1-2 Punch League: Rutter Knows Best vs Slip - Playoff R1 |
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 05 January 2017 at 10:39pm |
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Slip
Standard Member Joined: 04 June 2013 Location: St Johns. N.L. Status: Offline Points: 1612 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-33-0 Form: LLLWLW |
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I bet money, that this leagues the biggest highlight or your life ain't it Rutters funny like a class clown dropout, dummy who never graduated
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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
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Rutter knows best
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icy flaws in his game when even Axy can brake him in battle Each time Slip trip or fall.. dudes just an accident waiting to happen
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#bananas
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spume corrupt
Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3162 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. So good looks on getting them lines in guys Hope you ain't the only ones, obviously I'm not even getting my pen out until there's 60 seconds untill deadline... So .@z Battle Slop I see on both angles bruv, the league and the Comedy award But you didn't work anything... Am keeping real to help out here fam, work a punch if you can work a concept if you can Make a punch be about something Best advice fam Rotter It's simple bro but it is at least direct and holding the standard format for a single punch battle Vote Rutter Could have dug deeper and been more original Slip you should have given 100 you would have won Close battle Well done |
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S Dubb
Groupie Joined: 03 December 2016 Location: Cincinnati Status: Offline Points: 404 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-7-1 Form: LLLLNL |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Decent battle you guys, both came different routes, but, only one actually landed a jab..... Rut: There was no flow, but it's not really necessary in a 1-2 punch battle, yet nice to have...... I like the personal you used with the whole Axy thing, added nicely to the set up...... Then nice name flip to start the second line, added more impact to the set up.... So you have excellent set up work here, then came time for the delivery, and it was pretty decent..... More of a hard jab then light punch..... Still pretty good, plus had a little humor to it, which I always like more..... pretty good bar..... Slip: Ok.... Nice personals, you through a couple in there, the fact that he's running this league and the fact of the class clown award...... So the set up is nice, you have the personals going for you, but you lack creativity...... You took the basic route, using simple personals, and didn't really turn them into a punch, so they were just pointless mentions..... Your bar set up was okay, but you just didn't deliver nothing here, a miss bro..... good set up, just needed to work the punch in and you failed to do it...... Vote- Rutter
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Topical Twist League= 1-0
1-2 Punch League= 0-3 Regular Text= 0-1 Alias= 0-1 Topical= 1-0 Horrorcore= 1-0 Overall= 3-5 |
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. wasnt a fan of either bar tbh.... Slip your wordplay was basic bro i see what you were doing but you need to bring more clever shit for these match ups. and your set up was worded weird. Rutter had a decent bar seen waaay better and battle problem is a stretched rhyme for me here but i got you winning with the more creative bar i guess |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Slip, This was very generic, and I found the end rhyme a bit of a stretch and awkward, but I can see the improvement, and im sure others can too. Ruts, This was savage, and very funny to boot. Sure similar plays have been made, but i dont personally remember them, so this came across as fresh in its structure and delivery. Mvgt ruts |
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Lord Puente
Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Slip, this was a complete miss to me, there was nothing hard hitting about it. You been dropping decent disses lately, you should have been more prepared for this one. You had an angle, you just didn't execute it well. Rutt, you know this already I'm sure, but for text, those end rhymes were not successful. The lunch was there and I liked your bar, really, I liked everything except the end rhymes were bougie. None the less, rutt still had a good punch, although end rhymes are big in this... but mvgt rutt rutt |
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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Voting closed Rutter wins 5-0
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