Open Mic: Fuck My Blood Line

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    Posted: 22 March 2026 at 12:14am
........Honestly im Fuckin Pissed, Everything i missed ................ 
 All the effort you didn't give ? 
What this really is ?
You just a little kid, You just play pretend 
Acting like everything's alright
You sick in the head, i think you lost your fucking mind !
Cant tell me why you run and hide, 
Then cry sayin  you really tried !
Dont sit there and fucking lie 
Sayin you loved me, 
Sayin you loved your wife
You Know wrong from right, 
So How do you sleep at night ?

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Tell me who do you think you really are ?
Never broke me, 
Yea you made a piece of art ! 
 I aint got no broken fucking heart, 
You played victim from the start
Made me a monster so now Imma play the part !!!

That's all cap, ill never really get it 
Despite all that, i try to show forgiveness
Fuck that, cuz apologies im never gonna get em' 
So fuck you and all the fucking tension !
Holdin back the pain i never mention 
You an actor, but you ain't Mel Gibson !
2 years old when i put you on the shit list ...
Every image that i have to live with...
You make me sick, you make me wanna vomit 
Cause when you said you were being honest
Every word was just another empty promise
 I hope you got what you really wanted

Told me you don't know what caused this?
All this hate that i be Harborin ?
Bitch please, you know where it started 
You know exactly where i got it 
Regardless of whatever you want to call it !


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Tell me who do you think you really are ?
Never broke me, 
Yea you made a piece of art ! 
 I ain't got no broken fucking heart, 
You played victim from the start
Made me a monster so now Imma play the part !!!

YOU NEVER WERE A FATHER
Told me that i was the problem, 
When it's your soul that's fuckin Rotton
Your Scum that dwell at the bottom........

( Your a Fuckin Piece of Shit )

You regret your life but act like it was mine
Actin like your mistakes were what i left behind 
Your either stupid or just fucking blind
I guess for you it's out of sight, out of mind
Fuck you for every time i cried
Every night i asked god why.....
I had to let it go, I don't know how i did it
I guess its cuz i Prayed to god,
I begged him to lift it
I guess he really listened 
Nowadays don't give a fuck bout your friendship
Don't give a fuck about how this ended
Every time you talk its some bitch shit
Wont even hear your name mentioned in a sentence
This all shit that you have to live with 
cuz my turn is fuckin finished 
Now tell me whos the one that wins This ?


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"Cause when you said you were being honest
Every word was just another empty promise"
Whoa...... AK first off welcome back! secondly this is what ive missed a real emotional piece a drop that sounded like it was theroputic to write. Also I could feel the beat you wrote this to the whole way through. 
I feel like the last verse was just raw thought and emotion less planned out less structured more just raw "How do i feel right now" type shit. It gives a nice close to the drop. Over all I really liked this I can see what your message is and feel your emotions throughout the whole thing. Good work AK!

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This was tight.. props.. 


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