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Micsachek 
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 Topic: Mcwoods {vs} MicsachekPosted: 07 December 2006 at 6:00pm |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 6:02pm |
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due in 20 mins? lol i betr get written den.. good luck
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mcwoods
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 6:18pm |
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....... Yo Sean, this is a game of chess,
your the pawn, im the king, that makes me the best
just coz are records tha same, dont mean were even
ill beat u bad, and make u look like a stupid queer leavin
man, when i rhyme, its in real time, its strait form ma mind
so tell me why i had to lead, is your mind cursed?
u aint got no material, is that why i hadda go first?
It dont matter coz, u wont batter me
im mcwoods, and i dont get chopped down, by some new clown
who comes around ,begging me to rip this mad sound
man sean, ur called the rubberbandman*
well uve just snapped, and u cant stand, man
* his msn addy.
not bad, good luck to u, lets make this a decent battle lol
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mcwoods
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 6:20pm |
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take no offence btw, had nothing on u, so had to try and make summit up lol |
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Micsachek
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 6:46pm |
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{1}Better Hope-I-Die, When Voters Post Favorite Lines, They Never Quote-This-Dyke...
{2}While I Have This Battle Opposite To '53 Elections - No Votes-For-MiKE {3}Fam Ya Prattle-Is-Listless, And It's Known 'I Like Dead Chicks I'll Paddle Ya Mistress. I'll Paddle-Ya-Mistress...
{4}Standing On My Elevation? One Slip Till You Lyrically Fall-And-Die,
As You Leave This Round, I'll 'Laugh At Ya Exit', The Way I Sing 'Lullaby's.' (Lol-A-Bye) {5}My Speech-Is-So-Clever, Thats Why You Only Dream Of Ya Name When We Speak-Of-Who's-Better..
{6}Just Try And Topple Me, I'll Laugh As I "Destroy Your Barz" LIke "A Candy Maker That Lost Patience...
{7}And In The Battle His 'PUnchez Get Shaky' Like 'Professional Boxerz Fighting Parkinson's Patientz... [8}Mc's spits wouldn't be sick if he licked the snot off of sneeze guards at a salad bar,
{9}even back in his heyday at best money was "OK" like Gemcee's old avatar... {10}Burial Scene, Better Git-Da-Hearse, His Punches Arent Effective So His Fist-Get-Hurt!
{11}Im Quik 2 Rip-dis-Jerk, Cuz only time MC is A King/Aching Is After I Spit-My-Verse |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 6:49pm |
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ehhhhhhhhh .......... fair enuff, votes plz!!
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Micsachek
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 6:59pm |
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messed up i was typin fast uppin
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mcwoods
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Posted: 07 December 2006 at 7:01pm |
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lol same, na i liked urs, good content. - votes-
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Fatal
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 12:13am |
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Ok... MC: Nice elevation from you, ya flow drastically improved...still needs work on ya punches tho and ya still dont have any wordplay...but yo keep practising manChek: More advanced verse than MC's...structure was totally fucked...flow was choppy...However...punches were significantly better as was your wordplay even if it was indirect...But..HOW YOU GONNA WRITE DROP IN 20 MIN, N THEN TAKE 45 MINS TO DROP LOL
Vote: Micsachek...for more advanced drop wit better punches
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sparta
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 7:07am |
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MC, wasn't bad, butas Fatal said you need wordplay to improve your drops, and consider using more advanced rhyming too. Also, stop saying 'take no offence', man, if he did he wouldn't be battling...
Mics, pretty nice, your punches were too generic though, but it was a more advanced drop with some wordplay and nice rhyming, enough to take it v/ Micsacheck |
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Mackie
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 10:20am |
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im not voting on the account of missachecks verse lookin extremly bitten.. .. i have no proof.. bah who the fuck is Gemcee? her avater?... fonts change, size, wordplay change from bold to quotations... style switches.. hey maybe it is mayb it isnit... id vote bah in my eyes this a bite..
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mcwoods
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 11:11am |
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and biting is ?, using someone elses stuff? , wot happens den? id be surprised tho
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mcwoods
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 11:14am |
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thnx for voting btw!
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sparta
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 11:40am |
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I see what you mean Mack...looking at that again it def. looks bitten...the Mike line as well is extremely suspect...
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Mackie
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 12:18pm |
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thas why they call me sherlock
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dalinquent
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 12:34pm |
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no we call you sherlock so you'll think your important...besides, we can't call you talented
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mcwoods
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 12:36pm |
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k, so wot happens now, does this get transfered somewhere for inspection or is it just cancelled or does nothing happen?
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Demonic
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 12:55pm |
Lmao... Anyway Move to Battles Under Review |
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Fatal
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Posted: 08 December 2006 at 11:31pm |
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Honestly that was the first thing that came to my mind when i saw his drop, but since i aint seen him drop before i really aint push the subject props to mack |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 09 December 2006 at 11:37am |
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yeh, it looks stolen, but theres no way to tell, but if u look at the last line, he mentions a bit from my verse, " a king / aching" , so that cudnt be stolen, but the rest does look suspicious.
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