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Neek
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Topic: Tall Order Small Doses (feat Law & Nigma)Posted: 27 May 2017 at 3:59pm |
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Neek: its a minor collision inspiring writtens the siberian, sci-fi edition of enviromental sickness compiled files of cataclysmic lab inventions I scrap in minutes, pens and pads are sacrilegious rather chant my manuscripts into shattered mirrors than collab with inferior, caponier-class cavaliers they lack the tact, "Im poster child", my jams are feared the camera capture, the aftermath that the fans'll cheer Law: If you saw smelly cheese, You ran into endeeze Nigma: ![]() Its Nigma The Goat Im Bahhhhh'd to the Bone… Neek ghost wrote that. Fact. Mask exposed. Past orgasmic, tantric with the prose Page erupts with paper cuts, I’m Gambit wit the throws Catapulting stone, all survivors are perplexed by me I covet a combination of content and complexity Nonsense is expected, contenders can’t compete with venom Left them on the web, sending Peter Parkers police to get em |
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Sammy
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Posted: 27 May 2017 at 4:43pm |
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lmao@Law!
i'm feelin some kind of way cuz i'm not included in this collaboration. i don't know why shit like this is so appealing to me but just really dug the scheme, the flow and the gymnastics of it. i want on the next one!
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Crimson Juice
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Posted: 28 May 2017 at 9:23am |
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Short and sweet i liked the humour here,nothing wrong with bringing smiles to ppl's
faces,Neek I liked the wording in your offering,it made this stand out overall,it gave your verse a polished vibe,and with Law acting the minimalist here just made it work, then Nigma on the superhero's theme was a cool inclusion too,my only gripe is its length,this collab was over in a heart beat,still solid for what it was.. peace. |
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King Jehu
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Posted: 28 May 2017 at 4:01pm |
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Neek, you have a way of using imperfect rhymes in such a perfect way because it opens up a unique way of putting words together. It may translate better in audio, but I appreciate having heard so much of your shit that I can read things in your voice in my head.
"Past orgasmic, tantric with the prose Page erupts with paper cuts, I’m Gambit wit the throws" 5 fire emojis from the judges. Law, that was incredible. Less is more. |
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