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Matt The Ripper 
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 Topic: Hungry For FeedPosted: 22 March 2008 at 5:29pm |
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I'm hungry for feed, so here's some food for thought for free!
My flow is for me, 'n nobody else! Feel free to ignore me!
You want me to ghostwrite for you? You can't afford me!
My wit is as sharp as a sword, see?! Someday, you'll reward me! You'll encore me! It's not my fault I make your old lady horny! Bet that wrestler Rhyno wants to Gore me! You wanna horror-core me! I can get just as gory! I'm here for blood, 'n this is the end of my story! |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Posted: 22 March 2008 at 7:10pm |
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Rhymes were there but very simple. Work on ya content and syllables... Rank: Nov |
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G-Pfeif
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Posted: 23 March 2008 at 11:25am |
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Novice...
worklike fatal says.. work on keeping fewer syllables in each line... work on flow.... find the tutorials page |
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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SageOne
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Posted: 23 March 2008 at 5:22pm |
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Ermm....is there anything below the rank of novice?
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dalinquent
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Posted: 23 March 2008 at 6:53pm |
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yep, we call that sageone
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D.king
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Posted: 24 March 2008 at 12:24am |
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^powned^
lol
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I resemble the tooth fairy by the way i am taking your crown!!
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SageOne
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Posted: 24 March 2008 at 12:32am |
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^8 and 9^ |
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2smooth
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Posted: 26 March 2008 at 7:29pm |
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NOVICE |
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