1-2 Punch League: Kiki Spirez vs Goryo (w10) |
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 Topic: Kiki Spirez vs Goryo (w10)Posted: 03 November 2016 at 2:11pm |
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Posted: 04 November 2016 at 11:05pm |
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ASpirez to be the champ? Please! Con put egg on this faker's face We'll only see 'Ki with a belt' if one hangs from a caretaker's waist *Caretakers usually have a key hanging from their belt
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 05 November 2016 at 12:31am |
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Dude couldn't even make the final, so imma make him a gonner bitch! Ponder this - 'Gor' only has 'vice' when he thrives in politics.. All Gore was Vice President. Vice means badness/wickedness. |
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Posted: 05 November 2016 at 6:00am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. G - Pretty straight forward, got to the concept quick, IMO it couldve tied in to the set up a bit more. t still connected here for me doe. Nice cross. KS - Nice flip on his concept, with a pretty solid name flip. Set up tied in much better to your punch than G's so dope. Over you hit hard with a hook here IMO Over all MVGT Kiki
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Posted: 05 November 2016 at 12:25pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Gor- ok bar, nothin special though. Wordin was cool but it lacked the creativity, i thought. K- cool punch wit the nameplay. Nicely worded. Str8 to the point. Vote- kiki |
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Posted: 05 November 2016 at 2:18pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Jesus this week is fire! gonna be tough. Gor: nice concept with some nice nameplay. punching in both the setup and punchline..though the punchline wansnt overly heavy. ...almost coulda been reversed. noticed that the precision of your end rhyme was a little less prominent than in past offerings. props to. Kiki: again with that style...nicely executed tho. wouldn't might a stylistic switch up tbh. nice concrlt in the punch, but thought the relationship to the setup a bit nebulous. end rhyme to my accent wasnt the cleanest but worked. tough call here. ..i'm back and forth, and wanted to call it a match null...goona go against the grain and toss my v to Gor...but mad props to Kiki for yet another quality verse. v Gor |
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Posted: 06 November 2016 at 10:50pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Close battle. I thought gor had an okay punch here, the nameplay was decent but i thought the execution while okay, could've been a lil smoother. Kiki- You also went for the name play didn't think your flip/connection was a s good as gor's though. Marginal but this is close bit of a toss up but i'm just slightly edging to gor's bar so mvgt/goryo
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Posted: 07 November 2016 at 12:09am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Gor: Not sure how ASpirez works as a flip but, decent wordplay/nameplay, multied well. Keek: I appreciate the work that's gone into this, with "Gore" and "Vice" president, but struggling to see how 2nd meaning of "vice" works. Both coming nice with concept, structure and rhyming, so hard one to call... But after several reads I'm saying MFVGT Gore fo preference yo. |
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Posted: 07 November 2016 at 12:52am |
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Rids...like ASpirez other than as aspires?
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Posted: 07 November 2016 at 1:09am |
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Yes of course I get that ... but some bars gotta work both ways and this is a prime example,
I've gone over it again, and the only way it lands as a double meaning is if Spirez was actually his surname ... like a Baggins ... or a Lannister. A Spirez to be the Champ ... ? |
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Posted: 07 November 2016 at 1:30am |
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fair enough..i kinda see it working both ways, but no biggie.
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Posted: 07 November 2016 at 8:32am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Gory, props for the name-drop, bar was cool, short setup\punch str8 to the point, punch was funny and solid, how can kiki top this? Kiki, another short bar with no extra fuzz, damn that was a solid personal if I ever saw one, its not complex, but it definately had that bold vibe to it dope battle, but i think Kiks edged this one
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Posted: 07 November 2016 at 3:08pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. I think the gore np was outdated tbh...so with that said i felt that ki concept a bit better. |
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Posted: 07 November 2016 at 10:25pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Pretty solid battle here I felt Goryo came with the smoother read when compared to kik, but I got to be honest the concept has been around these forums as long as I have so it was lacking freshness, but was at least flipped at kiki well... decent effort. Kiks, flow was feeling off to me on this one so it didn't read so fluid but I was feeling the originality of the concept and have got to give props on that because the punchline was hitting if not massively it still worked Good battle Vote Kik for the fresher approach |
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Posted: 08 November 2016 at 1:01pm |
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need a deciding vote on this, before we can get next round rolling.
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Posted: 08 November 2016 at 1:02pm |
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4-4 at the mo
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Posted: 08 November 2016 at 4:04pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Close battle here... I liked gors concept but the wording was weird. Put off on his face is weird ki's vice play was cool he kept it simple all around. The nameplay in goes set up was ok but tbh had no effect so was really pointless. PM me if I'm missing something but I'm giving this to KI for the better executed punch. Should leave this open till tonight to get more votes cos it's a close judge |
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