Raw Tactics: (Group C) ILLA vs Tec

RULES

• No crew votes
• Votes in groups are best out of 5
• Votes must be explained SUFFICIENTLY with key battle criteria explained - tournament moderator will ensure all votes are explained
• To stop new members coming in to vote for their friends. To vote, you will have to apply (there will be a thread), and hanGing will say either yes or no. Most of the time it will be yes, but there are cases where people may try and cheat
• It is encouraged that all members apply to vote, including contestants and new members - if we've seen enough of you to trust you aren't a fraudulent account, you're welcome to vote
• Groups: max 8 bars
• There will be no first or second to drop. You can drop whenever you want, as  long as it's before the deadline.
• No flips/feeding
• All verses will be checked for biting/recycling, so don't even try it - it's not worth it
• There will be a tourny discussion thread, but in addition to this "spam" won't be deleted from battles, so non-verse/vote posts are allowed, as long as they're relevant and non-hateful
• Scoring. 1 point for a loss , 2 for a win and 3 for a whitewash.
• No verse posted = -5 points.
• SPITS DUE BY MIDNIGHT (GMT) 20th September - GET WRITING PEOPLE

sup been site dickin'? dippin fingers in chicken, BITIN wid greasy mittens
fake or false prewrittens?? i still be SHITTIN on ya 1st name cus NORVILLES not stickin....

i could be penniless an' still not BROKEN, FUCK 8-mile, u already know everythin about CHOKIN!
Norville might have retired but TEC IS back, thats good fo me cus TEC is WACK He mo' scared ov me then he is ov losein' friends,ur too nice fo RAP so ull die in trends
Cheatin to win ull do it again like PRO-WRESTLIN' this time like a pissed off client i AINT-SETTLIN',i took all his gold too so TEC AINT-MEDALLIN', he must have made NORVLLE up while takin AMPHETAMINES
TEC, nice name but u dont COCK-BACK, u BACK-COCK like homo's protestin thurr SEXUALITY-SWAPS
u DONT cut the beef like SHEPHERDS i bring lines as WEAPONS,on l.a u get killed easy wid NO-SOUNDS,u came wid weight CLOWN but like geri halliwell ur just a GINGER who LOST-POUNDS (WHAT)
Beefin about this talkin shit about that! imma TURTLE this punk leave him helpless on his BACK
U BITE and flip my lyrics and u still got more losses than me,cus i come collossus whoever the imposta might be
But you aint shit, ya text is like Clipz's an' he KOed you too!,face it  MAYNE u wouldnt make FIRSTGRADE in my CREW
look im the PUNISHER ill put ya skull in ya chest' i put lazy cats to sleep too' so GARFIELD can rest (lmao)




Stuf to kno about TEC..
he got banned fo biting, his name used to be norville, aclips koed him twice i think aclips is 14 get the wordplay, he ginger and geri halliwell is an ex spice girl who was fat than lost major weight.

DR huh? Nah, Tec, he just killed it...

Whilst I'm here, I'll say I know what you said about me, even though Hanging deleted it, in your battle with Frank. Nobody copied my vote, if people see it how it is - that you got outdone by a simpler verse - then get over it. LAWLESS my ryder huh? Yeah good one. Or ILLA, my ryder too? Yeah, right. And as for LA not bein' able to appreciate your style - I can't see how any place does. It isn't NEARLY as good as the style you used to bite. The lines are long as fuckin' hell, you put stuff in quotes that isn't really wordplay, and a lot of your multis are inconsistent. Some of your imagery is real nice, and some punches are OK, but in general, you just aren't the battler you "used to be". Sorry. That's fact.

Same goes for this much very much, things like bent over like erotic hoes just made me cringe... This wasn't your best, even since you've been back. You need to spit shorter lines, OR go for a bar in one long line like SymBion does. You had some good multis pop up here and there, wordplay was all pretty basic. Could have come with harder personal punches.

ILLA... You got pretty personal, used his name, bitin', the Clipz thing, ginger, etc etc... had some nice ideas in there. Medallin', sex swaps, the Halliwell line was a killer. Finish was strong. You had some OK multis here too, rhyme scheme was constant in most places, structure good though there was one real long line, dunno what was up there. Punches comin' out ya ass...

Easy decision...

VOTE: ILLA

First of all i aint writing loads cuz of fucked up hand so..

ight ere i go:

Punchs:Illa fuckin funny ones
Flow:Illa shorter but still lengthy lines..but thats just his style
Wordplay:Skilla
Multis:Both were OK, both going for punchs i guess.
Personals:Illa, quite harsh ones too

My fav lines from both:
i took all his gold too so TEC AINT-MEDALLIN', he must have made NORVLLE up while takin AMPHETAMINES

Fool, its like ya living in a "Skip"* cuz ya Spits Aint~Never~Gonna be on BEAT You could berrie ya "PC" under ma Feet BUT ya Spits still wouldent be Concrete..

vote:illa cos hes hectic

ok

tec:i dont really like the structure you use because it often fucks up flow, i dont think you came as hard as you could have but you had okish wordplay but either way i think you got well ripped <no affence though

Illa:nice verse some funny as fuck punches again ok multis though niether looked for this your wordplay was good some real hard hitting personals in there you had better flow due to style differences so you had a much more complexed and advanced verse props

best part
u DONT cut the beef like SHEPHERDS i bring lines as WEAPONS,on l.a u get killed easy wid NO-SOUNDS,u came wid weight CLOWN but like geri halliwell ur just a GINGER who LOST-POUNDS (WHAT)
nice

Lol...Fuck Orion...

I Dunno Were U Got The Ginger From But Yer Lmao...(I Aint)

I Dident Get Banned...

And AClipz Koed Me Once...

Just A Few Things Wrong But Otherwise Kool Drop...

lol easy fellas'

KO

peace

Regardless of site... Your structure has a fucked up flow if you try to spit it to a beat (not a-cappella), and it wasn't the structure and flow that beat your verse, it was illa's punches... (nice verse)

Also, there's no skill in dissing people and just putting a rhyme at the end of a sentence. The skill lies in putting it in a concise way so that it's not so long that people lose interest half way through your verse. And It just doesn't flow. I doubt that the skill level in those other sites is as high as here anyway. Multis aren't necessary, but they show how advanced you are with words that you can diss people and make it flashy.

One last thing: use periods and commas and maybe I'll know where your sentences end, and I won't just think you're retarded cause you capitalize every first letter of a word. I'm just saying though...
No beef.

Jehu do u have anyway that i could change my style and write shorter lines cuz im use to writin with long lines...i relise they dont flow to alot of u but they do to me...

Any ideas?...

Iight Man I Got Ya Thanx...