Clash for the Cash: CFC Prelim: Vellum vs Exoduzt

Ex
7-0 should come with an asterisk so I don't know why he goes and he's braggin…
I'm known to be savage while you only faced Shankley Ashley and a poet on acid…
Ive seen these uses quite a few times now played concept and punch not hard hitting

List who you beat that's credible Don't get nervous son just list me some…
Oh you can't cus your opponents record combined is a measly thirty one and fifty one…
This is ok I see you did the research for a personal

throw your topical punch your wordplay won't make a serious fight song…
and what the fucks a vellum? That's just shit that real lyricists write on…
Lol I get where your going witg this. Ok

these lines will finish an diminish your health don't let that record deceive you…
you joined the MOB your dissin yourself and honestly that's why no one believes you…
Couldve been better pretty weak closer

Vs

Vell

here's no way that I'm taking a one hundred buck loss..
This a 'preliminary verse'...So I'm just shaking the 'Duzt Off!'
Pretty decent opener

You 'Suck Duzt' like a vacuum nozzle pressed to a rug..
He's softer then gelatin so I'll flattin "Exo_Skeleton" like I stepped on a Bug!
This was really pretty nice, couldve used a better set up tho

I'm way beyond "Ex_Caliber" fuck that "Old Sword"..Oh Lord!
I'll put "Exo in a Box" like a "Tic-Tac-Toe Board!" (xo)
Again nice

His chances are thin as a phone chord, My flows mockin' this punk..
Cuz He Couldn't "Raise Brows In The Hood" giving "Botox To A Monk!"
Lol ok


Vote to Vellum harder punches and smoother read

Nice with the nameplays

Vs

Flow: Vell; Alot Smoother, Structure Was Alot Cleaner, Easier to Read.
Punches: Vell; They Connected Alot Stronger, Better Wording, and Fresher Concepts.
Multies: Neither Really Displayed Any Multies, Vell Had Like One in His Closer. Lol. Nothing to Write Home About in This Category For Either.
Metaphors: Vell's Were Alot More Polished, and Executed Properly, and Exo Didn't Really Have Any.
Wordplay/Nameplay: Vell's Nameplay Was a Little Played, But Nicely Used. Exo Only Had That Calf Skin Paper Line
Personals: Exoduzt Actually Had One. Lol. So He Gets This Category By Default. Haha

MVGT Vellum
Jus a Much More Cleanly Executed, and More Advanced Battle Rap.
His Punches Hit Well, The Flow Was Consistent, The Wordplay/Nameplay Was Heavily Infused With It, Overall a Solid Verse.
Exoduzt's Verse Was Decent, Jus a Little Basic, and The Structure is Unattractive So It Makes It Read Harder Than Vellums.
The Concepts Were Actually Decent, Jus Used or Worded Poorly.
Decent Battle Y'all

There's no way that I'm taking a one hundred buck loss
..This a 'preliminary verse'...So I'm just shaking the 'Duzt Off!'
You 'Suck Duzt' like a vacuum nozzle pressed to a rug
..He's softer then gelatin so I'll flattin "Exo_Skeleton" like I stepped on a Bug!
I'm way beyond "Ex_Caliber" fuck that "Old Sword"
..Oh Lord! I'll put "Exo in a Box" like a "Tic-Tac-Toe Board!" (xo)
His chances are thin as a phone chord, My flows mockin' this punk
..Cuz He Couldn't "Raise Brows In The Hood" giving "Botox To A Monk!"

Opener was nice, good setup with reference to whats at stake in the battle and i liked the punch, good way to start. The Exo Skeleton bar was kool, i did have to google what it meant though, an expo would have helped, but once i understood it made perfect sense, its a nice bar but nothing to phone home about. Oh yes! That tic tac toe bar was real nice, loved that, made perfect sense, i got it straight away and boy did it land, sick punch and good setup too. The last bar's punchline is sick! However, its generic which takes away from it, try and aim all punches at the opponent for maximum effect.

Overall: its a dope verse, i really liked the tic tac toe bar.



7-0 should come with an asterisk so I don't know why he goes and he's braggin…
I'm known to be savage while you only faced Shankley Ashley and a poet on acid…
List who you beat that's credible Don't get nervous son just list me some…
Oh you can't cus your opponents record combined is a measly thirty one and fifty one…
throw your topical punch your wordplay won't make a serious fight song…
and what the fucks a vellum? That's just shit that real lyricists write on…
these lines will finish an diminish your health don't let that record deceive you…
you joined the MOB your dissin yourself and honestly that's why no one believes you…

First bar was weak tbh, in the punch you're just simply naming people that he has beat, how's that a diss? Not feelin it dude. Ok its like second bar just continues on from the first bar, the "not beating tough opponents" personal isn't that great if I'm honest, i mean i doubt he specifically calls these people out and its not like he is 40-0 and just keeps facing the same weaker opponents. The third bar is a nice idea but it needs to be a bit more creative than what you produced for it to hit home. Last bar, again i wasn't feeling it, it needs rewording in my opinion.

Overall: you need to be more direct, 2 bars were practically wasted on a weak personal.


Verdict: I'm surprised, its an easy one to call, Vellum was more direct and was better with his punchlines.

Winner: Vellum.