Elevation Centre: The Enclave

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   This isn't complete, but before I continue it, I'm wondering what people think about it.

I form evil quatrains
torture from the Renaissance age
pressin' hombres
'til thier body is concave
welcome to the mindset of hip hop's enclave
beyond brave
hand feeding tigers chopped steak
in the Sunderbans
a place where humans are entrees
" dondè ? "
a thousand miles east of Bombay
I leave cities destroyed like Pompeii
mouth is Mount Vesuvius
even when I'm blasè

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m1k3 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 27 June 2014 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 171	Post Options Post Reply Quote m1k3 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: The Enclave Posted: 27 June 2014 at 7:17pm
	This isn't complete, but before I continue it, I'm wondering what people think about it. I form evil quatrains torture from the Renaissance age pressin' hombres 'til thier body is concave welcome to the mindset of hip hop's enclave beyond brave hand feeding tigers chopped steak in the Sunderbans a place where humans are entrees " dondè ? " a thousand miles east of Bombay I leave cities destroyed like Pompeii mouth is Mount Vesuvius even when I'm blasè