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    Posted: 02 July 2007 at 5:18pm
Iaght... here it is
 
 
Somethings you should know
 
*Had a song called "land of hip hop" were he dreams in the song n shit
*Has some home made drums he made//played
*Used to blame his "shittyness" on his "shitty" mic...
*Every time someone votes against him he writes an essay with bitching and swaying in it
*Has this "rap group" ( suree.. ) called dorm room productions ( doubt it's rap)
*He's spit for rank judge/ He spit like 3 times and thought he was gonna get pro with his verse ( audio )
*Got his fag brother to do his chorus for him...
*(most important one) He battled ikon twice, the second time he thought for sure he had it but only the doctor voted for him. Ikon = ikontinue ... Icon = me...
*His girlfriend dumped him after a 1year relationship "out of the blue" and she did it quick.....
 
 

your calling me a flop, please kid, just stop

You must be dreaming this aint the land of hip hop*

Your not an icon either, your way to immense

I�ll call you odor free, cuz you got no sence

Hence the reason I called you out, so hop of me

He�s constipated the way he cant get his shit out properly

No ones stopin me, so watch as I elevate and pass

While your havin trouble comin up like stomach gas

Your not worth the hassle, you�s a raskle when stepping

How will you ever be dope, when it�s the asylum u repping

The next thing you should do is just admit your defeat

Burnin ya drums, is the only time you�ll throw fire to a beat*

Murder you, put you under the sheat I wont salvage a bit

Cuz pfeif can only flow when singing the alphabet

Your shit how you gonna blame It on your mic*

Couldn�t keep your shit rolling if u were on a pettle bike

Your girlfriend wasn�t a dike, it wasn�t out of the blue

If you were a decomposer, she�d still �dump� You!

I�ll admit your both fat, that�s cuz I feel no emotion

But comparing her to you, is like whales to the ocean

If you had devotion to rap, like you do to eating

When voting comes, you wouldn�t be swaying or cheating*

Men he�s beating literally, he doesn�t need instructions

Because it�s not rap when he says dorm room productions*

No interruptions, cuz your raps are on the shelf

He couldn�t get pro in audio, if he ranked himself!*

I thought to myself of how I was gonna diss ya

Then I decided all I gotta do is post ya picture!

Your songs are wack, and your lyrics they bore us

So you added your brother for excitement in the chorus*

Im not afraid of you, if need be I�ll strike a reaper

You make no sense, just going off like a beeper

He edits his voice deeper When he spits his shit

My boy D killed you, even ya crew admits it! ( dal )

Shit you just cant handle loosing, so you can cry on!

Horrible at audio, wishin you could beat an icon ( ikon )*

Your battling a pro, you need a hand get a fast lend

Lets keep it straight dude, like your last girlfriend (your really are a girl..)

I don�t want it to end, but you can�t handle a nick

You can Call me your girlfriend, the way I end this shit quick*
(lyrics may be misspelled or rong... never checked them )
 
 
 
 
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i copy and pasted my feed from ya text s4r....
 
audio, AMA...u need to work on ya delivery and flow...good audio voice and some good emotion, but u need to work on riding the beat better...u have lines that u spit that are rushed or u hesistate some...

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Thanks FATAL!! ( hes not even a judge? )
 
Yall judges gonna sleep on this shit?
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scotty hasnt made me an official judge yet...and we havent been able to talk about it, as me and him are rarely on MSN at the same time...

but ill go ahead and drop my 2 cents...

i think the improvements you have made have been great... anyone here can see it... i believe you still have the novice rank???  if so... i feel you should be an AMA....

you have showed consistent improvement...  and have developed somewhat a sort of mic presence and swagger... other than just reading ya lines...

heres some advice...

work on lyrics... you come up with some decent lines.. but then you also have some WHACK lines... that just make people think "WTF was he thinkin when he wrote that"....  heres what you should do...w rite somethin... and if it doesnt make you say... "damn, thats pretty nice" ... or "that set up is solid" .... or  "that was a nice multi/flow there"...  then work with it untill it you CAN say that.. .but DONT FORCE IT... if you cant work with it and make it better SCRAP IT... better ideas will come...

also... work on switchin up ya flow... throw some curve balls to your listeners... your verses are VERY predictable flow wise...  so try to switch it up every now and then... try new things

do those things and i think you will improve even further... then they will be more things to work on... we all have to continuously work to improve... no matter who we are  
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