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Smoothtung 
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 Topic: P$¥€|-|@<|£|i€$Posted: 08 April 2013 at 2:48am |
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 Stay up.. we like our shit fame resistant. Ex and I write scripts sedated in vacant prisons.. ..brainwaves in matrix prisms.. we levitate in deep space and meditate to sacred visions. ..and face 8 devisions of ancient rhyme wizzards.. raid training villages re-painting lymne pillars.. Ay ven.. to ours who's frames are fuckin' challenging? we were bound in caves then taken under an ancient dragons wing! We entice the finger.. some 'bird snatchers'.. ya'll get beaten up by a couple saloon locals. When scotty keys up and locks in our crew-code-you'll, 'Flock' when-we-drop and get-'caught', in-a-'box' ..with the view totals. Im ..fly.. like that. Ven and I ride like that.. Psychedelic phsycos write rhymes in cyanide labs. Bite the shine off a biotite slab and snipe a plane in flight through the night with an isomer dynamite blast! Knife your wife in a fireside rap.. Key the code in the bomb strapped to a tire rim on her Cadillac.. Kick back and spit to the silent stars.. With ex tripping sack and ven in the tent skinning Kiser's arm! We're psychotic cyborg life forms in skyward light orbs 5 guide and hide inside my corpse. ..we.. raid your 'screens' like Rucker park.. It's.. 'screen-play' for weak-days we're-'game' when others aren't. . ..we're.. on the freeway on our speedway shit.. grease-spray and street-clay while we-pray the jeep-frame don't come apart! Edited by Smoothtung - 08 April 2013 at 3:31am |
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IZIAH
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 2:56am |
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nice shit smooth, when is the crew gonna be up an running? like when is it gonna be on the crew page? but anyway the bird snatchers line cought my eye.. actually the WHOLE PIECE cought my eye!!! keep it up bro, your on fire!
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~Insight The Inspired~
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:04am |
 That bar even plays off the bird snatchers concept you like aha But thanks dtk |
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IZIAH
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:05am |
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yo', this is IZIAH bro, not dress lol
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:08am |
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Come onnn bro now I can't edit it away. aHa sorry iz
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IZIAH
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 3:12am |
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no prob
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 1:24pm |
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ZZZzzzzz ZZZZzzzzz
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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 10:34pm |
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He may not be Dress, but I am..haha
Great stuff Smooth, reminds me of Exoduzts style actually with your own twist of course. It's great seeing you dropping different types of verses. It really shows the diversity of your skills..I really enjoyed this |
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The original comeback kid
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:11pm |
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Haha
Thanks bud |
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 9:15pm |
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“we entice the finger...with the view totals“ <<this set was
 And those last 2 bars were just  yessir. Ill concept too. |
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 4:01am |
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This was bonkers, I loved it. Subject matter, presentation, rhyme scheme, I enjoyed it all. I'm not sure if this was collab or what, I'm quite stoned at the moment, but I really enjoyed this piece from beginning to end. After reading it once and not looking back, the dragons wing bar really stood out to me, thought the concept of that line and the imagery I got from it were enjoyable. If you're still down to collab, we should organize something.
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Smoothtung
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:07pm |
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Hahah chain.
Ay thanks guys, huge ups to both of you, |
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:33pm |
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This is dope, you know it is.
But those first 2 bars.. Fuck man.. How you expect us to follow shit like that?! The best opener to an Open i've seen in quite a while if i'm being honest. Stay doing whatcha doing man.
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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:53pm |
 Aha hey good looks mista Lindley |
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