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    Posted: 12 September 2008 at 11:00pm
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Edited by Bolo - 12 September 2008 at 11:08pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 September 2008 at 1:02am
Dal:

Are you fuckin' kidding me bo? I shouldn't even have to bother
My punches 'lands-a-lot sir' so fuck king, Watch me beat upon this arthur

Got that? haha

You the weakest fucker, It's fact... So in this tourney, You're coming in last
King's close to ill?? Please i'mma prove this bitch is nothing but ass
Try fucking with that? ...Stupid you can get broken and bruised quick...
When it comes to 'King I Land' - Jus fa the voters amusement
I'm too sick, And you shit, So I'm breaking ya jaw
Taking the crown? BITCH THE ONLY THING YOU TAKE IS A LOSS

Time to finish him off, You gotta be retarded to this bitch is great
Cuz the last king worth respected was shot and killed in 68



D. King:

FYI- dal's myspace www.myspace.com/activistproductionz 

dal produces beats..... the quality of them not that professinal.. little or no feed back when he post majorty of his beats. CLICK HERE

the rest is explanatory... just ask if u don't get any thing

enjoy.......

Yo, King is the master, and your a dalinquent
cuz this kid's a disaster, 10th plgue disfigurement
there no sense in trying to be belligerent
i mean u claim to produce? but bearly on the internet* ( little feed back)
dal's substnace needs drama and beef, the merry and groovy
i'll smoke dal like a marijuana leaf, in Scary Movie
you could be 6ft, no matter "How high" in the air, 
cuz about as far as u'll go, is as high as a kids chair,  
you got mediocore beats, and lyrics that are shallow too
cuz even if "DAl" had a "LAMA", no one would follow you (Dalai Lama)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 September 2008 at 7:56am
dal - nothing spectacualr - seems to be a theme for people assuming they will win lol, opener was okay - maybe needs rewording.. next on average too, not a brilliant hit, next one was very good, next one solid, and closer pretty hot - overall - solid verse - nothing crazy .. 7/10
 
d.king - came correct - but a problem with well crafted punches and personals, opener is just a random bit of drivel, which has no place in a battle - indirect too.. next bar was a decent idea, but it didnt come off.. coulda been a better punchline...with rewording.. next two bars where indirect - the chair was funny for wrong reasons lol, could use those punches on anybody and they wertn hard hitting.. closer had potential and was a good hit.. pretty good..

overall vote dalinquent - better more creative punches
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 September 2008 at 11:47am
Dal - Great open and close.  The middle was just that...middle level. 

D.King - Your last line was hot.  The rest, not so much.  Had you put in some more lines like your closer, you'd be moving on.

My vote - Dal.  More hard hitting punches than King.

Props to both, at least you guys were punching each other.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 September 2008 at 12:05pm
Preety much agree with viper, dal had two hot bars the opener and closer rest was just standard level really not great but not terrible, King seemed to have attempts at punches but nothing great apart from the last line

Vote - Dal Had better overall verse and landed more punches

3-0 Ko
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 September 2008 at 12:12pm
Dal's through...props king
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