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    Posted: 12 September 2008 at 11:00pm
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Edited by Bolo - 12 September 2008 at 11:08pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 September 2008 at 3:06am
Tawab:

if anybody doesnt get it i'll post the "explanations" after.

"this dude pointin n shootin blanks, while my mouth spit bullet's that'll split u
cuz wen i let the safety off, u can be sure that a Lott'll hit u
n yea, im known to 'paint a picture' well
so when you see my van go over ur legs, kno its down to ''crunch time'' n ur takin the L
so lend me your ear, i got anotha rhyme thats hot and emergin'
how this loser expect to win? its a paradox.. like 2 surgeons
someone take him to ER, when i leave him slain in defeat
but everythin i "Drop" is "nice".. so expect to remain on ur feet
this shit is over, n the next time y'all expect this homo to chime in
it'll be w/his bones on a string, as their caught in the wind."

peace



Point:

Tawa/Tower
Tawn/Torn

I'll slaughter this tard ,he's been warned from the start
I'll keep flippin with his name till I've Tawn him apart
If he thinks he can beat me, then this hoe is a fool..
I'm like a morrocon in a desert, coz I'm ownin 'amule'
He's battlin the best, and he can't handle this, so..
I bet his verse'll embarrass him more than his intro
This cat is sick? No! Dawg, I'm easily smokin you
Ya had to put a bitch in ya ave just so people would notice you
He's out in the first round, no1 will remember his presence
Coz Tawa's gettin blasted like september 11th

..Boom..


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 September 2008 at 12:30pm
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Nothing personal point but take it how u like, just think you should follow that since others have had to..anyways

Pretty one sided as i expected. T didnt have a bad verse but he had nothing that really stood out to me where as point had some nice punches, not his best but he did what he had to do, nice plays matched with nice punches that hit...Ts verse was abit novish tbh had some ko content but lacked what was needed to even come close to a pro like point

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 September 2008 at 2:31pm
Tawab - your verse had some dope stuff in it, (Paradox / 2 surgeons) | (remain on your feet) - they were hot, but most of your stuff, including the paradox bar was indirect. It just wasn't a punch on point. The remain on your feet shit was the best bar, and teh Van Gogh thing was just wack.

Point - opening two bars were good, and the personal was nice too, the other two bars were just pointless filler, and didn't really have any impact, however, what you did have was direct, qitty hitting punches.

Therefore : Point Blank Gets My Vote.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 September 2008 at 5:16pm
Tawabamule:
One of the better verses i've seen from you.

Opener was okay.
2nd bar's stretched to shit.. and that "Van Go" play really was whack.
3rd bar's good, but wasn't very direct for a battle.. basically sayin you don't know how he could possibly expect to win, even though he's a more experienced battler than you.
4th bar's your best.
Closer was okay. Nothing special.


Point Blank:

Opener was pretty good.
2nd bar I would've worded differently, but was good.
3rd bar's okay.
4th bar works.
Closer killed it.

Vote: Point Blank, more direct, better structured verse






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 September 2008 at 1:03am
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