Open Mic: Little Boy Brenn & Butt Hurt Stalin

As I begin,
phonies fear when troubled weather hits
storm rolls in
Only here to ruffle feathers bitch
little chicken shits dying for some feed back
flow reigning like royalty y’all better heed that
Never doubt the king snap your fucking knee caps
Back tracking statement’s like please don’t read that
Loved it like you wrote it, honestly believe that
Now Stalins all but hurt didn’t think I seen that
“Why’d you call my name out put me in the scope
Literally endorsed you said that you were dope
This is how you treat, people tryna feed you”
Ima made man, feed myself, I don’t need you
taken stabs across the board watch’em all bleed through
Every active member bout to get it, this a preview
A descriptive mystery with imagery depicting history
Why I’m clipping emcee’s causing wide spread misery
Welcome to the badlands handing out bitch slaps and back hands
Hell bent mad man send a message with a zippo and a gas can
Picture Stalin and Brenn tied together sittin on a love seat
Two friends fittin to die cookin with some rough heat
Want me to spark the flame? That’s a rhetorical question
I’ll burn that bitch alive to, add to the tension
Wonder why I mention, that hard to teach a lesson ?
Little boy brenn calls it an obsession
I’m just lighting fires looking for a session
Y’all bitching and complaining like it’s Armageddon
decapitate your arms and your motherfucking heads then
With a rusty razor end infection settin in
Two thousand twenty three and I’m just settlin in
Underneath your skin for the win that’s an upset
I’m in the underdogs den you never seen me rough yet
Disrespectful flow at ya throat like a cut neck
Right across your king corn get your fucking shirt wet

Edited by Slip - 13 January 2023 at 4:29am

You been writing here for almost 10 years.. and you rhymed "that" in four bars, 3 consecutively?? Thats rookie shit.

Are you slow? Like legitimately are you mentally challenged? It doesnt matter how many times i used the word you in a verse, because i was speaking to YOU. Thats me talking to you directly. I used you as an end rhyme twice..you did it four times and 3 times in a row.

And also look at the bars you quoted...

lyrically merkin you
physical fortitude
literally endorsing you

Those are like 7-8 bar syllables. you barely can do more than two syllables with complex rhyming. You are not on my level. Youre shit is basic as fuck. That explains this line..


You won 14, you lost 33.

How you even trying to talk when you lost 33 battles and only won 14?? Youre not good your record shows that.

I'll take the constructive criticism. But it wasnt a verse youd be putting on a song, just an in person, face to face battle verse, so the yous wouldnt matter much. But i respect your opinion on it. I started as a battle rapper. So if im responding to a diss, im doing it in the battle rap mentality. But ive also put out alot of work in the topical format. I lost to the winner of the biggest topical tournament this site has ever seen. Saying you'd merk me in topical, i think you underrating my ability, but you have your own opinion. Most of my open mics that got 5 stars were topical pieces. I wont say id destroy you like you did. But you wouldnt destroy me. Let the members suggest a topic, or put up pictures, if i see one i feel, we'll do it.

Also the diss i put out to you, was because i literally had no idea why you even mentioned me in the first place. I never had no problems with you.

Edited by Stalin - 15 January 2023 at 12:06am

Slip wrote: Why is this post hidden lol

No idea. Should not be hidden now.

Hey I mean Stalin and Jbren are my boys but God dam you murdered this shit right here lol.
Fucking off the chain. Insane flow read through like butter It reads just as hard as rapping it audio it's hard to transcend that feeling through words.

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taken stabs across the board watch’em all bleed through
Every active member bout to get it, this a preview

Thanks ash I’m guessing you didn’t read the little stab I took at you and flamer in my Fuck’em all post

taken stabs across the board watch’em all bleed through
Every active member bout to get it, this a preview

I’m true to my word beans just got it to #merked