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    Posted: 19 July 2009 at 1:18pm
Week 5

sparta (3-1) v Junior Shade (2-1)

4 Bars (8 Lines)
No Flips
Due Saturday 25th July 11.59pm
No Show's or Late Verses will result in instant Loss
First to 3 / 3-0 KO
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 July 2009 at 9:35pm
Motherfucker, don't think I'll drop easy
You living in my shadow like I'm Harry Potter and you're Ron Weasley
You ain't hot, stop lying, you rookie kid
I'll keep 3 away from him like hiding his footy kit
You'll wonder what I'm clappin' ya for
Junior couldn't fire off shots if this was an African war
What the hell you think you'll gain by starting on me
Your relegation get laughed at more than Newcastle FC
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 July 2009 at 9:47pm
oh yeah, link for the second bar
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 July 2009 at 11:39pm
You're a poor man's MC so kid, get smarter..
Cus' to make this battle dope i gotta' do it FOR SPARTA...!
He don't harbor dope thoughts, you need help it's frank..
Well actually, the only reason you hold the Belt is Blank..!
Fuck rank.. You're winnin' this? i beg your pardon?..
Spa could'nt mount a threat on the back of Bin Larden..!
Leave ya heart sunk, like kid.. You best fuckin' run..
Cus' J's on Track for a Spa win like he's in the Belgian F1..!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 July 2009 at 11:46pm
Woops.. Larden - Laden..! My bad..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 July 2009 at 12:07am

Spart : Really weren't feelin your opener. It was funny but just too much of a stretch. LMAO @ the footy kit bar.African war was a nice hit too. Like I said to you, the closer just doesn't rhyme for me, but the idea was ok, weren't much of a hit in my eyes tho.
JS : Opener was funny but, like Spartas opener, was too much of a stretchh for me. Next bar was worded well, and despite it being used before, I thought it was worded well with the frank thing and was quite clever. LMAO @ mount a threat. Closer was nice too, a fresh Spa play that I haven't seen before and it was funny.

This is really hard to vote on...I think Sparta had the best bar of the battle (the footy kit one), but he also had the worst (the Harry Potter one), whereas Junior had 3 nice bars.
Hmmm...I think Junior edged this, although it could go either way. This is why I hate these fuckin puny battles, they are all too close to call
JS GMV, just about

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 September 2009 at 3:37pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 September 2009 at 11:09pm
Wasnt really impressed with sparta's verse compared to his usual shit tbh, i expected a harder punch him being one of the best battlers here imo, shades verse wernt great but liked a few punches, and preferd the verse overall

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 September 2009 at 3:10am
sparta, verse was decent... tough luck going gainst junior is what i thought since most are play against him but you keep it rather fresh... opener was funny but indirect, bar 2 i assume was about a win streak or sumthing, didnt quite get it but i'll give u the credit for it... 3rd bar was nice, and closer was ok, i cant relate... im american...

JR, Opener was a decent reference, but the play wasn't hard hitting... cool tho, second bar was cool...3rd was over my head i assume... really didn't get it... closer was cool... nice play actual

Far as concepts, I'd go with sparta but in terms of the better overall verse, I gotta say Jr had the better verse

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 October 2009 at 11:13am
Shade wins KO.






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