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 Topic: [KOTOM} Staff Infection! RIP!Posted: 14 June 2016 at 1:23am |
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fuck these penguins  SEE... yall Mods is all bitch & Beans bout to Blast ya section Every verse from you dirty pussies reminds us of a Staff Infection Laughin segments.. I hope yall dont break out like Den Did I'm a monster shark W/sharp teeth bout to slaughter sum penguins! Plus the former "Text Champ" a snitch bitch who couldnt cop from me we know ART Aint gold dig'n cos he didnt join VIS after taking LAW's money!(C4C FGTS!) He jus a fallower fuck boy who agreed I beat Con's Face quick But knows I'll never be behind money's beat bitch ass.. like Kanye's Dick! Pray quick, that the gods teeth aint hungry for more grub ALL YALL FAGGOTS GON WACK, & I'm not talkin NEEK's history @ PornHUB! Maul this born dumb, Fat fuck..I shoot'em down & Beat'em Ironic he can Run airing PPL out here, but IRL cant walk a mile W/o weezing! believe me, you'll see Beans in ya dreams W/that fight stare Punch you out cold cos its obvious battlings ya biggest nightmare! & that crew hoping FAGGOT been quiet & thats ya man NIGMA? Funny LAW aint spoke since EX & I burried the bitch somewhere in Canada! plus we gotta plan for ya..take my Gun, put it to ya head & pray W/em than have you dig'em up & pull the trigger....now NIGMA lay W/him! All I'm sayin is ADMINS think they nice, Cute & man are they fighters... Funny they welcome all these teething kids but cant manage the biters! Ya'll wont take advise, what you weaklings got planned tho? Cos your FUCKIN MOD STAFF NO SHOWS BATTLES...should'nt yall lead by example? Kill ya fam yo, ART been a bitch & this aint my top plan of attack kid We killing him for the Tag belt, Ya partner Empire... & we both think you a faggot! what a waste of scubs, MOD powers got you trying to play tough Not homophobic But this assault rifle I pull will make you wish you were @ Orlando's Gay club  |
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Beans
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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 6:20pm |
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Rutter knows best
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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 6:21pm |
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I'll feed this tonite brother nice work.
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#bananas
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Posted: 15 June 2016 at 1:18am |
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This was hard Beans I really enjoyed this drop. I really like seeing you in the OMKOTM. Even if its a diss verse lol. The opening was clever and flowed perfect. Nice way to start this off. Also your folling bar was nice and relevant and tied other situations into the diss. lol @ buried in Canada...concept was fire flow was a bit off for me but still cool shit. I was really feeling the teething manage the biters line at cubes obviously. That was really nice to me. That bar that followed about lead by example was straight fire. Relevant and personal. also the think your a faggot line was harsh. lol Then your closer? damn That was some hard hitting shit. I really liked it. overall flow could have been a bit touched up here and there but other than that great verse.
Dope shit beans
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Posted: 15 June 2016 at 8:55am |
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See, this what we need more in the OM section. You assholes actually dropping shit. Then when you assholes do drop shit, it's mad dope. I mean... Rutter went in, you went in, Exo went in... Shit. I'd almost follow suite if I actually had some material to work with lol.
You had one line which was a bit stretched and the abbreviation didn't help:
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Damn... Ice cold.
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yall Mods is all bitch & Beans bout to Blast ya section Every verse from you dirty pussies reminds us of a Staff Infection Laughin segments.. I hope yall dont break out like Den Did I'm a monster shark W/sharp teeth bout to slaughter sum penguins! Nice start dude secend couplet was dope Pray quick, that the gods teeth aint hungry for more grub ALL YALL FAGGOTS GON WACK, & I'm not talkin NEEK's history @ PornHUB! this was cool Maul this born dumb, Fat fuck..I shoot'em down & Beat'em Ironic he can Run airing PPL out here, but IRL cant walk a mile W/o weezing! nice shot & that crew hoping FAGGOT been quiet & thats ya man NIGMA? Funny LAW aint spoke since EX & I burried the bitch somewhere in Canada! doesn't rhyme for me this dude plus we gotta plan for ya..take my Gun, put it to ya head & pray W/em than have you dig'em up & pull the trigger....now NIGMA lay W/him! All I'm sayin is ADMINS think they nice, Cute & man are they fighters... Funny they welcome all these teething kids but cant manage the biters! good section here Ya'll wont take advise, what you weaklings got planned tho? Cos your FUCKIN MOD STAFF NO SHOWS BATTLES...should'nt yall lead by example? nice shot Kill ya fam yo, ART been a bitch & this aint my top plan of attack kid We killing him for the Tag belt, Ya partner Empire... & we both think you a faggot! i get the slant, good sht what a waste of scubs, MOD powers got you trying to play tough Not homophobic But this assault rifle I pull will make you wish you were @ Orlando's Gay club This was decent man, lots of punches some good persona shots and use of ammo, a couple bits i wasn't mad about couple wording issues but a solid entry here man. Props |
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Posted: 19 June 2016 at 12:25am |
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Thanks for the feed yall
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Posted: 22 June 2016 at 1:42am |
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Well this drop surprised me,didn't think you did OM's for dome reason.
SEE... yall Mods is all bitch & Beans bout to Blast ya section Every verse from you dirty pussies reminds us of a Staff Infection Laughin segments.. I hope yall dont break out like Den Did I'm a monster shark W/sharp teeth bout to slaughter sum penguins! Plus the former "Text Champ" a snitch bitch who couldnt cop from me we know ART Aint gold dig'n cos he didnt join VIS after taking LAW's money!(C4C FGTS!) He jus a fallower fuck boy who agreed I beat Con's Face quick But knows I'll never be behind money's beat bitch ass.. like Kanye's Dick! Pray quick, that the gods teeth aint hungry for more grub ALL YALL FAGGOTS GON WACK, & I'm not talkin NEEK's history @ PornHUB! Maul this born dumb, Fat fuck..I shoot'em down & Beat'em Ironic he can Run airing PPL out here, but IRL cant walk a mile W/o weezing! believe me, you'll see Beans in ya dreams W/that fight stare Punch you out cold cos its obvious battlings ya biggest nightmare! (liked your punching prowess in this segmentyep you got at them well I thought,your general tempo was good here,the plays were decent too,the direct personal coupled with the up with direct and aimed aggression was Ripe,this part came off like this is something you wanted to say for awhile,venting with meaning so so to speak,i like it..) & that crew hoping FAGGOT been quiet & thats ya man NIGMA? Funny LAW aint spoke since EX & I burried the bitch somewhere in Canada! plus we gotta plan for ya..take my Gun, put it to ya head & pray W/em than have you dig'em up & pull the trigger....now NIGMA lay W/him! All I'm sayin is ADMINS think they nice, Cute & man are they fighters... Funny they welcome all these teething kids but cant manage the biters! Ya'll wont take advise, what you weaklings got planned tho? Cos your FUCKIN MOD STAFF NO SHOWS BATTLES...should'nt yall lead by example? Kill ya fam yo, ART been a bitch & this aint my top plan of attack kid We killing him for the Tag belt, Ya partner Empire... & we both think you a faggot! what a waste of scubs, MOD powers got you trying to play tough Not homophobic But this assault rifle I pull will make you wish you were @ Orlando's Gay club (This segment seemed to be more heavy than the prior one,you preach man,lol the punches here were dense and hard I thought,you did have a few wording issues here,but no matter,the Overal theme carried them well enough,good work here..) Overal good display of punches/personals in this piece,I also liked the direct approach too,coupled with the fact you had somethings you seem to want of your chest aggression,just added more weight to it..nice read..peace. |
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