Introductions: dis is a few one linas please chek

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    Posted: 17 November 2003 at 3:21pm

your gay u rap worse than david gray

are u gonna do the transfer or a re u finkin about ur cancer

are u ready for me to say when im gonna spray with my ak

ull neva beat me bitch please ill put so manny holes in ya ull be mistaken for swiss cheese

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Ash121 pass the bong along 1 to this kid whos in trouble he needs a hit for the

double.

Spray me with ur AK tell me that its ok bring it to the uk

never go to strangeways they bum u up sideways

david gray is there 2 pray.

on - his - life that u are gay,

dont make the same mistake and play dont bring me down too ur decay.

This was a shit rhyme but 1ks better than ur rhyme

 

Peace out

<the only way to choose is to be chosen>

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Now i gotta tell u both u gotta lotta talent, but im afraid that Devan says its a lie and u havent, i never seen so much waste of a rhyme, i never seen so much time not put into them lines, when i spit, i fully comitted to make shaw im better compared to anythin u spitted, thats life, the stab in your back thats my knife, the girl on my arm thats your wife, now i no, that u flow not as good as me though, but u still gotta try and giv me everythin u through, so when u ready for me and my rhymes then jus say go, and ill rip u apart, worse than sadam at the dinner table again when he farts, and when i rhyme ill b moving up the charts caz devan x has got it on so p unit we march. PEACE DAWG
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U had it goin but then it fucked up flowin take a look again an try an do it the same.........(with alot of changes)

Originally posted by devan devan wrote:

the girl on my arm thats your wife, now i no, that u flow not as good as me though, but u still gotta try and giv me everythin u through, so when u ready for me and my rhymes then jus say go, and ill rip u apart, worse than sadam at the dinner table again when he farts, and when i rhyme ill b moving up the charts caz devan x has got it on so p unit we march. PEACE DAWG

I cant believe this shit ama seein he must take coke or he wudnt be MC-in,....cause taken a closer look at this fuck witt crook
i can c why his name is makin people insane,
P unit better not loose it this fuckers inhumane
dick spits like bla bla
give us the MIC an ta ta
i'll be seein u far far
cause ur not a superstar
How u dis me its bizarre
lets get off this la la
cause am bored with ur shit!!!!
P do do P do do P not g-unit.

 

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i cant believe wot im seein, dis past believin, caz this man hittin at me wen u got rhymes that couldnt be newhere near as good as the lines i spit, fully comit to your shit, pick out that dick, finish him of with a KRITICAL hit, now guess who back, fulla stack come prepard with pack of snacks to wait out in my camp, to see if he can handle the chat that i have coming his way, and if he good then he will obey, im sorry but that jus how the p unit pay and if it your day, then u wont meet me again, caz i mite jus finish this gay. Peace dawg
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this gay.... does it continue

Pussy unit comin all hoes out there

open up n let the poor dick in,he lookin for pussy but cant find ne in here

devan u probabluy look like a monch wit the hidden wanna be pimp look/but remeber u beef wit us on this site well leave u ripped n shook

whatever bitch
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You both bout to leave bruised / abused tied and noosed /   DEVAN thinks he's pregnant by Kritical sayin "what  do we do" /

Fuck the both of you faggot draq's with plastic jackets didnt weara condom ""wrappa"" now aid's took away both yo's """laughter""/

not to be rude / but it takes " TWO " /

Duece dudes boo'd cruel n crude in a couple lines in my single rap " INTERLUDE"/

Oh nah helll nah blow up yo car if you get mad bout my mad rymes and wanna brawl/

I got you dislexic as your mind " stalls " /

got you jumpin like "THE RING" when yah getta phone call/

Must be'ah sign/

to much incline for your jet intakes to take when oxygen thin like whats mention in  this shit "written"/

punish both of you put super glue in yah vaseline injected in yah condoms  through the tube..MINDOFSATANS extra special " LUBE "/

I best take my technologies of rapthologies and inherit absence of my presence givin you noob's vetran "lessons"/

This be mind a Satan from texas ah ""texan"" / HIP HOP RAPPA not wantin to watch'n gay MC's  "" "ass spread'n""/

if you see my name you see pure fear/

Ide talk bout watchin your rear / but you both are not the sexuality for me to be sayin shit like that here /  fuckit..

YOUR RYMES SUCK.. and you both are ""QUEER""/

 

This wasnt justa diss'n it was an evaluation with metaphorical lesson's with minor laserations just spitt'n rymes no offence taken they know me as MINDofSATAN if you wanna height'n your skills just slightly bite the shit im sayin and youll be toppling mountains and notice more MIC's are breakin but never let it be forsaken guru's notta nuff to descript the legit spit's from.....

 

.......MINDOFSATAN....

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Adios...

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ok

p-man taking over
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U stupid chickenhonker

if I ever saw u I wudn't look to stomp ya

while ur gettin raped by sheep that romp ya

when its over I'd b on ya

swinging wit a baseball bat

coz of ur weak lyrical attack

on this newbie KriTicaL watch ur back

only thing kritical about that

is the fact u did ur best and still came out whack

only thing critical about u

is ur blood supply bein drained by me

while ur in ICU.

 

keep it goin Ash121

 



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chicken honker,lol.......aint heard that  ina while, infact, aint ever heard that,
whatever bitch
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