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NepentheZ 
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 Topic: Merkage....Posted: 04 February 2010 at 1:12am |
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Merkage
Tragedy isn't sad to see, its a fuckin' catastrophe stare death in the face as it stands up to just laugh at me I'm straight cut take a stab at me, your endeavors are flawed I'll murder all you little degenerate veteran whores I'm not messin', its raw, this shit in naturally fervent thats why you're all a-pathetic excuse, an' not the antonym version think the hazards are workin' against this rabid assassin... you has-been's are havin' a hard time, so try some last ditch attackin' you're past it you faggots, The crest is slain to shreds In the name of death, I'll slice open your jugular an' strain your necks think you takin' Nep? your gay scripts are worthless, see I'm rapin' these nerds as I stare down perverts in the face of adversity I've over come my fears, think this ain't a classic 'cos its not stanza sized? The 4 Horsemen get laid to rest as my verse is a basis to tranquilize you herbs want a proven challenge? Absurd what has truly happened Happy as Larry now, but this ain't no joke, so curb your enthusiasm. cursed with a stupid pattern, an' now you kids ain't coppin' the fear Emcee of the century no Tourney Winner, 'cos he's Mod of the Year Yeah I'm all that can run it, Chris Brown could only fall at the summit don't contemplate the cruelty, you muppets or a caution is comin' Yeah I'm bitter an' twisted this shit will slide through my digit's now my pride is indigent cos I can't even try to get in it..... |
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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King Jehu
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 6:00am |
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Great vocab, good metas, good rhymes, good aggression. Solid piece.
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Insert something rappy here
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Sick-Witted
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 6:00am |
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nice work NepZ, had quiet a few dope multis in there...
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Sick-Witted->means
I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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Alcatraz
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 6:25am |
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nice drop nep really gud multis and straight flow
Emcee of the century no Tourney Winner, 'cos he's Mod of the Year one of my favorite lines keep droppin
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 12:55pm |
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This was one of the most enjoyable pieces i'd ever read from you.
Really good read, with great vocab..
I'm straight cut take a stab at me, your endeavors are flawed
I'll murder all you little degenerate veteran whores ^^ my highlight for just how it flowed off the tongue, keep up
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:48am |
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Thanks for the feed people, lets get some more up in here...
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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MFJJ86
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 1:51am |
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Damn This was Fire... I liked the Opening and Closer
Enjoyed the Crazy Word Play...
Also the Meta's plus Rhyme Scheme
Keep them coming...
~1~ RESPECT
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Cuba
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 3:11pm |
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4 Horseman > Merkage This was slick though, funny, I liked the same line that Kiki did...just came off with so much venom, rhythm of it was vile...so many quotable's, fluid rhyming...excellent vocab (don't you just hate it when people say that to you like it's your best attribute...you know words son, props!), like Jehu said...was agressive, dug it...only thing I'd say is you didn't have one line/play that blew my brains out, otherwise...good drop
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 3:24pm |
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If there isn't 1 play that blew your brains out, then you're clearly not on my level.
 There is 1 piece of word play in there, that I must say, is fucking epic. Not my fault if you cant see it. Thanks for the feed though, wooooot. |
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Cuba
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 3:25pm |
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I'm above your level Neppo
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Posted: 08 February 2010 at 11:00pm |
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Hahahaha
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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