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    Posted: 17 August 2010 at 11:07pm
tell me what you think of this? i'm not sure of it's good cuz i'm writing a song to a beat and i don't want to mess up

their money amount is loan fine while i'm pennywise
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Form: LLLLW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote The Composition Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2010 at 11:11pm
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thanks man
is there a way to change it?
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Not exactly sure what you're tryin' to accomplish with that line.
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comparing me(pennywise) my enemies(waste mass money)
the definition for pennywise is - wise in small matters: saving small sums while losing larger
Tryin' to do a wordplay for this line comparing me co severing my money as for my enemies being reckless not straight thinkers taking unconscious actions that's why comparing them to wasteful mass money
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how about this
I have pennies for dollar sign for thoughts pennywise
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We have tutorials bro. Hit em up
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ight i'll check it out
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hey Fatal i scope around and all i found was punchlines and song structures etc.
but nothing of wordplay
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