verizon', we still dont wanna 'hear you now' You write rhymes but cant spit em. I heard ya audios wack No BS. He dropped on a track and took a loss when he rapped 'Bruce Lee' avatar. But really he cant actually 'kick hard' flow 'Dog' think ya 'sick'? This 'vet' will fix him like he stricken wit 'parvo' 'Cuba' aint 'Good-in' any situation except 'fakin n actin' Got 'choppy lines', an sloppy rhymes. So now ya rank i'll be 'passin' -------------------------- *whackin off/dick aka board (keyboard)/he got over 6000 posts |
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Cuba
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Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 13 June 2010 at 1:24am |
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You’re the definition of an easy win with your tactical garbage First time I ever schooled a clown BEFORE the battle has started I throw the blows flagrant to make the overdose blatant On life support and would let it go if you’re really astute And stick to your dreams of gay stardom and “media groups” I could British burst like Petroleum, deep, in the zone to erupt So when I spill my slick, trust, this American’s flow’ll get fucked And ya whole coast line’ll get rattled from hard shocks Plus I’m breaking Snooz routinely worse than alarm clocks I’m a metaphor master, bringing prophecies so listen... You’ll never win a battle with more apostrophes than disses And you’ll never gain a rep collecting L’s from the bosses In fact your last call out getting ignored saved you several losses So don’t be stupid, your flow’s translucent but dense That means I see through it, now buzz off and Google yaself
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 13 June 2010 at 2:47am |
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To be quite honest, I liked both verses.
Both had a good amunt of personals and a few punches.
Alot of links though, I think that took some away from both yall.
The links got annoying after a while, but I cant hate because I've done it before.
There were 2 bars in this battle that would have called the winner, those are;
Snooz:
You 'aint fucking awesome'. Ya 'hands' always stay on ya 'board'*
God of this. So play dis shit like 'athiest' & 'stay away from the lord' and
Cuba:
And you’ll never gain a rep collecting L’s from the bosses
In fact your last call out getting ignored saved you several losses,
and both had good openers.
I think that this battle came down to the closer.
The reason it boiled down to that in my opinion is because I had to find the one flaw that decided this battle.
So....
Snooz:'Cuba' aint 'Good-in' any situation except 'fakin n actin'
Got 'choppy lines', an sloppy rhymes. So now ya rank i'll be 'passin' Not the most effective closer but it definitely worked.
Cuba:
So don’t be stupid, your flow’s translucent but dense
That means I see through it, now buzz off and Google yaself
Looked like ya got lazy here not realising that this battle may come down to the closer.
But it did, and Cubas closer was not effective especially because it didn't rhyme at all. ..........................................................................................................................................................
I know that Cuba may feel like I voted for Snooz for other reasons.
I also know that Snooz may have felt like I voted for Cuba for other reasons.
Seeing that if I voted for Snooz Cuba may think, 'Fuck that, yalls bout to be on the same crew', and if I voted for Cuba Snooz may think, 'Well since were about to be on the same crew you voted for Cuba cause ya thought people would say you was pickin favs if ya would have voted for me'.
But honestly yall,
I keep it real and I only read the verses and voted accordingly.
So....with that being said,
because it was a very good battle and was fairly equal, it came down to the closer.
Therefore,
MVGT: Snooz
Take it or leave it
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Fatal
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Posted: 17 June 2010 at 12:34am |
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Cuba wrecked you, dude. Dont have time for a breakdown, take it or leave it.
Basically, Cuba had the better executed verse with the harder hitting punches. Had good mix of wordplay and personals. The "last callout" line was fuckin killer. snooz, keep working man, you need to work on incorporating witty, relevant wordplay and hard hitting personals better. Alot of your ideas arent bad, they jus sometimes arent worked very well. Keep up dude.
Vote: IceCuba
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Goddius
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Posted: 20 June 2010 at 4:26am |
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best battle i've seen since i've been on the site pretty good from the both of you it was really close
Wordplay: = Personals Lines: Cuba Punches: = Creativity: = Flow: Snooz Overall: Snooz - very close battle but snooz was a little more consistence threw out cuba was damn good but lacked in just a couple of spots enough to let snooz just edge it out real close battle though could've went either way |
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Kay B
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Posted: 20 June 2010 at 5:14pm |
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Goddius explain it or it dont count
Though i dont agree with BG's vote it may be his opinion and he explained it... Anyway, like fatal said this was a one sided battle and class really showed Cuba had the better overally verse imo and had alot better and harder hitting punches....as i said pretty one sided Vote - cuba 2-1 cuba (unless the other vote is explained) |
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TURTLE
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Posted: 20 June 2010 at 11:59pm |
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Hmm.. I was entertained by both yalls verse but I was feelin Snoozs verse a bit more over Cubas. I thought his Bruce Lee line is what won it for him, I didnt like how Cuba closed his battle, kinda forced to me. I aint sayin he sucked because Iv read a lot of his drops and hes hella good, I actually had him winning this battle when I saw this was set up. None the less....
SnooZ - GMV. |
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Calibra
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Posted: 21 June 2010 at 7:24pm |
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Can't nobody drip good votes anymore? You got Kay complaining about
votes then dropping a weak one himself. Set an example dude.
Anyway, this was a cool battle, strange match up but I think both delivered good verses. $n00z - You had some good punches here man, you did have a couple played/generic concepts though like the poker line and especially the vet line, that shit's been done to death. Your artist line was decent, as was the atheist line and your audio punch was a cool personal too. I think it was Fatal that said you need to incorperate more personals into your verses, I agree with him on that, you have a lot of lines that could be used against anyone, I personally feel the lines that hit the hardest are ones specific to who you're battling. But overall I'd say you had a good verse, coming harder than I expected if I'm honest. Cuba - Standard Cuba verse here, very witty, relevant lines. Always like your world news references. BP line was good, alarm clocks was played to me. Loved the scheme and the punchline on the New Era bar, nicely done and the apostophies line made me laugh. Nothing too mind blowing from you but I felt like you came really solid, hit with every bar even though I felt one was a bit played. Nice to see you battling again. Overall - I think Cuba took it, but I really don't think it was as one-sided as a lot of people are making it out to be. I though $n00z gave a good showing of himself and given the fact he was battling the Text Champ didn't do all that bad, against a lesser opponent he may have gotten a win here. Cuba did more than enough to take this for me though. Good battle guys. Vote - Cuba |
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J504
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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 2:44pm |
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I agree with what Goddius said for the most part. I think Cuba did a bit of a better job with the personal attacks but the last line just killed the momentum (I think it was a very weak ender). A killer punch at the end could've sealed the deal for Cuba, for me that ending was such a sour note to a decent battle and when you're going after somebody in a battle you need to end strong as that's the very last punch of the fight and what people will remember most!
It was close as Goddius already mentioned, but I feel that there's an edge here....
W= $n00z
That's keeping it real, take it or leave it!
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Alcatraz
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 9:12am |
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been M.I.A for a min.. got sum time might as well drop sum votes...... with that said... SNOOZ 'Cubism's' the right nickname cause I'm bout to 'break you apart' bitch And 'puttin CRAP together better than others 'don't make you an 'artist' Decent opener but coulda been more creative and worded better (did u jus google cubism) 7/10 Even if you on ya 'gaurde' like 'Avant' , in a battle I'd 'Break ya back' Leave you 'assed out' for the win like you get paid to take off that ok 6/10 Yall gotta King. You the queen. Jehu tell him "bow down! Pay his regards!" He's ya boss. 'Tells YOU when to attack'. What? You a ' yugioh card'??? First line seems longer than second which kinda through off the flow & didnt like yugioh ref. 5/10 You 'aint fucking awesome'. Ya 'hands' always stay on ya 'board'* God of this. So play dis shit like 'athiest' & 'stay away from the lord' Alright bar 7/10 'Cuba' battlin me aint a 'great place' to be, even witcha cheer crew out U got 'no bars'. Hire 'Verizon', we still dont wanna 'hear you now' worded better this coulda been way better imo 6/10 You write rhymes but cant spit em. I heard ya audios wack No BS. He dropped on a track and took a loss when he rapped weak 5/10 'Bruce Lee' avatar. But really he cant actually 'kick hard' flow 'Dog' think ya 'sick'? This 'vet' will fix him like he stricken wit 'parvo' Your best bar. nice punch 8/10 'Cuba' aint 'Good-in' any situation except 'fakin n actin' Got 'choppy lines', an sloppy rhymes. So now ya rank i'll be 'passin' weak closer 6/10 Overall 50/80 CUBA You’re the definition of an easy win with your tactical garbage First time I ever schooled a clown BEFORE the battle has started okay opener slighter better because of the personal 7/10 I throw the blows flagrant to make the overdose blatant Fuck a snooz, New Era left this bitch a comatose patient one of my favorites, Good punch 8/10 On life support and would let it go if you’re really astute And stick to your dreams of gay stardom and “media groups” decent personal 6/10 I could British burst like Petroleum, deep, in the zone to erupt So when I spill my slick, trust, this American’s flow’ll get fucked Good Personal with a Nice punch, 9/10 And ya whole coast line’ll get rattled from hard shocks Plus I’m breaking Snooz routinely worse than alarm clocks alright diss 6/10 I’m a metaphor master, bringing prophecies so listen... You’ll never win a battle with more apostrophes than disses i liked this one funny 8/10 And you’ll never gain a rep collecting L’s from the bosses In fact your last call out getting ignored saved you several losses okay 6/10 So don’t be stupid, your flow’s translucent but dense That means I see through it, now buzz off and Google yaself Kinda threw me off a bit but ok....bar coulda been better for a closer thou 6/10 Overall 56/80 Flow - cuba (snoozs longer lines threw it off for me) Creativity - snooz (good creativity from both but i feel snooz took it) Personals - Cuba (more hard hitting personals) Punches - Cuba (same as above) Broke it dwn in a couple ways for yall cuz i see yall arguin bout the votes.. snooz your verse was good but ive seen way better from both of you. MVGT - Cuba for harder punches, better personals and a better overall verse imo. |
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Kay B
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 10:38am |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 5:39pm |
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Pretty one sided battle here.
Sn00z - a decent battle verse. A lot of nice rhymes, nice multis, and clever rhyme schemes, but you're not really filling the bar out with punches by doing that. Opener was pretty sweet, probably the best bar in your verse, but after that... you seem to force the issue way too much. You're looking for personals that just aren't there. Banging together anything that has even the smallest relevance to Cuba. Also don't understand why you have put apostrophes around a lot of your shit. I mean yeah, some of it is there, but some of it isn't. And also, can you not have a little respect for the members on the site, and accept the fact that they would pick up on the pretty poor wordplay you've put into your verse? Overall, this verse was pretty weak, flow / multis aside. Just lacks any real punches, any real creativity, and the abundance of apostrophies that are pointless, piss me off a little. Cuba - pretty decent verse. First time in a long time I've seen flow like that form you in a battle. Nice rhymes, few wayward punches, the closer and alarm clocks line most notable, but other than those, the verse was filled with nice bars, solid hits, and nice wordplay. Apostrophes bar was nice, spill my slick bar was nice. Easy decision here. Cuba GMV.
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Stalin
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 8:15pm |
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Cuba was the first one to reach 3 votes, he takes it
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$n00z
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Posted: 26 June 2010 at 6:25am |
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Stalin BULLSHIT!! I dont know what kinda coutin yall doin but I reached 3 votes first so I win
BALLGAME
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$n00z
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Posted: 26 June 2010 at 6:26am |
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matter fact Turtle's vote was the last one that counted. I asked Cube if he had a prollem an he aint say nothin so thats a wrap. HE asked for crew votes to vount so that aint my problem
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BIG GAME
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Posted: 26 June 2010 at 6:47am |
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Lookie there,
I didn't even see that till ya just pointed it out.
Good job Snooz!
Good to see somebody layin it on these big headed bastards.
Trying to give mothafucken Cuba the win like that.
I SWEAR these mothafuckas have been shisty since my first
fucken day here!
All these 'so called mothafucken Vets' are fucken fakes!
They got their records from fucken friendly crew votes.
They've been lying for so fucken long that they all have it down pat.
Gettin away with the bullshit that they have.....SMH........that shit is just FUCKED UP!
Fucken bitches!
AYE YOU MOTHAFUCKEN CORNY ASS WANNA BE VETS......
YOUR DAYS ARE OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S...before all you sad lil bitches come out the wood work talkin your fake ass,
sarcastic, full of lies and nonsense bullshit.
Before ya even do..............................
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FUCK YOU![[size]
Good job Snooz!
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-Orion-
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Posted: 26 June 2010 at 1:56pm |
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What?
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 26 June 2010 at 1:58pm |
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I think you'll find Cuba made it to 3 votes first, as Goddius didn't explain his vote well enough, and was requested to re vote. He didn't Therefore, 3-2 Cuba.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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$n00z
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Posted: 27 June 2010 at 11:35pm |
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An I'LL think YOU'LL find that neither did Fatal. They both did bout the same thing. ALSO in our battle call out thread YOU'LL find that it said any FAIR vote (another rule HE changed to). NOT explained. But I aint bout to sit here an argue about some real pussy shit (an I NEVER have arguead about a vote before). Cant believe grown ass men are ridin another mans dick that hard. I bet Cuba never loses a girlfriend cause obviously he got some bomb ass dick or somethin. But I aint bout to lose over some blatant OBVIOUS dickridin. Shit how many times have I voted against big game??? If him or any other nigga Im cool wit drop some sub par shit and the other man does better I'm voting for the best verse. When I dropped my shit I KNEW i had a tuff verse to beat. An "I" know I did good. Cuba did good too but I HONESTLY think I had the better verse. But to top it off, I go get married and come back from my honeymoon to THIS bullshit?!?!? I swear yall some lames if its goin down like that. I done heard, read, and SEEN yall do TOO MUCH fake ass, punk ass, questionable shit. An yall aint bout to do it to me. SO wit that said if yall really bout to get down like that then let the man have the win. I dont NEED this site or any other. Yall can have this shit. what the fuck ever
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