Topic ClosedBattles under Review: Chatta vs King Da Vinci

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    Posted: 11 November 2013 at 3:09am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 November 2013 at 9:33am
whatup my debut verse here
King Da Vinci aka KDV aka King aka Da Vinci aka Vinc

His introduction to LA - Chatta aka Chattabox. If you dont know, now you know..........
His battle callout - I wanna get my LA career started. Who is first?


HE hoped KDV was a Weak TricK!!! But with hits like THESE!! .. GEEEEEZZ!! It make'em bleed QUICK!!
OMG! I'm a BEAST BITCH! He cant BELIEVE IT!!! I got C SICK!! And I aint talking too much time on a sea ship.
He take a MEAN HIT, like them stoners, cus my skill protects my text like watch dogs do their owners!
I told ya fool IT'S OVER!!! Much ColdeR!! With a handle on CB like truck drivers do persona's.
A KING!! You just sipping on coronas. Slaying ghoulish, who told ya to battle Da Vince?! THAT'S CRAZY FOOLISH!!
NO PLAYING STUPID!! I make sure the pain is RUTHLESS! Pick him up and "BOOM BOX" like 80's music.
BLAZING THRU THIS!! BAFOON! Wanta start a career but queer I'm here to see THAT DOOMED!!
Tryta 'fit into my circle' DAMN GOON! But like obsessed strangers instant messaging, I aint leaving 'chat room'!



1 - C sick - sea sick
2 - "CB" is his initials - Chattabox - and it is also the name of the radio that truckers use to communicate. A "CB handle" is another term for a truckers "CB radio nickname".
3 - KING represents a crown. "corona" is the name of the crowns shape. It is also a type of beer.
     Boom boxes were radios that were extremely popular in the 80's.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 November 2013 at 4:48pm
Nice ima drop soon
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 November 2013 at 8:12pm
1 - bars getting served
2 - curtains close-no show, da vinci code-code on the street
4 - Da Vinci's vitruvian man
5 - Chatta boxes King-Chattabox is King
6 - When its check mate a king cant move, hamlet the king was killed in Shakespeares Hamlet
7 - Always get cheap knock offs at a market
8 - Pretty self explanatory

All pretty self explanatory but everyone does it from what i have seen.


I aint wrote a text verse in ages, but i got 'bars', so im used to 'serving strangers'
shoulda 'no show'ed, 'closed the curtain' railings, 'da vinci the code's you aint 'turning pages'

I know that im the certain favourite, when i hold the pen with herculean hands
'Da Vinci' will leave the 'outline of a body', and i aint talking the 'vitruvian man' 

cunt i know your either stupid or mad, when 'chatta boxes king' im 'taking ya throne'
i 'check mate's weak so he cant 'move to me', kill kings, 'hamlet' the 'tale' that was told

for the faces at home, my opponent is harmless, wasteman 'fake' like 'clothes at the market'
trash should be thrown with garbage, and closest he'll to a 'label' is one 'sown in his garments'

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 November 2013 at 8:29pm
Nice chatta! We going to need some votes now. Good luck.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 November 2013 at 8:58pm
You too, I'm gonna vote on some battles now, hopefully that will help.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 November 2013 at 9:03pm
okay, me too.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 November 2013 at 12:39am
I just wanna say, even tho KDV was banned. I would still like honest votes. If KDV is Big Game, he was the MOB leader and id like that against my stats win or lose.

Thanks, Chatta
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 November 2013 at 10:25pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 November 2013 at 9:08am
are we voting on this? 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 December 2013 at 12:06am
Chatta your rhyme here felt a little too structured and against KDV whose flow was more brutal it felt like you needed to change it up to battle his style. Saying he's not the perfect man and wears label clothing wasn't that harsh

KDV nice wordplay here. Caps locking random words happened lots right through your verse. Use the opponents name in place of he and it'd be more direct too

MVGT KDV
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 December 2013 at 12:01pm
Ok this one is obvious to me.

Don't want to give da vinci a load of feedback because he is banned. But he did enough to win this, he had better punches and some kool nameplays for the personals.

Chatta, go back to thr drawing board, though your drop wasn't horrible it just wasn't to the standard of your opponents. Work on producing hard hitting punchlines with metaphors and go from there.

Winner: King Da Vinci
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