Audio Mic: "Same Shit Different Day" (Audio)

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"Same shit different day"

im happy with it but id like to know what u peeps think. if u cant listen right away here are the lyrics at least.. but the lyrics are also on my soundclick. aight, thx ~1~

i consider myself blessed, by the way that i was raised a dollar in my pocket
both my parents in the crib and alwayz water in my faucet
never the less life couldnt possibly be simple if i was fatherd by the omish
yeah i fucked up, did some stupid shit but never caught or botherd by a cop bitch
the dirty ones take aim, pullin triggas and shit,  but only if they aiming at a nigger or spic
bush sending fellow americans to perish, killing fathers, leaving children as bastard's in the carriage
he know about poor minorites, yet he aint take care of it, so ima stand alone, yellin mexico to rep my heiritage

you think u know beef? real Beef aint a simple thing, niggas lose they lives, and moms-is-left-mourning/
She could have been hugging her child the night before, and all of a sudden they gone-the-next-morning/
Used to buy Toys, now its Flowers for they grave/cuz someones child was murdered cuz some coward pulled out blades/
beef is cancer sticks, and what cigerates is killing with, beef is what sadam did to his citizens
beef is all these fake rappers not doing what they claim, beef is hi-jacked planes, beef is crack and cain,
beef is teens at parites, screaming bottoms up, then killing all they freinds cuz was driving drunk

Reptile to Renegade been Through-Metamorphesis/ Ignited the Oil Bush and You-Spread-The-Corpses-With
Speaking for the Generation, Who-Get-Ignored-In-This And those who don't share the same Views-of-the-Fortunate
Places where Threat-en-ing Fueds-Turn-To-Wars-and-Kids Do basically nothing but bang Tunes-on-their-Porches-
Drug Kings...Run Things On the News-Get-Awards-For-Things Murdered Crews...Burdened Youths Are Refused-by-the-Orphanage
Gripped Up Quick by Stick Up Kids Who wont hesitate just to Shoot-you-for-Jordan-Kicks
Same shit different day...your life is Pissed Away Broken Axis Moves-when-the-Morning-Hits

Yeah just 2 follow on from dat, u need 2 work on ure folw man and ure delivery, without that even decent lyrics will sound shit. It seemd as though u was pausin at points 2 fit ure bars in wit the beat and in sum spots it aint really flow, felt sorta staggered. But keep it up blud!

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