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Swift Styles
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Posted: 18 July 2008 at 8:25pm |
One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, Eight, Nine, Uhh its the homegrown commandments Whaaa One two three four five six seven eight nine TEN Been growin' shit fa years, expert at botanicals So to help you stay high, I wrote yall a manual A step by step booklet for you to get Ya greens on stack and keep ya bowls packed Number One, You know weed don’t grow without seeds If you got em thats step one, the rest is breeze First you separate the ones to germinate Drop in water quick and wait till the shit splits Number Two, Dude I think you know what to do Get some rich soil and plant em tips up Ya homeboys already talkin' bout lightin' spliffs up Take ya time, you'll raise it up, and kiss ya seeds fa luck Number Three, Never tell nobody Ya own homeboys be the first tryna strip ya tree Heard it from me, leave it unattended you'll see Secrecy is the key if you gonna grow weed Number Four, whether its closet or dorm Remember that you always gotta lock ya door Number Five, this may come as a surprise You gonna need florescent lights if you don’t want em 2 die Number Six, every living thing needs to breathe So an ordinary fan is what you need to achieve Seven, This rule is mad underrated Keep the male plants and females completely separated Or else the female plants will become germinated So the ones with droopy flowers 'll fuck up what you’ve created Number eight, in bout 2 months cut at the base I know it took so long but trust, its worth the wait Number nine, probably should of been one to me If you planning to grow weed stay away from police Plan a trip upstate if you get caught with ya piece Damn my Fam would be pissed if they have ta pay my release Number Ten, Ya plants are ready for curing and drying Expect another wait, and stop ya whining and sighin' The slower it take to dry, the smoother it get No bud should ever be smoked if the shit is still wet Follow these rules and you'll have homegrown to smoke up Call up ya boys pack ya bowls and get choked up You'll love how it looks when ya own weed is broke up If you gotta travel, stash it in the crease of ya low cuts But remember, in every state growing weeds a felony So be prepared for the penalties, and never mention me And while ya gettin plastered one more rule for u bastards The boys you share it wit should always be givin' you the last hit Swift Styles Uhh One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Seven, Eight, Nine, TEN Edited by Swift Styles - 18 July 2008 at 8:30pm |
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DressToKill
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Lmao this was dope..definently a nice remix of "Ten Crack Commandments"..I could catch the Biggy flow to cuz I always imagined his writtens to rhyme all in one line instead of being broken up into a bar..The flow was there and definently matchable to the way biggy rhymes..so this was pretty nice..good job duke
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The original comeback kid
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U.N.L.M.
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tight drop..Must've been the content that made this an enjoyable read lol...Liked the closing bar and how you recreated this..Thought it was very well written and it flowed on very nicely..Keep droppin up to this quality...
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wez_tha_feminist
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Ha ha...i didnt kno what to expect...but em bud head huh...yea..it was nice thou....would wanna hear it in audio..........cuz it flowed real nice....and u stayed on topic from begining to end so thats whats up... good baby boi.........
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I-SEE-GRIPS
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Whats the golden rule though my bro
Never get high of ya own supply
Fuck that
Nice one swift felt that flowing good
Old skool big thats my rap shit there
Keep posting man you been quiet
Peace
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Fatal
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Ha, this was pretty tight. Loved the flip off of Big's original version...could imagine this shit to the beat perfectly....good shit man
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Swift Styles
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i loved writing this piece. and Ill love gettin it on track and puttin it on LA, just gotta fix that mic up. i recorded it on my phone and it sounds pretty tight.
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