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    Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:24am

Round One - 10 lines
No Biting, Recycling, Feeding OR Flipping

first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
No Dickryde Votes
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ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted!
Voting will last 1 week from the deadline... if there is no clear winner at that point, whoever is ahead at the time will advance.
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If you want to bitch, take it to the Bitching Thread, or PM me
DEADLINE IS MIDNIGHT, DECEMBER 20TH, 2007
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 12:06pm

Scotty's got no chance, and i dont need to expand
Coz he was seen as a joke before this even began
I've d3str0y3d him once before, so he hates me
As the only text Scotty can handle's fuckin PHP!
He's spat weak lately, so i'll be blazing him quick
Scotty's bars are 'played more' than the game in his sig
Web designers CANT rap, we know that he's a geek
Tell him to 'get a grip', he grabs his controller for the Wii! (smh)

Kid,your bitch made, so you'll get murdered tonight
Coz we all know Scottie's bark is much worse than his bite!

 

-He's obsessed with his Nintendo Wii
-Scottie is the well known nickname for 'Scotish Terrier' dogs

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 3:55pm
you sat on santa's lap askin if he got a win in his rucksack//
cose ya already 5 down an theres no way of comin back//
like Hansel an Gretel you aint gunna find the trail//
cose ya road to success is bound to derail//
if even your votin for me, i know i definately got ya beat//
ya a fuckin joke, an i aint talkin bout the red nose an large feet//
but what kinda rapper is to scared to talk on the telephone?
ya know ya crew sucks if even the canooks'd rather sitck it on their own//
so quick to state ya "no homo" but all ya doin is makin me doubt this//
beggin me to let mackie back, but refuse to put ya money where ya mouth is//


Expo: i got 5 votes in "who'll win the tourny' point got non, see links, he said he was to scared to ring up a company bout work experience, he was beggin me to unban mackie but when i asked him to vouch for mackie he refused
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:09pm
Coolio, Lets Get Some Votes
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:29pm
Point GMV
much more polished verse, flowed nicely.
opener was my favorite line lmao... closer dope 2. nice consisting punches as well, PHP line...lol... webdesigner...i got it, sont think many other will though.

Scotty
lines seemed a lil streched out 2 me, the clowin feet line was dope, coulda been reworded a lil better tho. Telephone play was whack.

Point get it on a more polished Better hitting verse
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 6:10pm
point - opener funny play, lol next line was decent aswell, hmm next bar nto as nice as the first two, but still good, wii was a cool play aswell, last play i havent seen used on him so it looks decent, overall funny, nice plays, and solid flow

scott - need to work on more creative plays, and not just stating facts, opener is more just stating that you got voted for, next line was again just a wee sentence not a hard personal punch on point, need make it more personal, next line was pretty good, gettin more at him, next bar it felt like the two lines should be switched, seemed to have the main punch before the "setup" but too decent shots at him, lol i really liked the close, could have been worded better, cause i and i dotn think mnay knew he was asking for mack back, so coulda been a real hard hitting personal, but just nice.

overall, point is pro, he knows what he's doing, scott gave a good account and showed potential

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:11pm
Blank, not too bad...closer wasnt that good, sig was okay, PHP was ill...rest of it kinda average for you...Scotty, not a bad effort, opener showed promise but didnt quite come off, you have a different sdtyle to the norm here which is nice to see...canooks was a good solid hit actually, nicely done...the rest was a good effort but blank outclassed you here through slicker punching

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 6:26am
Votes disallowed cose Ya'll haters Angry

narr jokin, thanks for votes

(as smooth hasnt been on since Weds)

Closed - 3KO Point goes thru
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