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    Posted: 04 February 2015 at 12:00am
They tell me i ain't well rounded but it ain't hittin home,
Cuz I Don't need all the tools when i'm rocking fists of stone,,
Blessed with skills, switched my style up now they expecting kills,
No surprise those who tried Rut, now bodies piled up reflecting hills
Best is ill, I danced with the devil just to advance my rhythm,
Dropping so many bars wardens be like" You'd enhance our prisons!"
L.A Wit there crooked frowns looking down on what Best did,
Fact is if i spit any sharper I'll give myself a fuckin cleft lip,
That rhyme was hazardous! My left and rights a double act,
Leave them on deaths door and they too far gone to double back,
Couple claps, but audiences don't applaud my carousel of battle hits,
Blastin kids, wit a verse no web search could find parallel narratives,
Been practicing, dancing to the beat of a mad mans inner ramblings,
Channeling Mansons passion through my brash sinful handlings,
Savaging the limbs of victims before they even know whats happening
Carrying the burden of earth shattering words that could splatter kings,
Battering these brave men, now enslaved cuz there evils lesser 
Cuz i Drop flows like water torture, firing mortars in equal measure,
The people treasure, those who write beneath me but know my bars....
Quick to bust a guy to justify why they say deaths easy and life is hard
The light in the dark, I carry torch for those caught up in the shadows,
Hacking factions into fractions hung drawn and quartered in the gallows.


Edited by Rutter knows best - 04 February 2015 at 12:19am
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Ransom Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2015 at 2:51am
Nice drop man, came correct and had some valid points. The double back and web search line was dope, the flow was their so overall solid drop.
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Thank dude.
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They tell me i ain't well rounded but it ain't hittin home,
Cuz I Don't need all the tools when i'm rocking fists of stone,,
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This was a nice opener
 
Blessed with skills, switched my style up now they expecting kills,
No surprise those who tried Rut, now bodies piled up reflecting hills
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Nice usage of words and word placements. Giggz on the gew
 
Best is ill, I danced with the devil just to advance my rhythm,
Dropping so many bars wardens be like" You'd enhance our prisons!"
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This was slick as shit. Defo liked the second line on this brothaman. That some
good metas. Bam
 
L.A Wit there crooked frowns looking down on what Best did,
Fact is if i spit any sharper I'll give myself a fuckin cleft lip,
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LMFAO, that's what im talking about brothaman. This was sharp as shit
 
That rhyme was hazardous! My left and rights a double act,
Leave them on deaths door and they too far gone to double back,
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brah, again. Nice fucking usage of words
 
Couple claps, but audiences don't applaud my carousel of battle hits,
Blastin kids, wit a verse no web search could find parallel narratives,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, DAMN
 
Been practicing, dancing to the beat of a mad mans inner ramblings,
Channeling Mansons passion through my brash sinful handlings,
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Multis and shit fo dayz, nice flex
 
Savaging the limbs of victims before they even know whats happening
Carrying the burden of earth shattering words that could splatter kings,
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I read this bar twice, I caught the rhyming at the end with a slant tone. DOPE
 
Battering these brave men, now enslaved cuz there evils lesser 
Cuz i Drop flows like water torture, firing mortars in equal measure,
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Nice content brah
 
The people treasure, those who write beneath me but know my bars....
Quick to bust a guy to justify why they say deaths easy and life is hard
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Nice word placements
 
 
The light in the dark, I carry torch for those caught up in the shadows,
Hacking factions into fractions hung drawn and quartered in the gallows.
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Damn brah, wait to end this shit. That's the shit im talking about
 
RUTTER- You went in and raped this with some good metas, flow and rhyming. Much respect on your elevation bruhderman. Keep this shit up.


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Bro you freakin killed this. Bars like this "
L.A Wit there crooked frowns looking down on what Best did,
Fact is if i spit any sharper I'll give myself a fuckin cleft lip,"
Excellent use of multis and internals, mosaic rhymes. The flow on this was excellent and the aggression was very obvious. Still have mad respect for you considering you are the only one during the empire beef to diss me and win lol. We really need to collab bro.
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Diz thank for the feed. Bar for bar breakdown are always a bonus. Glad you enjoyed it.

And thanks Mission, i'm sure that could be arranged sometime in the future.

Cheers Guys.


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this was really aggro my dude the reflecting hills line was heat
the bars line is played I thought it would appear to be the same case with yours but yours had a fresh spin and creativity well I could go on and give props for the concepts you engineered but truth is I'd quote awhile lot more than I bargained for the flow was okay it could've been abit more trimmed but that's your style over all this was solid g
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You are very talented. 
Self hypes usually bore me but I was feeling this. Your multis and transitions made it so smooth that I actually enjoyed this drop.  Verse was very fluent.  And if I try to be overcritical (just for the sake of constructive  criticism), I would like to point out that you got a bit soft by the end in terms of rhyming like evil lesser/equal measure..  I only wanted to point that out because i found your multis really dope at the opening.
Keep writing bro..  It was a good drop.
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this was pretty good Rut, the flow was on point and a couple of stand out bars on there that got my attention, a good self hype piece... keep at it man
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Thanks nomedic, and congrats on our battle went right to the finish.

And thanks poet and titu. Always good to here from good writers and apreciate your 2cents.
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WOW that cleft lip line was bananas bro!!!!
lol flow was right wp was nice metas on point... this is a really sharp drop....

4/5 easy here!
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First I wanna say its good to see you drop shorter barz. Your concepts are always there, but at times have gotten lost in long bar structure. But this was hard hitting Rut. The piece opened up on a strong point and you were consistent throughout.

This part was harsh:

L.A Wit there crooked frowns looking down on what Best did,
Fact is if i spit any sharper I'll give myself a fuckin cleft lip,
That rhyme was hazardous! My left and rights a double act,
Leave them on deaths door and they too far gone to double back,
Couple claps, but audiences don't applaud my carousel of battle hits,
Blastin kids, wit a verse no web search could find parallel narratives


Keep it up bruh
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Thanks for the feed trizz. My writings definatly improved from yours and beans input. So glad you liked it.
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Rut you donny!
This is sick start to finish! some real good rhyming, wordplay, multis, everything really. You got some raw talent man! One of my favourites on the site if im bein honest

loved these lines...

"Dropping so many bars wardens be like" You'd enhance our prisons!" "

"Quick to bust a guy to justify why they say deaths easy and life is hard"

"The light in the dark, I carry torch for those caught up in the shadows,
Hacking factions into fractions hung drawn and quartered in the gallows."

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