Elevation Centre: My World

In my world you wouldn't say "why"
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Now eat the mushroom and don't get sick
cause if you do you'll have no clue
of what the  afterdeath came to do
an fuck Gel Tabs I took that liquid to
predict my peak to reach the limit soon
I'm push free speech like it's a broom. {Sweeping Broom Sound}

now how profound can a white boy sound?
on a track that's black and mild
watch this little wigger get buck wild
with the pick-a-ninny styles

Now you worms squirm in my firm
You falloff after one sherm hit
like "Oh my God its permanent"

you've gone soft on the condenser
While my flows continue to getting dense
when I dispense it's sensed-an-heard  [sounds like: censored]
I aint making up words
I'm a genius at work
over time, I get subsequent plays
you get substituted and played

I'm Charles in charge of these bars
you Tony Danza I can't stand ya
A grown ass man in pajamas
Like, you got no stamina
unlike my mouth
which is never jamming up
just steady slamming ya
You better study and it crame up
for the final exam son
When I comes to fuck
I aint given none
Not One
Not One [rhythmically repeat & fade out with the beat]
-afterdeath

So the flow was off at several times here, it worked on a few spots where your rhymes actually connected to each other. Maybe you could focus on the basic pattern you already had in some of the lines, but being more consistent on it? The content, well, I would say with the Tony Danza reference, it had a fun part to it. Keep it up!