Spit for Rank: Legal EyeZ Spit For Rank..

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   Aight, Here Is a Lil Somethin I Did on LyricalGods...

We Are Hear To Honour and Respect Those Tragic Enough To Die With a Substantial Amount Of Pain, Through Stories And Knowledge On The Matter, We Tell... There Story...
Enter Name: Legal EyeZ
Subject: Diseases
Topic Of Choice: Parkinsons Disease
::Access Granted::

Woke Up One Mornin Sudden Shivvers Arrived...
They Shrivled My Spine
Sharp Pains Helped Mirror My Mind
Felt Like I was Stabbed, It Made Me Quiver..Im Fine..
Didn't Want To Make a Fuss, Expected It To Be Harmless Mom
But Next It Was The Sharpest One..
Went To The Medics, And Doctors Accepted It Was Parkinsons
Started The Treatment..
Doctors From Far and the Eastern
The Calmness Was Speakin
I Couldn't Tell Whether My Heart Was Still Beatin!
Moved Slowly, And My Balance Was Poor...
Yet God Savaged Whats Pure
But I Felt Embarrassed, As My Face Challenged The Floor
Nerve Cells Depleted, Did I Inherit These Genes?
I Should Cherish My Dreams
And Open The Gates Where The Perished Jus Plead..
Forced To Swallow Tablets, But Here On Earth Were Taught To Love The Best
But I Cant Feel Anythin, So I Enough Was Less, Jus Fuck The Rest..
I Pushed And Wept,
Tears Dropped From The Trauma And All Abruptness Left
Fearing Each Slice, As I Felt Them Carve At Me And Cut My Flesh..
Hallucinations, Depression And Every So Often Became Confused..
Heaven Gossips, The Saviours Due..
You Have The Choice To Follow The Hand Of God
All Depending On The Question....
 How Brave Are You?
Hook (x2)
...The Jaundice Depleated...
...From The Moment I Knew I Promised To Beat It...
...I Was Too Honest For Secrets...
...But That Aint Mean Im One Of The Weakest...

Thanks, 

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Legal EyeZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 76 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL	Topic: Legal EyeZ Spit For Rank.. Posted: 08 February 2006 at 12:42pm
	Aight, Here Is a Lil Somethin I Did on LyricalGods... We Are Hear To Honour and Respect Those Tragic Enough To Die With a Substantial Amount Of Pain, Through Stories And Knowledge On The Matter, We Tell... There Story... Enter Name: Legal EyeZ Subject: Diseases Topic Of Choice: Parkinsons Disease ::Access Granted:: Woke Up One Mornin Sudden Shivvers Arrived... They Shrivled My Spine Sharp Pains Helped Mirror My Mind Felt Like I was Stabbed, It Made Me Quiver..Im Fine.. Didn't Want To Make a Fuss, Expected It To Be Harmless Mom But Next It Was The Sharpest One.. Went To The Medics, And Doctors Accepted It Was Parkinsons Started The Treatment.. Doctors From Far and the Eastern The Calmness Was Speakin I Couldn't Tell Whether My Heart Was Still Beatin! Moved Slowly, And My Balance Was Poor... Yet God Savaged Whats Pure But I Felt Embarrassed, As My Face Challenged The Floor Nerve Cells Depleted, Did I Inherit These Genes? I Should Cherish My Dreams And Open The Gates Where The Perished Jus Plead.. Forced To Swallow Tablets, But Here On Earth Were Taught To Love The Best But I Cant Feel Anythin, So I Enough Was Less, Jus Fuck The Rest.. I Pushed And Wept, Tears Dropped From The Trauma And All Abruptness Left Fearing Each Slice, As I Felt Them Carve At Me And Cut My Flesh.. Hallucinations, Depression And Every So Often Became Confused.. Heaven Gossips, The Saviours Due.. You Have The Choice To Follow The Hand Of God All Depending On The Question.... How Brave Are You? Hook (x2) ...The Jaundice Depleated... ...From The Moment I Knew I Promised To Beat It... ...I Was Too Honest For Secrets... ...But That Aint Mean Im One Of The Weakest... Thanks,
	The Dynasty

Cuba Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12332 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 2:04pm
	Nice flow, rhymes were smooth but ya didnt stay on topic, focused more on rhymin than actually developin a sensible story, lot of inaccuracies and such, lyrical tools were good but you need to be creative with the topic and show you can write a story in rhyme rather than writin a rhyme that alludes to a story vaguely AMA


BRIGGZY Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 16 July 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1617 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-2-0 Form: WWWWWW	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:07pm
	^agreed
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-Orion- Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:15pm
	Yeah... I hate to sound like a braindead idiot but I have nothin' further to add other than what Cuba said really... And this rank is primarily for battles anyway... EVERYTHING IS taken into consideration, but I'm jus' sayin'... yea AMA
	. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me? They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . .

Scotty32 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10491 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 8:19am
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