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spume corrupt
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Topic: week 3 (spume)Posted: 12 June 2011 at 5:00pm |
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I’ve primed evil rhymes since primeval times; so you can bet I’m a devil
with grime evil lines endogenous
to a decadent mind on a molecular level
blow equilibrium of
course wit tempestuous flow, my virulent sikness gets all vicious
stoppin metabolic systems
an shared idiosyncrasy makin ya life
less auspicious
Edited by spume corrupt - 12 June 2011 at 5:03pm |
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Manc
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 12:21pm |
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Very nice
![]() Opener was fuckin fire bwoy!! Lines were a bit long - but, it WAS done in 4 I give this a 9 & a half outta 10 Good shit Spume |
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J504
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 6:12pm |
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fuckin nice right here. I agree with what Manc said, exactly how I felt. That opener was hella nice and should be considered for line of the week. Imma give ya a 9.75
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:18pm |
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I’ve primed evil rhymes since primeval times; so you can bet I’m a devil
with grime evil lines endogenous
to a decadent mind on a molecular level"
^^Agreed wit J5......this should be considered along with Mancs Bar for line of the week You def got skill bro 9.5 |
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