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    Posted: 22 February 2006 at 4:47pm

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Mayne, No-Ones 'Getting Into Your Bars' like "Under Age Drinkers!!"...

^ Thats a Taster of things to come lol.....

Stankey, lets make this a Classic.. Ok i went through a few of his battles.. Most shits played on him so i went with a few personals, the rest is generics but they all relate to him.. So yer there not random lol.. Just bein in my head for time need to use them up! ..

All you need to know is.. BS(D) - BS = Bullshit ..

Okie Dokie Junior's Here....

Bigg Dogg?... Yer cus its Obese your Weighing
Watch Stank start 'Fire Blanks' like "Police Team Training!"
I'll Increase this Slaying.. Hes comin' Better Equipt? Please!
Stank aint got 'A Leg To Stand On' When I "Sever his Weak Knees!"
Im Clever with these Keys & you aint Dropping No Facts Kid
I'll help you 'Think Outside The Box' & place your "Head on ya Casket!"
Grab your Brain & then Blast It, you don't got a Chance Dude
I'll have Dogg 'Broken Down Slowly' like "Robot Dance Moves!!"
He'll get Smacked, Bruised & Beat with his Words
Then i'll 'Force Feed Him Shit' & make him "Eat his Own Verse!"
I bring the Heat & Stay First... Continue Beating Up this Knob
While screaming 'Fuck Animal Rights' as im "Murdering The Dogg!"
You aint Hurting me so Stop, you aint Got Ability
Heard Stanks a 'Pizza Boy?' well that his Only Hot Delivery!!
I'll Cop this Victory..The Dynasty my Mean Guys Rip Teams
Plus Stanks Flows 'More Worn Out' than "Levis Ripped Jeans!!"
I Flip G'z, have you Ducking Caps
...Cus we all 'Know Its BS' like your Fucking Raps!
J's Chucking Wacks.. Kiddo your Lyrics Bore Me
Considerd a Vet?, Ok but you could'nt Win the No Vet Tourny!
Renegade?.. nahh he'll get Kicked he's No Trooper
But for now Stanks 'Slipped through the Crack' like an "Anal Porn Blooper!!"

Went with the Old Style, Flow works better...

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...Junior's Ill with Text, & you can 'Mark My Words' like my "English Teacher"

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 7:44am

Mayne, No-Ones 'Getting Into Your Bars' like "Under Age Drinkers!!"...

i think stank, or atleast someone used that against me in a recent battle  .....

anyway, im gonna say STRONG AMA for this, because some shit was hot as fuck, like robot dance moves, hot delivery and "BS" punches, but the rest was kinda, meh ... heard it all before, levi's thing is flipped a lot now, and that wasnt a new flip for it, the lines where u had hard personals (vet tourny) the flow dropped, and seemed to hit weaker than the other shit, so i dont think its quite pro.

but still a nice verse to read!







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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 7:46am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 9:23am
 .. Ohwell lol .. Thanx anyway..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 12:02pm
Nep doesnt rank, only me, Illa, Orion...wait and see
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 12:29pm
Junior's Ill with Text, & you can 'Mark My Words' like my "English Teacher

Teachers only mark your paper to show you where you committed an error...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 12:54pm
haha
I am the one that knocks...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 1:24pm

Originally posted by Jehu Jehu wrote:

Teachers only mark your paper to show you where you committed an error...

Its not like that in the UK Bronx boy .... our teachers actually grade our papers up to a certain age.







I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 4:02pm
That's Bronx Man to you... and what does age have anything to do with it? Teachers don't mark your written work to tell you when something's wrong? If they let you get away with bad grammar cause you're in college and just grade your paper as a whole, you'll never improve that, and you'll never have better grades than that...

It's like me telling Junior that his verse was lacking something and not telling him where or what... think about it.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 4:24pm
Lol @ me starting a political debate on teaching .. Personally, your both right..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 4:25pm

Oh & upping Illa & Orion..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2006 at 8:45pm
Yes, your actually both right, as the teacher does just generally mark work but he/she will also mark mistakes.

But anyway, the peice was preety nice it flowed well throught and had nice vocab.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 February 2006 at 6:42am

Meh ... my teachers at high school and primary school marked everything, gave me a percentage or a grade(A, B, C .... etc), and yea, they gave it back with errors, but they never asked me to do it again. anywho ... i see where ya coming from...... and i only went for bronx boy for alliteration, dont take it personally.







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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 February 2006 at 10:53am
this a spit for rank n erybodys debatin about school? Thanks alot Jehu lol.
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