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    Posted: 22 October 2004 at 9:06am
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    Good luck 1

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 October 2004 at 12:43pm

    Fuck checkin' in...

    Yo, Frank... how many times do I need to defeat you...?
    You could tighten your shit but there's nothing for you to excrete through,
    You ducked our last battle and that was a month ago,
    You've no votes in the poll cos noone wants to know,
    This No-Show's so low that's he's bottom of the rankings,
    I'll treat this soft kid with cotton gloves for spanking,
    Then I'll bring the tanks in cos this Lyrical Warfare,
    You're scared cos my multisyllables' all flair,
    No boy does it as rubbish as Lloyd Duddridge,
    He's only fucking ducking to avoid coverage,
    But he's destined to be destroyed once more,
    I dream of success whereas taunts haunt your's,
    You don't rap... you only run your gob like Cheddar Bob,
    Giving hand jobs to Mods...  Go out and get a job,
    Did you forget you're not me...?  This geek's spotty,
    How the fuck you gonna beat me if you can't beat Scotty...?

    Adios...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 8:03am
    just like ann boeyln your loosing your "head" for cheating
    senors styles out of date like 80's hillsborough seating
    just like the "cold war" senors all talk
    hese verses are about as sucsessful as barder on a sposered walk
    senors falling off more than van goghs ear
    your rhymes are below me like the southern hemisphere
    franks about to reverse the spanish inquisition
    just like judas your veiws are treated with derision
    trying to be funny will be the death of you like tommy cooper
    im above you like a ball from carl hooper
    just like bush you need to rig the vote
    your words will lead to your death like the book ann frank wrote
    franks rhymes "kane" like im randolph hearst
    my wins gonna bring about a chain reaction like emily pankhurst
    franks throwing his hardcore punches for this win
    senor cant see the whole picture like abraham lincon
    the punching machine

    bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 8:05am
    i cant be fucked to explain half the verse
    the punching machine

    bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 2:05pm
    Um... SP: personals were good, rhymes were unique, flow was as usual (on point), punches were hard

    FW: Flow was better (much better) than before... wordplay really didn't do it for me. It was weak and never led to a hard punch (at ALL)

    so: SP1, so if you vote for SP2, this battle will end up with SP3 (points)

    for the retards:
    Vote: SP
    Insert something rappy here
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 2:16pm

    Looking at Frank's spit... every line was a punch... and almost every line contained wordplay and/or simile...

    Maybe some explanations were required cos the retards wouldn't necessarily know about Anne Boleyn... Barder (...the RAF dude who lost his legs)... Van Gogh... Tommy Cooper... Carl Hooper... Ann Frank... Randolph Hearst... Emily Pankhurst... and Abraham Lincoln...

    Good battle...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 2:29pm

    ^ You had to ask me who Pankhurst was...

    ...but point taken... Using such references is proof to historical knowledge... Hip Hop battle voters aren't obliged to have historical knowledge... Explanations were required really, and even so, people may not like the fact that the verse was essentially 10 historical simile punchlines rolled into one which all loosely rhyme at the last syllable... People may have preferred the rhyming/personal elements of your opponent, Frank... So though there have been complaints of this vote (on MSN incase readers are wondering) this is a public statement stating the vote will stand and that voting may continue from here...

    Frank, you are free to explain the punches in a reply to this thread if you want to...

    Senor Perfecto 1 - 0 Frank White

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 2:38pm
    OK... this is why I voted against frank:
    Van gogh's ear did not fall off, he CUT it off, and putting a shitload of historical figures does nothing for me, I'm sorry. it seems like he just remembered shit from history class and put it in a verse. Like I told frank on msn, anybody can do that. Perfecto, you taught me that voting is mostly based on preference. I preferred your verse. Stop trying to sway votes against you (lmao)


    your rhymes are below me like the southern hemisphere   <Weak and improperly used
    just like bush you need to rig the vote    <weak and played out
    just like ann boeyln your loosing your "head" for cheatin     <"losing your head" shit overused... by YOU!


    4 lines began with "just like"
    Repetitiveness=BAD

    With verse or prose, I shred fruits like Black & Decker*
    You sound like- and break them in loss colums, you have the wackest record **
    Owned by the king like i bought your dirty ass
    I haven't seen repetition this bad since the same prayer in every mass


    *Black & Decker makes electronics... among those, a blender
    ** scotty said he sounds like a broken record cause of repetition, he has the worst record in site history, which is some sort of LA record


    and motherfucker, that's how you use wordplay
    and I didn't even try..
    Insert something rappy here
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 2:46pm
    and 2 explain a few things

    rig the vote/ bush - he voted for himself in the who you think will win poll.
    loose head/ ann boelyn- senor lost his gf so he wont get no head he got dumped for cheating
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 4:26pm

    Ass battle lol Sorry wasnt really feeling this however

    Frank-Not bad flow is nice stayed on point..Punchlines were Weak man Really needed Re-wording on most of them..Personals were cool wordplay was weak 2..again its mostly the wording of ur lines..if u re-word ur shit man u cud of killed this

    Senior-Nice flow on point like Frank..punchlines hit few missed but couple of nice 1's..nice personals..Overall you just had the better verse

    Vote-Senior...Due to the fact his verse was better

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 7:06pm

    �Argh...!

    The shit/excrete punch is played out...  I voted for myself for the sole purpose of using a particular punch... otherwise it wouldn't have worked...  And what the fuck are cotton gloves...?

    That's it...  The rest was Perfecto...

    Adios...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 7:20pm
    Frank - Came nice

    Senor - Didnt

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 7:39pm
    You have to explain better than that.
    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2004 at 8:40pm

    That is a personal issue between Frank and Raptor...

    He doesn't have to explain anything...

    Adios...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 October 2004 at 7:18am

    Who's running this tournament? Yeah I thought so too.

    It doesn't stand. 2-0 Senor Perfecto.

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 October 2004 at 7:19am
    I was joking

    Punch:Senor stronger
    Multis:Senor
    Flow: Senor for once
    Personals:Senor

    Frank:Poooooooor wordplay, punchs missed and had bad english lol (is it your primary language )

    Senor:A few punchs hit nicely flow was good overall better verse

    Vote:Senor

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 October 2004 at 7:21am

    Oh God... I'm gonna close this real quick...

    Senor wins by KO.

    Senor Perfecto: 3 points
    Frank White: 1 point

    Adi-fucking-os.

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
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