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    Posted: 20 December 2004 at 5:26pm

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16lines Max (no minimum)
Anybody can drop first.

No biting
No feedin
no recyclin
no flippin
no swayin the votes
no Crew votes
no dickride/hate votes

Verses Due Wednesday 22nd December 04' (midnight Uk time)

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2004 at 5:47pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2004 at 2:01am
u again...check but i dont know bout the deadline...Wat time is that converted to Australia...stupid time differance...ill jus post straight away.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2004 at 2:10am

11 am...thurday morning

I am the one that knocks...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2004 at 10:19am

 

Iight...  

ill post now to give etern time to unfold his bitch/
 watch me illuminate this bitch wit a flick of this empty bulbs switch/
 no glitch or concern as I send etern on this u-turn and then into a back flip/
 grass burn as my words drag his ass on a no return whack trip/
got eternity cluckin in fear wit briggzy pullin eggs out his rear/
illuminati only want to spear this queer, why else would etern be here/
got u caged like a lab rat sweatin it cause u can smell the cheese/
drop in gay porn wage prices got u regretin ever droppin to ur knees/  
 
u cant grasp my flow it flow�s like sand grain�s through an hour glass/
 strainin ur brain bringin u an second understandin of a pain in the ass/
maybe u should give ur partner mouth to plug i think u deflated it/
my verse got etern on a toilet rollercoaster...givin him the screamin shits/
Jus lit a joint, Ur knees on fire..helium based balls got this kid in a choir/

u seem to be illuminati�s only flat tire, its ur ass not skillz that ya crew desire'/
my words playin with his mind an got him wrappin his head in foil/
i melted this bitch an restrictin him in a wheelchair...creatin vegitable oil/

 

otay goin to sleep now...stupid deadline...lol night



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from my raw spit,ur bone an flesh,im young an fit,well hung an feelin fresh,
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2004 at 10:31am

typo
u cant grasp my flow it drops like sand grain�s through an hour glass/

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2004 at 3:45pm
I'm going out, so there's a slight chance I'll miss the deadline. I might be back in time, though. But it's whatever. Your call if I'm D/Q or not.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2004 at 6:38pm

Just got home, and still had time kill him... here goes...

My turn and I ain't even done laughing... Haha!

If you run your mouth then we�ll kill you, you can�t blame us
U wonder why yo� talk so much shit. That�s easy, yo� an anus
Beat your sorry ass so hard you�d think you was a faggot in jail
Defeat yourself when you spit, fuckin retards don�t win, they fail
You can�t beat me with spits that don�t make any sense, at all
I bring the heat; I�m here to smash SDC�s face all over the wall
You run all around drinking coke like your some kinda gangster *
But yo� just a geek, faggot, joke, jacking off over anime manga
This bitch, idiot thinks he�s gonna get lucky with the second shot **
Drop bombs all over this weasel, drop heat, cuz X marks the spot
U think ya gonna win? You better think again, you whack bastard
The way you�re dazed, it�s like a critical / dire effect if smack lasted
You�re acting without the script, carry on and you�ll meet yo� crypt
You don�t know your lines, spit whack rhymes that just get flipped
Faggots like u get beaten first, and to kill you I do whatever it takes
Finished n� I�ve murdered u, who�s my next victim outta all yo� fakes�?

*He's obsessed with coke-a-cola - "Coke - cocaine", "drinking coke" go figure...
**I've K.O'd him once already

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2004 at 7:57pm

SDC... some OK similes but not hittin' hard enough... I like what you tried to do with the rhyme scheme, just work in more syllables next time... flow OK... but yea... very little impact

Eternity... Anus is played... manga was wack... and the coke line didn't work 'cuz you used the word "drink" so it lost effect... plus Coke/cocaine is played as fuck... everythin' not commented on was filler...

OK... there's a moral to this story.

If you can't be lyrical, don't attempt it.

Eternity tried to be smarter, didn't have a single good punch... they all mis-hit, whereas SDC's were simple and weak, but at least they landed with some originality... Neither rhymed very well but Eternity's a bit more advanced there, flow kinda even.

VOTE: S Double C

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 December 2004 at 5:19am


thanks for your vote orion
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uppin for votes





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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 December 2004 at 9:17am
lmfao
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 December 2004 at 2:00pm
Ive talked to E about this heated battle
and i think SDOUBLEshittestnameeverC took this

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 December 2004 at 4:30am
uppin
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from my raw spit,ur bone an flesh,im young an fit,well hung an feelin fresh,
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 December 2004 at 12:13pm
2-0 SDC
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 January 2005 at 11:41am
vote sdc.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 January 2005 at 11:47am

Close this

2-2 (Crew Scores)

Illuminati Points

SJAY No show
Frank No show

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Stealth No show
BSD Defeats Eternity ko

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 January 2005 at 12:02pm
SDC, not BSD
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 January 2005 at 12:04pm
Lmao


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 January 2005 at 12:15pm
lol same thing
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