Open Mic: ¡Happy Birthday, LA...!

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   Yo...

Let me first say, I'm gifted with the wordplay,
As if every day was Christmas or my birthday,
I witnessed the Rebirth, the original one,
I'm talking about the tournament that Illa had won,
Over twenty-two years ago, as a virtual verbal virgin,
My verses became sermons: words recited with assertion,
Dickriders were a burden, but there was nothing worse than
Haters that have never been averse to aversion,
You see, I was just a person with talent emergin' astrally,
Actually, I would practise with passion to craft a masterpiece,
Glad to be the target when wack rappers were attacking me,
If destruction breeds creation, then I will make catastrophes,
Relax and be the best that I can be...  Yeah, that's the key,
Delve into my past and see I was the first but not the last emcee,
At one point, I was literally a leader unilaterally,
In fact, I was the one to turn a rap into a rhapsody...

¡22+ years...!

Adios...

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Senor Perfecto Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3279 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Senor Perfecto Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: ¡Happy Birthday, LA...! Posted: 18 October 2025 at 3:48pm
	Yo... Let me first say, I'm gifted with the wordplay, As if every day was Christmas or my birthday, I witnessed the Rebirth, the original one, I'm talking about the tournament that Illa had won, Over twenty-two years ago, as a virtual verbal virgin, My verses became sermons: words recited with assertion, Dickriders were a burden, but there was nothing worse than Haters that have never been averse to aversion, You see, I was just a person with talent emergin' astrally, Actually, I would practise with passion to craft a masterpiece, Glad to be the target when wack rappers were attacking me, If destruction breeds creation, then I will make catastrophes, Relax and be the best that I can be... Yeah, that's the key, Delve into my past and see I was the first but not the last emcee, At one point, I was literally a leader unilaterally, In fact, I was the one to turn a rap into a rhapsody... ¡22+ years...! Adios...


JBrenn Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3778 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote JBrenn Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 October 2025 at 9:04pm
	Nice quick drop love the flow with the use of near rhymns and how you strung together story and flow switches. it was decent.


Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Stalin Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 October 2025 at 10:42am
	Sp? One of the true legends of LA.. you've still got that crazy multis.
	+Sick-Witted+