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    Posted: 05 July 2009 at 1:35am
Week 3

DTK (2-0) v sparta (2-0)

4 Bars (8 Lines)
No Flips
Due Saturday 11th July 11.59pm
No Show's or Late Verses will result in instant Loss
First to 3 / 3-0 KO
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 July 2009 at 11:15pm
3's a moblie phone company

Dude, you ain't gettin' anywhere with them horrible flows
So I snatch 3 away from him like I was robbing his phone
Serious, work on them verses cos you ain't hittin' me right
I make your footballin' wounds a familiar sight
DTK couldn't hope to insult me
This battle's more mismatched than the flow of his multies
Xfade's a joke, you crew cannot protect ya
Fuck you turning up, you may as well just copy Tesla
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:40am
*He has naray as his name under his sig..
*He has a llyod bank`s line quoted in his sig..
 
 
Kid ya wack as fuck, we know Sparta don`t flow well
We know 5 stars don`t mean shit..unless we at a motel
I seen ya punches dude..an honestly they bore me
I`ll have narray-tore..like he was telling a  story*
Ya flows shit, seriously dude no one think`s he`s fluid
What kind faggot ass lyracist quote`s a dude from g-unit*
Dude Profound`s riding with ya..no wonder ya miss used`d
Ya crew`s full of bitche`s..it`s no problem making this bitch bruised
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 1:56pm
DTK : You posted nearly 3 hours late. I wont N you, because you posted, but this is your only warning. The rules are there, and clearly state 11.59 GMT. Please don't let it happen again.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:15pm
Thanks Nep..Wasn't sure what time it was in the UK.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:33pm
If you click on the "Read the rules" link in the first post, there is a link there to GMT. I don't know everyones time zones, but that will show you what time it is here. 






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:37pm
sparta - Opener was ok, good concept, a little bit of a stretch but I think it worked. Next bar seemed fillerish which is disappointing in an 8 line battle. The "flow on his multis" was pretty fun, nice personal hit. And the closer was pretty weak, not a great note to end the verse on.
 
DTK - I thought your first 4 lines were really nice. Good, clever hits which I felt landed pretty well. However I felt the last 4 lines dropped off, the G-Unit line just didn't hit at all and the closer was just fillerish, not really a punch at sparta.
 
Overall - I make it 2 good hits for both and 2 weak/filler punches for both so this was a close battle. But I think im gonna go with DTK on this one, I felt he hit slightly harder and his weaker stuff (the G-Unit line) was a little bit stronger than spartas weaker stuff. Really close battle.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:48pm
Thanks Calib 1-0
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 2:54pm
SPART-
Dude, you ain't gettin' anywhere with them horrible flows
So I snatch 3 away from him like I was robbing his phone
^Ok punch, nothing brilliant but was worded well..

Serious, work on them verses cos you ain't hittin' me right
I make your footballin' wounds a familiar sight
^Bit general, but atleast it was personal, so not all was lost..

DTK couldn't hope to insult me
This battle's more mismatched than the flow of his multies
Yet again, quite general, but there was atleast a punch that was abusive enough to get a response..

Xfade's a joke, you crew cannot protect ya
Fuck you turning up, you may as well just copy Tesla
^I thought this was weak, with how talented you are, i was expecting some wordplay or shit about this potential punch, but it was too plain like this to be that effective.


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Kid ya wack as fuck, we know Sparta don`t flow well
We know 5 stars don`t mean shit..unless we at a motel
^I liked this, straight away going at what he's about, was quite funny..

I seen ya punches dude..an honestly they bore me
I`ll have narray-tore..like he was telling a story*
^Liked this aswell, just showing more awareness about sounds and words..

Ya flows shit, seriously dude no one think`s he`s fluid
What kind faggot ass lyracist quote`s a dude from g-unit*
^Was ok, but the problem with talking about artist's apart from the joke ones is that the effect of the punch is always going to come down to the preference of the audience..

Dude Profound`s riding with ya..no wonder ya miss used`d
Ya crew`s full of bitche`s..it`s no problem making this bitch bruised
^Thought this was another weak closer, neither of you finished particularly well..


In the end i think DTK came with the more complex and harder shit, some of Sparts stuff came across as a bit general and vague. The first 2 bars from DTK won it for me personally, but good battle guys.

MVGT- DTK
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 July 2009 at 5:52pm
This was real close.. Both came nice, though sparta had a dope opener but the next 3 bars where on the avarage side.. DTK opener too was dope, 2nd an' 3rd bars we're aiight an' the closer was okay, nothin' real stand out..

Close like i said but DTK just edged it for me..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 July 2009 at 12:25pm
DTK Wins this KO.






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