Spit for Rank: txt battle rank

 

this kids rappins-wack, on txt-n-mic his bars-aint-hittin jack
i'll crack-impacts n make him vex-ed-like a car-complaint-collision pact//
grow-sum-balls, ur flow needs it, so ur voice-gets-deeper
u aint old enough to know-cum-falls from the penis and u aint got dough so ur condom choice-is-cheaper//
every rapper with lil at stake in their name-sucks, so why would u b DIE-verse(diverse)??
the next lil wayne a fake who has game-luck, nigga i'll have u liein in a wry-hearse//
hip-hop-king?? i dont think so, ur the lowest on the rap-ladder
click-pop-sting bam ur dead for bein the slowest black-rapper(slow on audio)//
porn under-ur-name, nigga u cant get ass so u take sum-lotion n beat-it
worn out, u plunder-ur-fame with rap by smokein grass so u can feel the cum-motion under the sheet-spit//
nigga i'll leave u brusied-n-sacked so u remind me of a females weave-in
always lose-in-track wen u get beat-in//
west-meets-east, like nas beats-the-game in every aspect-of-rap
u cant beat a blessed-street-beast that feasts-on-lames like u witout tecks-to-clap//
final-chord n i see the fear risein from u cause u been destroyed
u just got fucked up from a spear goin through ur spinal-cord like were in troy//

to explain the personals on this kid, in his audio he raps slow n he sounds like a lil kid, n his avator had the game n under his name on mobb he had a porno magazine pic n i think that explains the personals, rank it n feed back, i kno my lines are stretched lol

 

You have a nice grasp on multies an flow and you have attempts at wordplay. I suggest working on stonger punches and wordplay. Not bad tho for a newb.

Rank: AMA

 

^ well put... i'm gonna agree... AMA