Spit for Rank: Rank me (not a topical verse)

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*Ali rameez is a famous singer...Rameez name is Rameez Ali
** Ali rameez had two wives (Twice the bitch)
***Ali Rameez never created his own music. Most of his songs were "borrowed"

Fucking big mouth....

You talk alotta shit, backed up by NOTHING even his folks ashamed
An u'd have to flip ya name to get your ass CLOSE to fame*
See id of let shit slide, crying cause dynasty aint like ya shit
Ali had two wives, flipped his name and ironically you twice the bitch!**
Fuck D?.. checked ya verses cant express the amount i laughed
I guess to increase the left number, ya should match ya counter-part***
Cummon kid use ya verse to tell me ya dope, in every flips denial
This bitch could be an anti fur campaigner....and still not rip a style!
 An' to win a battle? i think this kid would literally DRINK piss...
'Cuz his best punch EVER was some "piggy wiggly pink" shit...
Seriously THINK bitch, we aint gotta team for me to win with Ease (Ez)
So ima begin to tease, drop to your level 'You a twit with fleas'
Quit bitching about votes kid, just hush and have fun...wait
An there was me thinkin sadamm was the only man in a rush to be hung?
See now ya fucked n it's done, makin a mistake rushin the D
Ya mean nothin to me, no doubt you guna be ducking this free
Seriously though man, im suggesting ya take ya time
Hit add buddy, enter batchman and let ya boy kay create ya rhymes
Ya had to go run your mouth ran, now you in trouble...screwed
After this you'll be perfect for pop...with ya 3L's and W

Edited by Kay B - 08 September 2007 at 7:30pm

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Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Rank me (not a topical verse) Posted: 08 September 2007 at 7:30pm
	Ali rameez is a famous singer...Rameez name is Rameez Ali * Ali rameez had two wives (Twice the bitch) **Ali Rameez never created his own music. Most of his songs were "borrowed" Fucking big mouth.... You talk alotta shit, backed up by NOTHING even his folks ashamed An u'd have to flip ya name to get your ass CLOSE to fame See id of let shit slide, crying cause dynasty aint like ya shit Ali had two wives, flipped his name and ironically you twice the bitch! Fuck D?.. checked ya verses cant express the amount i laughed I guess to increase the left number, ya should match ya counter-part* Cummon kid use ya verse to tell me ya dope, in every flips denial This bitch could be an anti fur campaigner....and still not rip a style! An' to win a battle? i think this kid would literally DRINK piss... 'Cuz his best punch EVER was some "piggy wiggly pink" shit... Seriously THINK bitch, we aint gotta team for me to win with Ease (Ez) So ima begin to tease, drop to your level 'You a twit with fleas' Quit bitching about votes kid, just hush and have fun...wait An there was me thinkin sadamm was the only man in a rush to be hung? See now ya fucked n it's done, makin a mistake rushin the D Ya mean nothin to me, no doubt you guna be ducking this free Seriously though man, im suggesting ya take ya time Hit add buddy, enter batchman and let ya boy kay create ya rhymes Ya had to go run your mouth ran, now you in trouble...screwed After this you'll be perfect for pop...with ya 3L's and W Edited by Kay B - 08 September 2007 at 7:30pm


I-kontinue Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote I-kontinue Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 09 September 2007 at 2:52pm
	Alot of the concepts were hot man.., very Pro-like. Lines were a bit long though which messed up the flow on some parts. Only thing holdin you back from Pro is slightly better wording imo and show consistency (not necessarily WINNING) in the battle fields against other Pros (in non topical battles)... if you really want pro though, drop one of your topicals. Making lines short that say alot (wording) is the hard part to do, but I think you can... This was better than most of this site can do though... Challenge a pro battler rather than rameez for s4r. It makes your shit more valid if you know what I mean. Since you dont drop regular battles in s4r really, I'd say AMA until I see this more often in s4r. Keep droppin'.

Fatal Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Fatal Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 09 September 2007 at 3:53pm
	I was actually really impressed wit this verse...i thought u had some aggressive dope personal punches in there....i gotta agree wit Ikon too...i think you should really take ya time wit ya other battles like u did wit this one, had nice mix of personal/creative wordplay...closer was a nice example of that...keep droppin consistantly kay....AMA


Kay B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Kay B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 09 September 2007 at 5:06pm
	^ Took my time?....it took me 20 minutes to write haha :-P But yeah i see ya points thanks dudes!