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Bolo 
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
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 Topic: bout time i...Posted: 18 April 2008 at 9:34am |
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spit for rank:
We all get on that gossip tip, muhfuckas STAY spewin bullshit Heard that Bolo’s got a shady rep…thought I’d try n see what fuels it I heard he's pretty dope... They said B was prodigious, a wordsmith…most were jealous His mind leaned towards litigious…his rhetoric was zealous He coughed up words n dripped text, his mode of speech, inherent He flossed absurdly sick spits…oft prone to preaching penance So though his fellow tenants were quick to nit pick and convict him The slick spic didn’t flinch, shit…he just flipped the script and ripped them And so his hits left kids convinced when, apologetic, they retracted But that afflicted pitch was swift to switch…them bitches plotted and redacted… …their words; They tried to smash him...but B was apt and grasped it At last way past compassion, he’d react and make it drastic Shit KB…duke’s got a bigger vocab than Webster! Haha, yea man…apparently he a rhetorician of sorts… And with ‘em hating cats recasted…a vast gap distanced the masses Though they amassed a few advancements, none was able to surpass him Now they gibe, quip, and harass him…they claim Bolo’s prone to duck bouts Years go by and he outlasts them…those he no-showed? They all lucked out I heard his prose was quite discerning…eloquently copacetic The word’s his rhyming is poetic…decrees I readily abetted Synesthesia wetted every note in each one of his scriptures I can feel his pain n breathe his smoke as I read his painted pictures And though this sainted fixture has thrice absconded from the stage Bolo’s untainted diction asserts his skill remains unscathed… This dude’s multingual too??? Yo, this kid’s on a different level E bisami tamben “Bolo? il est tres versé” Haha…Vaffanculo cornuti! Yo no se lo ke se créen…. Tienen razon, les pido perdon, ami ta bisa groceria Pero igual…vous puevez pas comprendez lo ke este sabio les diga He can slay in different languages, it's deranged how he arranges spits Perplexed by his complex sage shit, its enraging how he plays with wit y'all can stare at it for days on end...and STILL not fully gauge his drift Damn... if y'all want a battle verse instead, i'll provide one...lemme kno |
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Bolo
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 9:40am |
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multilingual part (papiamentu, spanish, french, italian) translates to:
they also told me "Bolo? that cat's extremely adept" Haha...go fuck yourselves you pricks...u aint fit to spar with the best ok, its true, im sorry....i mightve insulted u guys... but still...y'all wont understand a word this guru wrote in these lines |
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Bolo
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Posted: 18 April 2008 at 11:03pm |
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get at me muhfuckers, i kno u saw this, haha
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Fatal
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...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Posted: 19 April 2008 at 12:19am |
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I told you that i thought this verse was fire...You display great flow wit tight vocab. Theres a couple heads here that are very high amas and could get Pro if they really work for it. I think that you are one of these few. I'd like to see you continue to spit at a high level and also see you drop some dope verses in the feilds so i can judge you more on battle type verses...If you do that, you'll get Pro verrrry soon. So let me see some consistant verses from you and some tight battle verses and you'll get a rank bumb...until then
Rank: Ama
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
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Posted: 19 April 2008 at 5:51am |
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Tbh as an open mic artist i don't see many of the pro's writing better shit than this im not goona jump on mentioning names but some either don't or cant drop open mics like this...
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Fatal
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Posted: 19 April 2008 at 1:40pm |
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I never said it wasnt a Pro verse, but i cant remember too many of Bolo's verses, so i said i'd like to see some consistant verses before i rank him higher...
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Kay B
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Posted: 19 April 2008 at 2:28pm |
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I wasn't going at your reply i was just giving my opinion i agree with alotta what u said tbh i was just telling him my opinion
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Fatal
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Posted: 19 April 2008 at 4:59pm |
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oh ok
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Bolo
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Posted: 20 April 2008 at 9:49am |
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ama? b-b-b-b-but....there's a full line multi in there!
He coughed up words n dripped text, his mode of speech, inherent He flossed absurdly sick spits…oft prone to preaching penance haha, jp good lookin out kay.... fatal, ur a weak bitch...fucking hating ass spic...we'll see how u feel after i shit on u haha, nah fam, on the real, good looks chico, point taken...this'll prolly be open for a while huh? fuckin s4r judges never come online anymore |
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Rameez
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Posted: 20 April 2008 at 10:47am |
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this was a low pro spit.. imo.. alot ov multis packed in ya verses.. and wasn't forced.. U had better rhyme scheme than most of the pros here.. no hate > if this goes to any1.. but ya thats what I've seen.. but only battles will prove more about ya rank.. that where u suppose to be..
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Fatal
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Posted: 20 April 2008 at 3:09pm |
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^Dont post in here....your opinion is not wanted as your are niether a s4r judge nor ranked professional
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Kay B
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Posted: 20 April 2008 at 3:26pm |
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Neither am i and i posted....
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Fatal
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Posted: 20 April 2008 at 9:37pm |
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You too faggot...
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G-Pfeif
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Posted: 20 April 2008 at 10:05pm |
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i think some of your lines have too many syllables in them... and your flow/multies can be off at times... pretty good vocab... but i didnt really see a punch or anything... yes this may have been an open mic... but you could have used some metas or somethin... work on that ish and u shall improve...
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Bolo
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Posted: 20 April 2008 at 10:32pm |
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good looks pfeif...cant say i agree bout the punches/metas part (tho makes sense that ud look for that since s4r is supposed to be battle verses)...but i did notice flow was a bit off in one line, and two syllables got switched up in another line...
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