Wicked WordSmiths: week 4 (spume)

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A scholar to this fine scripture, like a Jesuit to the holy shit

pushing more grime about than a janitor! Now roll with it

you’ll only miss, believe I cleave heads when I  jettison spits

No jest, because
your jack –al ! Won’t be hard ta gets
it done kid

little short stackers try’na step up here, that shits just
mental

you’d catch a jaguar type
mauling  try’na judge-men-tal 

I cuss men fall! I done told ya’ll just how lethal my form
is

Enormous! Bring out a hoe’s yellow streak like da bitch gone jaundice

my whole verse on a jaunt
kids, day tripping to be LA’s saviour

so get like tramps an jaeger,
an dream bout knocking back this flavour

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spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: week 4 (spume) Posted: 21 June 2011 at 11:52pm
	A scholar to this fine scripture, like a Jesuit to the holy shit pushing more grime about than a janitor! Now roll with it you’ll only miss, believe I cleave heads when I jettison spits No jest, because your jack –al ! Won’t be hard ta gets it done kid little short stackers try’na step up here, that shits just mental you’d catch a jaguar type mauling try’na judge-men-tal I cuss men fall! I done told ya’ll just how lethal my form is Enormous! Bring out a hoe’s yellow streak like da bitch gone jaundice my whole verse on a jaunt kids, day tripping to be LA’s saviour so get like tramps an jaeger, an dream bout knocking back this flavour


-Que- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote -Que- Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 June 2011 at 4:34am
	"No jest, because your jack –al ! Won’t be hard ta gets it done kid" LOL spume that was pretty damm good^^ " I cuss men fall! I done told ya’ll just how lethal my form is Enormous! Bring out a hoe’s yellow streak like da bitch gone jaundice" ^^Ha Ha I was gonna do santhin along those lines....you beat me to the punch! Gratz and it was a good line ! I think you took alot of risk......this shit was entertaining and the way you used the words for WP was awsome. 9.5 IMO


Manc Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 02 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 7032 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 82-4-2 Form: WWWWNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Manc Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 June 2011 at 9:11am
	Very nice Spume. I loved the second to last bar LOL some funny stuff that lad. This is a 9 for me kid

J504 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote J504 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:12pm
	There's some nice wordplay in there, good shit! - 9

$n00z Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote $n00z Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 24 June 2011 at 4:45am
	good stuff 8.5/10
	U already know...

Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cuba Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 25 June 2011 at 3:53pm
	Haha, 9