Spit for Rank: giving fatal another punch lol.. rank please

don�t even try man, you know you aint topping this
fatal�s verses are like �hampers�, he should just �put a sock in it�
this guy cant defeat me, even with his best little spit
Cause im going to �knock F out�, faster than wrestling did ( WWE )
I aint jesting ya kid, your wasting your talent im telling ya
cause he�s �like a bad photographer�� his shots aint bin developing
I heard people saying fatal wont show, that�s what some reckon
he�s called �the good latino lover�, cause he always cums second
his verse will be easy to cook, ill fuckin burn n� boil it
cause fatal couldn�t have �tight punches�, boxing in aeroplane toilets
have his face looking like a bunch of grapes, listen as the next blow crunches
his lines like �ring girls�, they look nice, but are only ever �close to punches�
everyone knows woods is tight, and your not it seems
cause im �showing this fruit up� more, than slot machines
he�s counting his dates tonight, how many dick�s he�ll have in
his plays are like �philly b-ball shirts�, all 6�s and 7�s
im gonna beat this guy slowly, easily gonna whip tha ho�
the last time he won by �crossing someone�, he was playing tic tac toe
the dynasty crew�s wack, they make me sad, then mad next

cause that�s all we need, another �pack of fags with �bad� text�
he has to bold his plays, he stays flaunting his shots
cause people only say �woah� at fatal, is when they want him to stop
ill put this �tool in a box�, but I aint a plumber, I just spit fire
ill expose that he�s a �punk,sure�, and make him �retire�
kill him and make him rock the sig, ill bet ya man
�pop him in the �truck�, have him looking like the elephant man
fatal�s the pro who battles newbs, that�s why his records great
cause the last time he crossed a pro opponent, he was in a debate(proponent)
after this battle, im feeling very generous cuz
ill go to the �bank� n� make a donation, 8 pints of fatals blood
because I don�t wanna just kill, I have a real bloody thirst
cause in the thread�s title,  only time �fatal� will get close to �woody�s verse� ( fatal �vs� woody)

hope the links still work....  flow is below average but thats the style i like..

definately not PRO, you shud try writing with flow, even if it ain ya style you gotta have the basics down before ya drift to different shit, picasso ain start on abstract get me..

Edited by Mackie - 28 August 2007 at 12:07am

wow, it like those you know your from the ghetto things...

like, you know you from the ghetto when You slept more than two to a bunk bed...

Still Ama, But You Had Alot Of Original, Creative And Dope Ideas, Which Is What Pro's Have. This Is Definately Your Best Verse As Of Late, You Should Use Wordplay In Ordinary Battles too. Just Work On Your Flow, Take / Add A Few Syllables So It Jus Rolls Of The Tongue (No Homo)

cool, thanks guys, ill use them tips..