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Topic: new shitPosted: 06 February 2008 at 12:19am |
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smokin that chronic like Dre was producin
immediately rappin yo fuck introducin my skills and intelligence got battlers losing call out a rapper and have him refusing cops wanna get me, what excuse they using? they call it first degree verbally abusing it's confusing, this rookie got mad skills you aint harder with penis enhancement pills cause most of you are posers fake stories composers and expositors talk all shit you want and hide behind PC monitors so like Osama I'm terrorizing and bombing these noise makers that think they're something ashes to ashes, i'll do you nothing to nothing do like Canibus and autograph your coffins don't say i ask for it, i'm just kickin the real like my homeboy Guru did on verse one of Mass Appeal |
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Posted: 06 February 2008 at 9:12pm |
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This was a pretty basic verse. Work on ya content and rhymes. Check out some verses by our established members in our Open Mic section or battles in our Battle section to see what good verses look like.
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