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Scotty32
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Topic: [R1] Team B -vs- Team APosted: 30 December 2004 at 6:38am |
Team B = Tequila Sunrise & ILLA Edited by Scotty_32 |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 06 January 2005 at 6:06am |
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Team A = -Orion- & King Jehu
-Orion-
You both know most that O an' Jehu's raps're savage Why's Teq in a crew he said were TOO WACK TO TAG WITH?! (lol... tru story) Renegades, you faggots grab ya bollocks an' honour us I'm puttin' down Tequila like this was Alcoholics Anonymous ILLA too wack for Renegades; ya fear cursed this mayne (din't wanna face us) You w(h)ine all the time but you gettin' much worse wit' age You faggots know I'm sickest, just remember you pussy, son ILLA wants a tourny win, shoulda asked TO ENTER THE ROOKIE ONE!!! King Jehu Sorry, I've been so busy I don't have time to take a fucking piss anymore. Anyway, here it is. I'll wet you and bring the heat, you know you flow wack So I'll call you niggas laundry and fold you both back Cause O. and J. stab bitches like Simpson did Whether it's TeC or TeQ, My Text will skin this kid Expose you like I'm supposed to... I will wreck both Illa was murked by Frank white, but he still gets votes! Tequila nice? you must be loco Illa's grown up with LA but I'll un-Root him like Black Thought going solo! Team B = Tequila Sunrise & ILLA ILLA:
Jehu couldnt come wid BIG PUNs, if they were buried in the ground//O vs I again.. he out in the first round cus '0' aint nothing except zero pounds*// (brrrrt) DAMN onion u aint 'bossin shit! cus like a "bullemic" rappa im 'flossin sick'//I koed ice-c he dissed, but he had u runnin' fo "cover" like Eazy's dick//* This is Tyson-shit i fight for fame, so like this rich kid's sig, i'll strike his name//Cambridge aint hood Y u actin' strange??! on real blocks U'd be "froze" like David blane//* What?!? filla multies an bitin' chino's rhymes, u aint real bitches like pacino's lines//TEQ an ILL sick wid it we masterminds, only time these guys [conquer/conker] is at dinner time!// explan Jehu big puns he idol, i knocked orion outta a first round before Eazy E had dies ov aids, peeps say O didnt want it wid ICE-c Check his sig, lives in cambridge and david blane got froze in ice U remember playin conkers in autumn lol Tequila Sunrise: BEAT: XZIBIT - MOTHERFUCKER Your a mere queer, i fear youll go nowhere with your rhymesNo its not my M.O. although ill hit a guy wit four eyes* Dont try the sunrise, hey "J" im not that PUN guy* So get the fuck off his punchlines, and let his nuts dry OOOHH...HERE WE GO! Lets get it poppin, youd think im pourin cheerios cuz O is droppin Illas gettin pics of his bitch and O is knowin nothin of it* The pain ill leave is too much for any amount of IbuProFen* Last time anyone took "O.J" seriously, he won a heisman trophy* THE EXPLANATIONS: *King Jehu got glasses...4 eyes *hes a huge Big Pun fan *Illa supposedly received pictures from Os girlfriend *Ibuprofen aka advil *O. J won a heisman...Orion and Jehu you may begin voting |
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BRIGGZY
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Posted: 06 January 2005 at 8:23am |
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Right Battle Was Niiiiice.. You both know most that O an' Jehu's raps're savage Overall you both came Sick with it..Flows were Dope..Nice punchlines and both verses came nice with Creativity.. Jehu couldnt come wid BIG PUNs, if they were buried in the ground//O vs I again.. he out in the first round cus '0' aint nothing except zero pounds*// (brrrrt) --------------- |
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Senor Perfecto
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Posted: 06 January 2005 at 11:48am |
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Orion and Jewho... short verses and similar styles didn't give either of you much room to display your typical lyrical flair... Both had some good personals... but whilst Jewho directed more punches towards their opponents... Orion sacrificed attacking in favour of lyrical boasts... tequila sunrise and illa... one of you had good punches but simple rhymes... and the other had good rhymes with constant but inconsistent punches... It doesn't seem like you knew what each other was doing... as you both used Pun-lines... Hence the spits look like you're simply taking turns to diss both your opponents regardless of who your partner is... Funny how Jewho and tequila both came up with the O.J.-line... though tequila's was better... In the end... neither team came together as well as a Tag-Team should have... Vote: tequila sunrise and illa... Adios... |
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Cuba
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Posted: 06 January 2005 at 12:37pm |
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I'm the same as SP in the respect I thought you should have worked togetha better as a team...I thought Orion's verse was poor, consisted of a couple of plays I didnt like that much (Tequila bin done b4 and the whine was simple but still worked ok)...opener was more of a punch on him than the actual tag team...coz u were biggin up your crew basically and ILLA is in it, worked ok genst Teq but kinda weak in the context...closer was good but still singularly directed....Jehu was basically the same, I was feelin the closer and the laundry play but the verse wasnt aggressive enuf fa me...your styles didnt work well togetha, kinda too similar fa me |
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Tigger
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Posted: 07 January 2005 at 12:42pm |
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Team A = -Orion- & King Jehu
-Orion-
You both know most that O an' Jehu's raps're savage Why's Teq in a crew he said were TOO WACK TO TAG WITH?! ^^ flow was on point, nice multie, ok personal/punch
Renegades, you faggots grab ya bollocks an' honour us I'm puttin' down Tequila like this was Alcoholics Anonymous ^^nice punch, flow was tight
ILLA too wack for Renegades; ya fear cursed this mayne (din't wanna face us) You w(h)ine all the time but you gettin' much worse wit' age ^^punch was decent didnt feel the last rhyme tho, flow was good.
You faggots know I'm sickest, just remember you pussy, son ILLA wants a tourny win, shoulda asked TO ENTER THE ROOKIE ONE!!! ^^good closer, decent punch and tight flow
King Jehu Sorry, I've been so busy I don't have time to take a fucking piss anymore. Anyway, here it is. I'll wet you and bring the heat, you know you flow wack So I'll call you niggas laundry and fold you both back ^^good wordplay/meta, nice multie and flow
Cause O. and J. stab bitches like Simpson did Whether it's TeC or TeQ, My Text will skin this kid ^^ok punch, flow was tight
Expose you like I'm supposed to... I will wreck both Illa was murked by Frank white, but he still gets votes! ^^decent punch, good flow
Tequila nice? you must be loco Illa's grown up with LA but I'll un-Root him like Black Thought going solo! ^^ hella tight closer, props.
Team B = Tequila Sunrise & ILLA ILLA:
Jehu couldnt come wid BIG PUNs, if they were buried in the ground//O vs I again.. he out in the first round cus '0' aint nothing except zero pounds*// (brrrrt) ^^flow was dope, punch was ok but it seemed like u over complicated it tryna hit at both in the same bar.
DAMN onion u aint 'bossin shit! cus like a "bullemic" rappa im 'flossin sick'//I koed ice-c he dissed, but he had u runnin' fo "cover" like Eazy's dick//* ^^first line was tight, second was aite but kinda missed.
This is Tyson-shit i fight for fame, so like this rich kid's sig, i'll strike his name//Cambridge aint hood Y u actin' strange??! on real blocks U'd be "froze" like David blane//* ^^fuckin dope bar, great flow and punch
What?!? filla multies an bitin' chino's rhymes, u aint real bitches like pacino's lines//TEQ an ILL sick wid it we masterminds, only time these guys [conquer/conker] is at dinner time!/ ^^pretty weak closer, flow was dope but the punch was pretty weak.
Tequila Sunrise: BEAT: XZIBIT - MOTHERFUCKER Your a mere queer, i fear youll go nowhere with your rhymes
No its not my M.O. although ill hit a guy wit four eyes* ^^flow was tight, punch was funny but coulda been more direct
Dont try the sunrise, hey "J" im not that PUN guy* So get the fuck off his punchlines, and let his nuts dry ^^flow seemed off in the second line, punch was again funny but coulda come harder
OOOHH...HERE WE GO! Lets get it poppin, youd think im pourin cheerios cuz O is droppin Illas gettin pics of his bitch and O is knowin nothin of it* ^^nice flow, kinda bitchy punch, but it hit well
The pain ill leave is too much for any amount of IbuProFen* Last time anyone took "O.J" seriously, he won a heisman trophy* ^^not bad, coulda come harder for a closer tho.
punches: OJ, came more direct and had more personals
humour: IT, tequila killed this category
flow:tie, although OJ were tighter than Teq, Illa had the best flow of the bunch.
wordplay: OJ, jehu had it
creativity:OJ, seemed to have more original punches
overall i gotta give it to OJ i just think they edged out with more polished rhymes, althouh Illa definately had the best bar of the battle in my opinion.
Peace
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Posted: 07 January 2005 at 2:48pm |
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2-2...thanx for the votes...although, i dont understand how my first punch could have come more direct
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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Bolo
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Posted: 07 January 2005 at 4:12pm |
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The Juice - u both came wit ya usual clever shit, n despite wut ice n sp have said i think it came together well...too well...it almost meshed into a single verse, making the lines almost redundant...that aside, y'all had better flow, better wordplay (as a whole), y'all had nice closers, o had nice personals...O had the better verse out of the two of u, n i think out of the whole battle |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Posted: 07 January 2005 at 4:35pm |
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you cant vote man...no crew votes...
but then again, illa isnt ur crew...this is up to scotty... |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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Bolo
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Posted: 07 January 2005 at 4:51pm |
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umm...O asked me to vote, n i think scotty said crew votes r allowed as long as both of u aren't in the same crew...besides i always vote fair...but yea, its up to scotty...
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I am the one that knocks...
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ILLSTARRR
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Posted: 07 January 2005 at 6:17pm |
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His vote is allowed.. 3-2 uppin' |
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Posted: 07 January 2005 at 9:56pm |
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Orion - You had a nice flow going, caught it well, this verse was more personal than anything, not to big on Multis or Wordplay... just straight punches & personals... liked the verse... suppose it could-a been hotter, buh still nice. Jehu - Flow was real Straight... Wordplay was Ill, feeling it to the max... punches were real straight... multis were there, and helped... no real personals... guess Orion said everything for that... nice verse man. Together, you did well, i think it was because... Orion took them out with Personals & Jehu took care of the Wordplay & Punchlines... Props to you two. Illa - Flow was Poor, that really let your verse down... Punches were there, but Structure was weird, and lines were stretched out, so they didnt hit aswell aspossible... Wordplay was uhhh... ok... The Bullemic line has been done so many times, even by frank too... i think you could've done alot better... you didnt. TeQ - Flow was Simple, caught it nice... Punches were pretty tight... Personals, well... they were personals, buh used poorly, you just said things that happend, not use them against them... Wordplay of what you had was decent... Last line was Dope, just the Rhyme didnt match... Well done. Together you didnt do Terrible, just you couldve done alot better. To be Honest, i think O.&.J easily take this... Punches/Wordplay/Flow was just basicaly, Better. Vote/ King Jehu & -Orion- |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Posted: 08 January 2005 at 11:08am |
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for everyvote we get, they get one...
god this will be a long battle |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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Scotty32
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Posted: 08 January 2005 at 3:34pm |
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bolo:
oook - i got mega confused.. i just said bolo and briggzys votes are disallowed due to crew votes bein on... but its JUST renegades who cant vote... so Bolo and Briggzys votes still stand ![]() Edited by Scotty_32 |
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hanGing
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Posted: 08 January 2005 at 4:06pm |
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to be honest i had to read this a few times now..
orion/Jehu.. Neither came fabulous... the personals were there tho, and you had a good smattering of everything else - not your best .. orion came better than jehu here Illa/teq.. If you'd come harder you would have won this.. Just reading through there were bits that i liked.. and bits that i just thought er... wha? simply - i just didnt feel they were as good.. vote Orion and jehu.... |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Posted: 08 January 2005 at 5:20pm |
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4-3 orion n jehu...
FUCK!!
lol good looks on the votes...uppin |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Posted: 08 January 2005 at 5:21pm |
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although, hanging i think you should explain a little better on what we lacked, or had...since you did that for orion n jehu...
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES
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LaWleSs
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Posted: 10 January 2005 at 3:23pm |
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read this shit before..forgot to vote..o was cool..some predictable
lines, alcholics anoymous etc basic name wordplays but it was cool,
flow and multis good, KJ was dope on the mutis tip but his content
wasnt fantastic, felt he could of hit harder..flow was good, disses
were their tho, jus not majorley effective..illa was cool also some
good lines here and their but the flow was kinda hard to catch, which
is surprising since u do audio..felt rhymes could of bin smoother, but
your disses were good at points..Teq..probably the weakest but he had
the best line of the battle..O.j haha nice..i predicted a o.j line but
for orange juice so that was cool..close shit..but i felt oj, more
effective in dissing with cleaner rhymes 2..so yeah..vote-o.j
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Scotty32
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Posted: 10 January 2005 at 3:54pm |
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Team A - Orion & King Jehu win by 5-3
at the start this DEFO was close ![]() anyway *locked* |
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