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    Posted: 14 April 2008 at 11:12pm

* http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=790894

His soundclick..look at his member profile name..bjmaster..Blow Job

 

Ima wax this geek, like ‘poor junk yards’ you don’t wanna scrap with me

Cuz I’ll crack ya teeth..I wouldn’t ‘feel Mas(ta)’ as a Catholic Priest

In his face I’ll ‘deposit’ my fist like pay day, so fuck what this gay say

Sock his head n knock him dead, Masta aint been a threat since slave days

I got raised blades so just try it bitch, Ame’ll have ya dyin quick

Cuz the way Im ‘rippin Mast’ you’d swear I was on a pirate ship

I’ll defeat this bastard, meet the savage..you’ll reek the havoc

I seek disaster..in battle theres ‘No Limit’ to much I can P on Masta

You livin a lie N wishin to die, with that copied name fuckin prick

I don’t fear this queer bitch..‘BJmaster’? I knew you loved suckin dick*

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 April 2008 at 11:27pm

Ok...

Your obviously no rookie as you have good flow and hard hitting punches. You have a good grasp on relevant wordplay mixed wit strong hard hitting personals. Great verse for someone new...only line i wasnt feeling was the "P on masta" line...Keep up your consistancy and battle some good heads and i can def see you getting ranked Professional soon. (which is our highest rank and not too many have this rank). Im gonna have to see you consistantly spit at a high level so until then...

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I feel you..this was a 15 minute verse..this is weak shit for me..I peeped Masta's shit N decided to go light LOL..anyway..I'll be Pro in no time then..
 
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I agree with fatal...

some decent multis... creative punches... good plays... this is High ama stuff here...

keep workin and droppin consistent and you'll improve
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Originally posted by G-Pfeif G-Pfeif wrote:

I agree with fatal...

some decent multis... creative punches... good plays... this is High ama stuff here...

keep workin and droppin consistent and you'll improve
LOL @ improve..homie I just said this was light shit..I put 15 minutes into this battle..lol but good loks anyway
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