Open Mic: Look to the sky

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Look to the sky, trying to find GOD in the clouds
Hoping when he looks down I don't get lost in the crowd
Greatness is for the taking, but who diserves it?
Just waiting and waiting for the truth to surface...
Our 'acts' are all timed, can't confuse the curtains
When its time to close, its YOU for certain
We die and others follow, so just supply another bottle
Live for today and quit CRYING about tommarow
Could have a heart of gold, the inside will be hollow
Cuz money is spent, but it's TIME that we barrow

short and sweet

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N8Ball Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 16 March 2009 Location: Gladwin Status: Offline Points: 282 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-8-0 Form: LLLLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote N8Ball Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Look to the sky Posted: 26 February 2010 at 10:09pm
	Look to the sky, trying to find GOD in the clouds Hoping when he looks down I don't get lost in the crowd Greatness is for the taking, but who diserves it? Just waiting and waiting for the truth to surface... Our 'acts' are all timed, can't confuse the curtains When its time to close, its YOU for certain We die and others follow, so just supply another bottle Live for today and quit CRYING about tommarow Could have a heart of gold, the inside will be hollow Cuz money is spent, but it's TIME that we barrow short and sweet
	Look to the sky to try n find god in the clouds hoping when he looks down i dont get lost in the crowd

Lucky D Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lucky D Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 February 2010 at 8:38pm
	Its really short, but it was a good read. Tha content was good. Keep it up


Stalin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2599 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Stalin Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 February 2010 at 1:48am
	Solid flow and rhymes thruout... way too short man. Wish u wouldve kept it goin. Had some very nice lines in there, lost in the crowd, you for certain, cry for tomorrow, all solid lines. No complaints about it. Keep it up

Sick-Witted Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 07 September 2008 Location: The USA Status: Offline Points: 601 Text Rank: #11 Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sick-Witted Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 February 2010 at 11:30pm
	Sick-Witted was here.
	Sick-Witted->means I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it

I-kontinue Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote I-kontinue Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 01 March 2010 at 1:24am
	This was cool... Woulda been better longer. No complaints like Stalin said... Decent Open Mic drop... Some good ideas you shoulda kept expanding one... Peace.