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Abmeht El Aifam 
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 Topic: Io oniel Vs Abmeht El AifamPosted: 15 November 2013 at 10:38pm |
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Io oniel
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Posted: 15 November 2013 at 11:08pm |
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Io oniel
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 7:44pm |
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His face aint elliptical, the right-sides' got bumps, the lefts' got Madia's bum humps
his been mastubatin for several weeks, he tuned in on youtube and saw a link of squirting chicks and went like "damn i hate freaks" i'll vise-grip your neck usin one hand with the other, continuously uppercutin this idler, ti'll his head pops up like a champaigne bottle cap, i should say fuck rap, this bitch is on his p.c, wide smile with a 2chains cap, Io aka supernatural, in secs a punch will come outa ya screen right at ya and leave ya teath gapped his gettin kicked&elbowed, he'l get tossed&boxed in gravel road im white & his black with Pappa Docks mode, havent went hard on him, already he looks chocked its an ethnic tension, only way to solve it is by giving this polotical muslim fag a suspension, Obama feels no emotion for khats wearing skirts on a battle occasion Abmeht fried coke thinkin it was a way of doing meth, how can you mix acids when you don know math? Stupid people seem to rule the earth im an extreterrestrial, a cyclops aka mean ugly individual ima play with his corpses beyond the galaxy thus to eyes of god it'l be live and visual shuve him in a coffin with blades on the sides, shake it until blood splashes,laugh as he screams but he wont be heard like a clowns mimes evil khat with a dagger on killing sprees hold you up side down and shuve it up ya throat then twist it and watch as pieces of inner organs fall flinstone here and ima throw his head with igneus rock, he wont have the chance to live at all. He says his a Chuck Norris product on this battle but to Io the fag is touchable spin kick him but this guy is hard headed,a wanna be Swatzineger spartan, so I gave him prepella kicks like a spasmotic rifle, too bad the impact shatter an eyeball, now I got a one eyed nikka as a rival....aint that a bitch? I got a nice technique, and ima bully this textual rapper and leave each thumb with a sticth queen elizabeth could rap better than him, know what? Fuck him, faggot go back to mixin meat with cream claimin you're cool and cookin. Fuck. Your shit'll never be seen as dope. If that happens, it will be fraud like Mr.Bean is famous for bein a pope. Hang you without usin a rope, this khat changed from being robust to bein cowardous, hack his a human antillope.... Ai tsek im blank. |
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Abmeht El Aifam
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 8:52pm |
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fellows tonight dies a young lad whom nobody will ever miss
not even his own mother as after this she'll be in excessive bliss get it... Poor verse physique, this bitch got no rhymes no flow and no technique so ya raps are bleak caz ya got no shine no glow just like an antique he's too weak and i think Io oniel an L for now i'll give him the 1 that goes with a Bow and Io ya should rap no more, definition of wackness is in the verse ya dropped hours ago same hours this hoe joined this site and he decided to straight up call me out ya point me out with points low all aimed at me nigga what was that all about? See i'll punch your snout, loose teeth'll move around in your mouth nah i seriously doubt that ya can take that caz you're a bitch who's actin' all stout get this... Io is the name of a greek myth priestess of Hera in Argos i bet you know but wat puzzles me tho' is that her father is a river god so bitch how did u not inherit the flow? Get it you're slow.. Ya lack punchlines, and uhmm dawg i don't like ur avy i don't like u, ur raps,in secret ya praise me and fuck ya can't win ya crazy can't phase me and for you to get through this battle is a fucking ordeal only time i mention ya i grab ya mom n be like ''bitch here's my dick now Hoe Kneel'' (oniel) shit is this hoe real? Ya rap surreal shit combined with no skill ya aint ill we aint feel ya lines what a waste ya mom shoulda killed ya with that pill or shoulda introduced ya to her tonsils for you don't deserve to live joining LA hopin' to win shit.. Nah ya wack even scotty'll kindly ask ya to leave i'll smack his wig makin' his head weave into different dimensions then stand still...see when votes come in here it'll be first to 5, nah it'll be 3 for me n for him it'll be...uhmm OH NEAL ya from ''Cape'' Town? You fuckin' clown go fit on ya hero costume or somethin' Fuck i'll stomp on this mere thing 'til he's flat like cape town's table mountain ya know what ''Io'' also is? It's one of the galilean moons that jupiter got and prometheus is those volcanic spots on it but bitch how come ya can't spit anything hot? 
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AshleyKaos
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Posted: 16 November 2013 at 10:44pm |
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LO OLNIEL- Ok your structure is seriously fucked up . I wanna say that the rhyming was off but the structure was so fucking bad i don't know what was even supposed to rhhyme withh what, go read the tutorials they helped me get better and hopefully they help yyou i dont know where you were going with it you went from concept to concept chopy with no metaphors or clever refeerence. shit was a mess dawg. lol
AL- you have very good struicture and very good kknack and making things rhyme and flow . I liked this one but this was a landslide MVGT -AL |
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Abmeht El Aifam
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Posted: 17 November 2013 at 4:23am |
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thanx for the vote Ashley, 1-0
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hanGing
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Posted: 17 November 2013 at 8:43am |
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Moving to under review - things I need to look at here. Don't jump to conclusions. Just having to check a web of shit.
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Io oniel
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Posted: 17 November 2013 at 6:04pm |
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Yah nhee,
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