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    Posted: 07 February 2006 at 7:46am

1. earl simmons is 2. dog man x (DMX)

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how can i rank novice but be lesser than this bitch lil curl,
my batt stats shat but i open mic's better than earl, 1

i aint dog man x, i dont ghost write dodgey phantom texts,2
im random mess, living a grown mans stress, jus to do my best ,

insomniac coz i'll never rest, drink conyak, then commit convicts acts,
I live on a cul d sac, but I aint french, im a small guy but still talkin hench,

yall spent like wad's on tissue, ya leave come back jus to c if we miss u,
i dismiss you im teacher to the class, ur gay preachers praying for my ass,

sleigh ya as david did v goliath, run wid a crowd turn peace into riot's
my rhymes phat i dont need no diets, yall write but ur words are hired,

travelled more than Michelen tyres, more fused than TNT wid its wires,
confused? coz im holier than messiah, make you look old so jus go retire,

my golds turned to platium ur silvers turned to bronze,
im a better rapper than half the gangsta's in the bronx,

im prepared for all warfare, i know when u hustle the court aint fair,
wear a quartz timepiece so, when i say i will, then im gunna b there,











 



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2006 at 4:23pm

It's Dark... Man X...

And this is still NOV... I've given you feedback on ur ish in the past and I don't exactly feel like gettin' my essay on... just keep up... ya style gets a lil too informal to the point it just reads like ur talkin' sometimes... try and make ur bars more concise, less words, better wording of shit... then of course punchlines/rhyme schemes/metaphors/storylines/etc all need improvement/inclusion/experimentation...

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2006 at 7:52pm
I need to hit you up with a couple of essays but I agree with Winston, nice for a Novice but for now I think its best if you stay a novice, peace
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 February 2006 at 8:34pm
LOL @ dog man X

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:02am
im pretty daym sure it dog man x, hence the dog grown. the fact he owns and sells pitbulls, and at the begginin of grand champ hes going on bout his dogs n calls himself dog man x ....

didnt wanna get out of novice , jus a higher placement !!!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:08am
altho you are rite O' it is dark man, but if u listen to grand champ he does call himself dog man....

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:32am
battling gets you higher placement...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 February 2006 at 10:35am

^ Indeed... You move up your individual table by battling, you move up tables by improving enough to get in the rank above with a spit for rank...

And I know I'm right, lol, I've been listenin' to this guy since he came out... I'm aware of the dog obsession... I don't recall him sayin' Dog Man X but if he did then good for him... anyway, lock this one up Scooty

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