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Matt The Ripper 
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 Topic: Death Is Here [feat. CHAIN]Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:02am |
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[ CHAIN ]
Eroticizing death, the pinnacle of artistry Word to the talent that is swimming in my arteries Forming dark clouds that sprinkle snow on autumn leaves Icing those that fell off, the little hoes I R.I.P’d Graveyard shift-ing with sinners that don’t fall asleep Walking ‘em to hell while winnin’ mo’ than Charlie Sheen Seeing heaven clearly, bringing wooden boxes in Leave ‘em like the 7 series that Suge and Pac was in Opera singers hitting notes make your souls lean back I’m the black Casey Jones but with a Scream mask Hockey stick? heck no, me? I prefer the scythe Ink on the blade and these are the words I write On the wrinkled pages of my book of tombs Dining with Eva Braun and some of Tookie’s goons This ongoing cycle of my deeds ain’t nouveau The situation’s grim, you shall reap what you sow [ MATT ]
You'll get burried deep in a hole if you beef wit us, ho Y'all lucky Winter's over or you'd lose ya teeth in the snow Y'all decent at most, but ya written pieces are jokes We sleepin on those who give us reason to boast Now leave us alone or get beat up n broke You divas can choke on the weed that we smoke Atleast we as dope as we claim to be, as dope as you can plainly see Some jus came to beef, but we all know these weak fucks ain't some beasts Basically they ain't as G as CHAIN or me, they rock some insane beliefs These aimless fiends are mainly weak n the mos inane wit schemes We remainin Kings we came to bring the pain we aimin heat Blatantly hate on these fake emcee's remainin weak Y'all on some make believe theme, that shit we can't believe in Fiction ain't vicious, quit lyin bout bein ill, you don't even seem sick I'm the meanest, I mean it, I'm mean wit the key's kid I can be weeded, on E, cid n it ain't til i'm on L.A. til I start to... see shit Death is here Now go pray to Jesus! |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Kosmosis
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:57pm |
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although i am not usually a fan of the e-thug swag, this was decent. chain not the best i have seen from you, but props for rhyming nouveau! matt...well played! thanks! |
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J504
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:26pm |
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Chain - like the references especially Casey Jones & Eva Braun, very unique. Nice on the wording and flow as well.
Matt - You keep elevating your game and I see you stepping up on this one as well. Good flow and nice use of multis. Really like the "teeth in the snow" line, that was nice
This was a nice collab, yall both did your thing and worked well together on it. Stay up.
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:32pm |
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Thanks for the feedback, I will return the feed once I get home from work.
Peace |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:53pm |
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matt, you killed it, really turned it up, freeda would've been proud, lol
thnx for the feed ppl ps: what e-thug swag? i was portraying the grim reaper and matt's dropped a battle verse |
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 8:51am |
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Hahaaa thanks, CHAIN, my man!
Good lookin out 1 |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Madeye
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:19pm |
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*raisedBrow*
Okay... CHAIN's verse has it's flair on it's own, as well as Matt's.
We all know of CHAIN's rep and ability as it's stood for some time now... getting tighter as it should.
While obviously no themed-connection is apparent... I found both verse enjoyable
from start-to-Finish.
Matt, dude... That's some nice mutlies-Flow and wording formulation, bruh'.
Nice to see you REALLy shaping up.
I've remained as dedicated to my craft here as possible (I slip-off regularily)... and, to
see you throw out a verse like that... I was impressed a lot compared to your drops
just a week or two ago.
A big difference, here, man. Fa'sho.
Props to both.
Just wanted to emphasise that for Matt, as we go back a little sooner than our registrations here.
Keep that momentum flowing, dawgs.
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:23pm |
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That's a good look, Mad
This was supposed to be a piece based on end of L.A. and we were the reapers here for the remaining souls before it's great collapse, but it's still here. haha. I just had nothing on the topic in the moment so I went in and did my thing. I got my Sinatra on n did it my way. I'm just glad everyone's digging it! haha |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:17am |
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Annnnd... one bump before I drop another gem on y'all =P
Keep the positivity coming, please! lol It's really nice to see y'all believe i've been uppin my game, cause it ain't hard to see... =P |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 9:42pm |
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nice read...
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I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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