Open Mic: King Arthur the Undefeatable

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   King Arthur the Undefeatable
God's King

Peace was in my realm, trouble was just a memory
Years have passed with no galactical transcendency 
God gave me capacity and a rainbow in my mentality
No foreign entities of unknown came to visit me
Base dimensions come to complain with questions and intersection
But sleep was formed in my compression of ending ceased
I divided time to shape my symphony of sinning speak
All that I mentioned comes to visit my empathy
Lovely granite comes to panic in the garden of forgiveness
Until peace was formed in the hold of my complexity
Scenes of scenes suppressing me, the wilderness leave my soul
Peace ender keeps like a meaning of my thrones
Hardly favorite, outside the stars I made it
I triangulate the dimensions until my comprehension is better
No one knows the program of singularity informing me
I sold the stars to everyone that keeps informing me

My first real poem. Someone please give me feedback

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	King Arthur the Undefeatable God's King Peace was in my realm, trouble was just a memory Years have passed with no galactical transcendency God gave me capacity and a rainbow in my mentality No foreign entities of unknown came to visit me Base dimensions come to complain with questions and intersection But sleep was formed in my compression of ending ceased I divided time to shape my symphony of sinning speak All that I mentioned comes to visit my empathy Lovely granite comes to panic in the garden of forgiveness Until peace was formed in the hold of my complexity Scenes of scenes suppressing me, the wilderness leave my soul Peace ender keeps like a meaning of my thrones Hardly favorite, outside the stars I made it I triangulate the dimensions until my comprehension is better No one knows the program of singularity informing me I sold the stars to everyone that keeps informing me My first real poem. Someone please give me feedback

Alien365 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 31 December 2020 Status: Offline Points: 43	Post Options Post Reply Quote Alien365 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 March 2025 at 11:32am
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