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    Posted: 22 June 2009 at 12:28am
Week 1

iCeZ v aminal
4 Bars (8 Lines)
Due Saturday 28th June 11.59pm
No Show's or Late Verses will result in instant Loss
First to 3 / 3-0 KO
Anyone Can Vote
1 Point for Win
1 Bonus Point for KO
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Form: LLWWLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2009 at 3:22am
I'm so confident that this guy cant beat me/
Cuz when i look at iCeZ,  I C EZ!/(I see easy)
No Homo! this battle is the only time i'm against a fag/
Think Icez is worthless? you're wrong! just 89 cents a bag/
Headshots hitting ya brow close, bang bang ya vision is now toast/
Yup Ice spins are played man but so is bitching about votes/
I'm straight fire, no cliche not saying i'm gonna melt ya now dude/
Trying to help ya out dude...cuz i'm about to put hell around you/
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Form: WLWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2009 at 12:00pm
 
 
 
The way this little girl raps, he must want em to flop

Like that world map, Ice got you covered bottom to top   (north pole south pole)

In this rap shit im the GOAT, a BEAST, a gem wit a pen
And close as U get to that is if you switch ya M with ya N (animal)
It’s the end wit ya then, Cause ima bout to win and win well
Like ya damn name, for you… this shits gon end in an L
And that outcome didn’t take much, to get this whore foldin’
Only took one bar, like your avatar, to get the ball rollin’
 
 
 
 
Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now
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Form: LWWLLL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2009 at 12:24pm
Yeah, victory for Icez here...your styles perfect for semi-serious short battles like these...pretty much clowned him effectively, every bar hit nicely, rhymed well, etc...aminal, wasnt bad, but there wasnt really any venom in the hits, try and come a bit harder, really aim to offend them

v. icez
Не все потеряно пока...
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Vote = IceZ

Even though technically the world covered from bottom to top, just at the botttom & the top Big smile...your other three punches were pretty hot, all personal and well worded translated into good hits...Aminal, for your part you did pretty well, I liked the bitching bout votes punch and the way you set it up, opener was a decent idea...but I think IceZ had too much creativity for you to match, nice try though
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Vote- IceZ

Aminal, you didn't exactly embarrass yourself here, i mean if you step up your game just a tad as far as making sure that NONE of the verse is wasted, then on the basis of this you should do alright in this league. The first line was pretty creative, and the bitching line was a nice little punch at Ice. But apart from that it was a bit too much filler, especially with the creativity and wit of the guy you were facing. Ice all your verse, the second bar especially, was good. You obviously have the kind of mind that just picks up on little bits of info about the opposition and then creativity just kicks in. A nice first battle for you both, hope you do alright in the rest of your battles aminal, and glad your back Ice, we need more people like you on the site and in the leagues.

Hope that helps Smile  
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iCeZ wins KO.

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Form: WWLWLW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 June 2009 at 4:17pm
Oh, fwiw : I actually thought aminal had a decent verse, by far the best I've ever seen from him. So good job on that. Keep elevating.






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